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The story of Fluttershy's journey through the Chaos King's Labyrinth, a book made into reality in her eyes, and with a side of Fluttercord of course.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 30 )

I absolutely adore Labyrinth and have always wanted to see a story where Discord was David Bowie, but Fluttershy is so OOC in this that I find it hard to enjoy. This is well written but it's also almost word for word exactly the same as the movie. This wouldn't bother me so much except that Fluttershy is not in any way the slightest bit like Sarah. I don't care how annoying the baby is or how evil her stepmother happens to be, Fluttershy would never wish away a baby or have an overdramatic teenager angst fit towards her parents.

Good: Labyrinth is one of my favorite movies! :twilightsmile: :yay: "Yay, It's Fluttercord." Bad: The only problem I have with it is the whole "Dance Magic Dance with Discord and the Changelings and a few Diamond Dogs". I'm a little disapointed that you didn't have the song actually in the story. :fluttershysad::fluttercry:

Hahaha "what did you do to me woman?!" Love the interaction between discord and zecora in this chapter ;)

No Cutie Mark Crusaders?!?! :applecry::unsuresweetie::scootangel:

Nice chapter! I like how well you mix the movie elements with your own! Keep it up!

yeah!! peach dream peach dream (:

Lol! Gosh the conversation with Zecora and Discoed was absolutely awesome!:rainbowlaugh:

YES! They kissed!! SQUEE!! This is really good and I can't wait for the next chapter!!:heart::heart::heart: I don't see why this has six dislikes, it's awesome!

Yay! Finally another chapter! Loved it!.......is it the ending?

Fluttercord wedding yay! And lol telletubbies

Discord must live! Your awesome Adenter1!

This is so awesome!!:heart: five star list!!!:pinkiecrazy:

Nice rhyme but you need to work on your meter, otherwise the verses are out of rhythm and Zecora always keeps her meter.

It's funny, because when I first watched the movie, my parents forced me to watch it, and the only fascinating part, was that white owl! Now, I come across this, and I was "oh wow!" that someone made this! So, I guess I am here now, to read!:applejackunsure:

Either I have bad memory, or it is new, but I don't remember the orthoros part, with anything being the creature.

This would have been better if it had been a dream. But it was still good, could have been better but it was OK.

“Oh but Discord it felt so right, can’t you feel the love tonight?” he could tell by her voice she was smirking.[/quote

*Inhale* CAN YOU FEEL THE LOVE TONIGHT!!!!!!

Sorry I had to

Good plot but not read out long enough, needs more content

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