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SpitFlame


A writer should be like fine wine: get better with age.

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This story is a sequel to Elements of Honor


The disingenuous scheme planned against both Princess Celestia and Princess Luna was finally set to rest, or so all thought. After two years, a revelation soon surfaces; and a threat, dark and terrible, is imminent. The reluctant Corvo is thrust into a situation of careless trust: to join the very ponies he's bitterly unsure of in company. He does, after all, have his own reasons for doing so.

-MLP/Dishonored Crossover

►[Former] Pre-reader and proof-reader: Bootsy Slickmane

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 16 )

I absolutely love this story, just as much as I did the story before it. Can't wait to see more on this, so keep up the good work! :pinkiesmile:

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Thanks, man! I really appreciate the motivation.

I'm enjoying this, go on my good sir! (This story rates for me a solid 10/10! :pinkiehappy:)

"What did you feel?" asked Spike, looking from the ground to Corvo like he were struggling to decide on something. "I mean, what did you feel when you, um, you know, shot those ponies."

Corvo shrugged. "Recoil."

That seems like something Corvo would say if im going to be honest. Anyway, cant wait to see where this goes next good sir!

Over using abjectives, keep an eye on that

Now this chapter right here? Well worth the wait, if i I dont say so myself! I find that this story is one of the few that i can stand reading 18k words of in one sitting without growing bored. Bravo sir!

Corvo still manages to amaze me with every move he makes, but you most of all author, you amaze me the most with how well you can conjure up a story! Bravo!

Simply marvelous my Friend! I can't wait to see if there is anymore added to this work of art, and any future works of yours!

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Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

No need to apologize for such a simple wait for such a grand chapter! I was shocked to find that Corvo was found out. Now all I wonder is What will happen when they return from Equestria? How on earth will they explain where they went? No matter how long of a wait it could be, something written this well is worth it good sir.

Of all the things i was expecting, this was not one of them. Not sure how this is gonna go to be honest. Nonetheless, well worth the wait!

Interesting end to a great story. Glad I stuck around for this long.

While it is sad to see that this marks the end of the journey, I must say that this was quite an ending to one of the best stories I've read. Cheers to wherever you go next!

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