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first, and it was bad.
All right thanks for the criticism with absolutely no explanation as to why you think it is bad. Sorry you feel that way and hope you come back with valid reasons for your opinion, have a nice day
it was ok
6063180 Thank you for your input it really means a lot!
Alright now I'm really curious as to why this has 12 down votes? I still have to read the 2nd chapter but, I'm only here to judge the first one. It wasn't bad, you managed to write a seductive scene that was both hot and not pushing too bad. I knew what I was getting into because you gave plenty of warning. I happen to be a book worm so every now and then I read darker stuff and got curious about this and so far it was pretty tame so like I said I'm wondering at the down votes.
Now for my only critic. The seduction was a tad rushed. Maybe a bit more dialogue and cuddling or something. Seduction scenes shouldn't be rushed, just like real love you don't usually go straight from I love you to on your back, but that's really the only fix I see. Now on to chapter two to see what the fuss is all about.
That's it I'm totally confused? That was really sweet. Again though at some parts the pacing seemed to flux between fast n slow but not distractingly so. I am going to follow this story and see where it goes. I think the down votes are solely because you mentioned that there would be rape and ppl tend to backlash at that word without realizing that in literature it is actually used. N although its an awful, sick thing doesn't mean you should cover your ears n go 'lalalalalala' to ignore it. Keep going n make sure to watch you grammar I know how easy it is to slip when you're typing fast.
6067652 Wow that was very informative (and just to clarify I'm not at all being sarcastic here, I know how things can get misconstrued over the internet) and it gave me something tangible that I can improve on. Looking back on the first chapter now I can definitely see how that scene was rushed in, at the time I think I meant it as they'd both been having pent up feelings for so long that when the opportunity came they didn't deny it. However, I should have probably taken more time in writing the scene and the actions that led up to it. To be fair though I've been in the situation and it was rushed for me, but that shouldn't define every love scene and I'll acknowledge my mistake on that part. I sincerely thank you for your input as I was beginning to get really discouraged with the lack of feedback for the downvotes this was receiving.
You've given me a lot to think about in the third chapter though where there is no excuse of "they can't wait any longer" and it has to be a genuine seduction. For this I humbly extend my sincerest from of gratitude to you
Oh and I worked harder on the second chapter to make it feel more like it would be something the characters would say, so that may be more your usual style. Either way I hope you enjoy it!
Edit: Just now saw your second comment and again thank you for the input. Pacing is something I do need to work on and am currently doing more research into it and I will keep the wording in mind thank you :)
I haven't read this. I'm not going to read this. Why? Well, a number of reasons, but the biggest dealbreaker in this case is that you don't actually say what the story is about in the story synopsis, instead opting solely to give a warning about the content. The latter is fine in and of itself, but not by itself.
6073367 All right fair enough. I'll be fixing that today as well on starting the third chapter. Thank you for the input and I hope you have a great day!
Noooo!!!
6089588 Do not despair dear reader, Fluttercord shall prevail and in the end come out stronger for it. I myself am a huge Fluttercord fan (and am planning on doing a much lighter fanfiction between them in the near future) and I admit the fight was hard to write, in that my vision of them is the ideal couple, but Discord is essentially a child emotionally so it would make sense something like this would happen. I mean he almost sent a pony to another dimension for hanging out with Fluttershy (thus taking time alone with her from him), I could see him reacting much worse if they were in a relationship and he saw, or thought he saw, Fluttershy kissing somepony else.
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That's true and he tends to act jelly over the smallest of things so I understand. But it still hits in the feels!!! And I hope the story continues on to grow into more chapter. And I'm not forcing you at all!!! *cough cough* maybe * cough jk
And all jokes aside relationship tend to have Misunderstandings and it happens and it only helps the relationship grow and progress into something stronger.
