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MartiantheGray
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MartiantheGray
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This gonna be good.
6016232 How the hell did you find this? It's barely been approved an hour ago!
Hmm, this has a gore tag. Will there be a large amount of gore or will it be a small amount?
Also I can't understand for the life of me why he would want to run away from Applejack, after all she is best pony.
6016591 quit lyeing to yourself. Everybody knows havokz da best pony
6016591
Not quite sure yet. I'm putting this together as I go, so if my thoughts take a turn for the violent, then there'll be a lot of maiming and rending. If not, there will be only implications of such things. I do know, however, that blood will be spilled at some point.
6016746
I love this guy!
6016494 It shows up nice and big in my feed because I follow you.
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Great start, my only gripe with it was that the swearing seemed just a tad excessive. But that's just me.
6016750 As long as everyone's favorite Apple Pony is safe then I will be fine.
6016746 Shut up, Applejack is best pony.
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6016814 Oh... I knew that...
6016865 This guy is a bit of a potty-mouth, so just know that it's in his character to swear liberally.
6016988 Don't worry, she'll be just fine. I may even find some way to have them properly meet without all the screams of terror later.
Interesting story so far, I hope you keep it up.
6017276 Thanks, man. Everything seems to be clearing up for now, and I'm getting a better idea of which direction I want to take this story. If I've got the time, you best bet I'll get to the next chapter.
6016865 I find it rather amusing, it just seems so out of place in happy pony land and that makes me laugh.
6017289 That's kinda the point. Like he said in the most recent chapter, he feels wrong just being there, as though he doesn't belong. His behavior and morals are kind of a foil to how the rest of Ponyland is.
6016999
*glances at AJ
*grins maniacally
*glances at sweet apple acres apple trees
*pulls out flamethrower
Now witch field do I want to start with
6017354 You're just jealous because your best pony isn't as cool as mine.
That was oddly specific...
Ok, ya haven't really described the man character yet... But he sounds very black, lol.
Oh wow, we love your story, Martian! How do you do it? We are so positively interested in this story that we always leave likes and comment on anything we have opinions about! WILL YOU BIRTH OUR CHILDREN!!!
Now calm down, guys, one at a time. Don't everyone comment at once.
...I'm so lonely...
6022975
What am I, chopped liver?
6023111 I dunno, are you?
6024117
Is this an oblique way of telling me that you want to eat me?
6024130 I'm not into that! Besides, you're only still around because of my money! Not my oh so charming personality!
What's homework like? I've never had any. Is it any different than normal schoolwork?
6026687 It's like schoolwork that you take home, hence the name homework.
...I genuinely can't tell if you guys are joking or not. I'm not sure I want to know.
6022975 bro.... This story is the most successful story I've ever seen on this site. Not a single dislike and 20 likes
That's like... 100% of the people who read it like it
6030702 Thanks, bro!
Glad you think so. I'm also happy that people actually take the time to read this, considering I only put about an hour's work into each chapter.
BUT! Now that you said there are no dislikes (don't really matter when such a small number of people have read this story, in the grand scheme of things) I'm now expecting the next "cool guy" who drops by to leave a red stain all over the bar.
I don't really have much of an opinion on it at all yet, because I am still waiting for the plot to kick in. Until then, there's really nothing much to say.
6034780 I'm kinda flying by the seat of my pants right now, but hopefully the next chapter will clear some things up. There have been minor hints throughout the other chapters at things happening behind the scenes, but I'm not planning on thrusting it all out in the open at once.
6034884
Maybe you're being a bit too subtle about it, then, because while it was certainly entertaining to read, it also felt a bit aimless to me. Things certainly happen, but more or less without context or any real indication of where you're going with it, so far.
6034984 The fruit and the spirit are key factors. And while this is meant to be written mainly as entertainment for myself and others since, as I have stated earlier, I have no aim just yet, I am attempting to insert bits and pieces into the story that readers must be mindful of if they want to glean anything of the plot. The idea is becoming clearer to me as to where I want to guide this story, but most of these chapters are spontaneously written and there is still a bit more time needed to get the ball truly rolling.
It's an emu isn't it?
6036991 God fucking dammit!
I'm tracking stories that update twice a year, so Imma say that three days between chapters is not lazy.
6052705 Glad to hear that! I have been putting an awful lot of thought into how I was gonna keep the story interesting without losing the base I've gathered, so I guess I'm only labeling this as laziness because of the fact that it could have been out sooner.
I was wondering why this story wasn't updating and then it hit me, I forgot to follow it!
6057376
This comment right here! I'm actually working on the next chapter right now. I'mma give it a few more minutes of my time before I head to bed and complete it this weekend.
Fuckin bastards
You need to have another human come in with a 44 magnum and save the day before he gets eaten
6062716 It does sound like they're going to carve him up into beef jerky, doesn't it? You just helped me with the boss's character more than you think with this comment.
6062725 really
? Well then your welcome freind!!!
Are you gonna have a human charge in on his trusty dinosaur steed with a 44. Magnum and save the day?
6062735 Not quite. Ladarion is definitely the only human on this world, and it's going to stay that way for the foreseeable future (unless something comes up while I'm writing that makes the presence of another human somehow make sense).
Also, there will be no magnum revolvers or dinosaur riding from what I envision about this story. Sorry if that disappoints.
6062742
no Dino riding.... But... Its IN
........
CANNOT INTO SCATHING COMMENT.
FOR THIS IS BRILLIANT!
6064206
For some reason, I imagine our main character as Scout from TF2.
Just.. the attitude, his dialogue, the fact that he's a fast runner, and his actions so far just seem... Scout-like, I guess.
6068085 Now this is an interesting comment. I haven't described the main character yet, have I?
I did this for two reasons: Reason one is describing him in the first few chapters would come across as a bit rushed and forced, not giving the reader any room to speculate as to how he could look. I gradually am giving some physical descriptions about his weight, height, and the clothes he wears.
The second reason is because I wanted to focus more on his interactions with the world around him than how he looks, and I wanted the readers to fill in the blanks themselves for how the character looks based off of the small amount of information I gave in the story. He will be described in a short while, though, and I'll do my best to make it as "natural" as possible when he is described.
Well, he just got up after being held captive at least two days. After only eating once, and getting magic pumped into his body to take the place of muscle mass temporarily. That's all the excuse you need to explain away why he almost got his ass kicked by a griffin. It is also valid and enough to defend the fight on those grounds. Also, the vindictive twist of breaking one of her wings is a nice touch, and appropriately evil in that it gives her a twisted and broken hope to be able to fly straight ever again, even if her wing heals right. Plus, it will leave a lasting emotional scar of sheer terror every time she sees a weird biped. Like a one horned Minotaur, or a sickly one until she sees its horns, thus permanently torturing her and forcing her almost completely away from two nations, and leaving her in a country who a third of which flies straight and true and another third of which can actually push around her dead weight and the last third possesses mastery in varied and many more valuable skills than her. So he killed her indirectly with one crippling blow.