6090269 Well you'll be glad to know I'm already working on the next chapter, however I'm going to warn you this one gets pretty dark. I'll place warnings before the serious things but I understand if you want to skip this chapter entirely. Also thank you for your replies and interest in this it really helps to know that people actually think my first work is at least half way decent
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No problem but I know this takes time and brain power. So thank you and just type it how you see it but keep it at a good pace.
i hope discord rescues fluttershy
6115180 Fear not dear reader Fluttercord shall prevail! Also I have a few surprises in store for the next Chapter that are going to shock and delight the reader, or well that's at least my intention
Also, I wanted to inquire on you're thoughts of the story so far? Any suggestions or criticisms?
6115463 I personally love this story! I'm always a sucker for Fluttercord and "damsel needs to be rescued from sexy evil villain by underdog and/or reformed villain" stories! XD Please continue, my good person!
6180231 Thank you so much it really helps a lot to hear that people enjoy the series! I'm sorry I haven't updated in a while, been busy wedding planning
! I'm working on the next chapter though and I intend to finish this and start another soon after. Oh also do you have any suggestions, criticism, or questions? I would be happy to hear them my good fellow!
whens the next chapter
6197688 Planning on having it out before this upcoming weekend, I'm sorry it took so long. I really feel bad about it, but I've been dealing with wedding plans and such for Halloween. I hope you all aren't too upset with the big delay!
I cannot WAIT for Discord to take High out!
High...you're going DOWN...
Also, I can't believe he went down the Cupcakes route!
Good thing this is a Fluttercord story! Discord can just use his magic when he rescues her and restore her wings! I did read a story where I think he have the wings back to Rainbow Dash, even though Pinkamena had them removed.
Anywho...I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter, but I think you mentioned something about wedding planning, so I'll be patient! :D
Keep up the good work!
6220008 Yeah my long-time boyfriend of almost two years proposed, and we've always wanted to have a Halloween wedding, so we've got three months. (We've done some things already just from talking about what we would want our wedding to be like if we did marry each other.) So I've got my work cut out for me
!
As for High N' Mighty, ooohhh I'm going to have fun with his demise down the road Mwhahahahaha
I'm glad I've made a villain that is truly despicable, even though he is hard to write for, and I'm certain some people are going to question my morals and sanity....but then again I know that I'm insane so no biggy
Also I really want to thank you for your comments, they've really made my day. I'm ecstatic that you enjoy the story and I hope you'll enjoy future updates. You're awesome my friend!
6220105 Thank you and I promise that I shall!
6220558 OOOOOOH, congrats! A Halloween wedding! That'll be so much fun to plan!
Also, your comment about High and planning his demise made me realize something. Hear me out! I liked this story without knowing why until now. Yes, I am a huge Fluttercord person, but this story is darker than I usually like my fan fiction. So I've been trying to figure out why I like it...but now I know!
It's almost like Game of Thrones. Fluttershy is Sansa, High is Geoffrey, and Discord is...I don't know, the Hound? XD But this works perfectly. Geoffrey and High N' Mighty are despicable characters. The more malicious and twisted they become, the more twisted their deaths will be. I don't know if you've read Game of Thrones, but this literally just came to me, and it makes sense to me! XD
My one request for this story, in terms of plot, is that Fluttershy's wings be restored when she returns to Discord. The way I see it: flight equals freedom. High has taken her freedom. But once she returns to her chaotic lover, she can be free again, and thus, have her wings restored with his chaotic magic.
Anyway, keep writing! And congrats again on your wedding, you'll have to give us more updates!!
6220558 Also, don't worry! All good writers have just the right amount of insanity to fuel their creativity!
I should know. Every morning I wake up, look in the mirror, and start challenging my reflection to a fight. Why? I don't know! It just gives me writing material! It helps me think! So, yay, we're both crazy!
No! Poor Flutters...
I don't think I'll be able to last! I desperately want to see Discord beat up this so called 'High and Mighty' dude
nrgh....I don't think I'll be able to wait for the next chapter*starts fidgeting nervously* what's gonna happen...I'm scarred but so excited, I love this!
please let the next chapter have discord finding fluttershy
6220610 Actually, while I have seen Game of Thrones I was just trying to make the most despicable villain I could imagine, though in hindsight that pretty much fits Geoffrey as well
Hooray for accidental allusion!
OOOHHHH another person who talks to their reflection huzzah my fellow maniac!
Also I plan to keep updates on the wedding when major things happen. So far the only thing set in stone is it is Phantom of the Opera themed, more specifically it is the Masquerade portion. We both love the movie and think that the Phantom should've ended up with Christine so we decided he'd be my Phantom :)
6222401 I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Also, don't worry about High... I've got big plans for him when Discord arrives mwhahahaha 
! The next chapter won't take as long to come out so I hope you don't spontaneously combust between now and then!
6224172 Psst if you want to know the answer look in this spoiler.
Yes he will
6225299 And I just realized that we've been spelling Joffrey's name wrong.
Also, that wedding theme sounds FREAKING AWESOME! You HAVE to upload pictures of it somewhere! It just sounds fabulous!
I can't wait for the next update
6225308 EEE!
I need to know what happens next
I resurrect the oh fanfiction of old, come back from the depths of fanfiction h3ll and rejoin the realm of the living! mwhahahaha!
Also couldn't resist, "It's alive!"
now i can't wait for more
Yay!
6675749 Thanks for the support!
I'm having my official 'thanksgiving' today so I won't be on the computer much to work on it I'm afraid, and tomorrow my hubby is taking me out on a date. BUT I shouldn't have anything planned in the upcoming week, so I'll be pulling overtime and giving myself carpal tunnel to produce the next chapter. Btw I hope you enjoyed the Chapter...even though it wasn't what it was supposed to be
6676386 Thank you for the support!
I hope you enjoyed the Chapter, even if it wasn't exactly 'as advertised' *nervous chuckling*
6676411 I just can't wait for more
I wonder what the baby will be like
6677827 *Rubs back off neck nervously* heh well me too actually, I'm mulling over several different looks but I need to find the time to attempt to draw them out and see how they look. If you have any suggestions feel free to PM me I promise not to bite....much
WAIT! Before anything...I need details! Details about the wedding! HOW WAS YOUR WEDDING?!
6679747 It was AMAZING
So we had the Overture as the song we came out to, as people we're being seated we had The Phantom of the Opera playing to get everyone in the mood, and as we marched out we had Masquerade playing (because our life from that point onward is one big party). Then at the reception we had the disk on loop because I'm too lazy to make a CD with specific songs XD
We had one BIG candelabra behind the Pastor (each candle was lit and looked so cool), and two smaller ones one either side of the guy. My husband made his own outfit, it was mostly a red military coat style with red pants, a plague doctor mask (he has....a unique shaped head very wide and none of the Phantom masks we found fit), a purple and black striped vest, a red cape draped over his right shoulder, a sword on the same side, and some nice dress boots. Our best man, our pug, was in a nice little grey and black striped tux with a bow tie, and my dress was white towards the top and faded into a light blue towards the bottom it had ruffled layers and the top was tied on like a corset.
The ceremony went well, except Stitch (our pug) got antsy and during the whole "speak now or forever hold your peace" bit he was whining like crazy and pacing. He was so cute afterwards though, he fell asleep on one of the pews because he'd been overexerting himself all day trying to play with every single person. We stuck him in the car and he fell asleep on his little blanket (technically my baby brother's but it was now commandeered by him). The reception went well got some gifts and well wishes.
I'm sure I don't need to tell you about the honeymoon
I'll tell you where we went though, we went to a state park and rented a cabin for the weekend Bowchickawowow XD
You spelled chaos wrong.
Wonderful second chapter. It was sweet and you got Fluttershy down pat I'm impressed.
She is strongest pony goodness you made me cry!
I can't wait to see the ending
I started chanting, "Kill him, kill him, kill him!" when I saw the name of the chapter...High is one of the most despicable villains I've ever read about!
Turning him into stone was a good punishment...but if I were Discord, I would have castrated him.