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lady Phoenix


Hiya, I'm Ana and I'm not what you call normal. Im actual part phoenix. But shhh its a secret! Anyway hope you enjoy my stories, otherwise why are you here reading this? Oh hi Wade, I loved the film

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Meet Alex Smith, he isn't what you would call a normal guy. To break his repetitive cycle he went to his first convention. Once he awakens he finds something startling, exciting and also scary. Will he learn how to cope or will he fall. You know what they say, if you can't adapt, you perish.

P.S Looking for editor for this story :)

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 203 )

Mihawk in Equestria?
Regardless of style, it has promise.
I'll throw it in my 'read later' section, because it's 2:30am

Good so far, like Rikusor said, it has promise.

Nice! I can't wait for next chapter! U got my fav!

I squeed when I saw a picture of Mihawk. I will be watching this.

Luffy tots could handle dat other devil fruit :)

5969393 I was thinking it because of his Red Hawk move I think its called, like a tastier of whats to come. But it was just a simple tribute to Ace. Oh well, either Luffy has got to get some new moves or a new power to take on Blackbeard. But apparently that is going to happen in september I think, If I remember right. The moves bit, not the power or blackbeard bit.

Yeah mihawk in equestria baby

"If you're having trouble getting popularity, just add you story to every single group."

No-one's saying you can't, I suppose. You go for it, tiger!:twilightsmile:

5969492 Hey you know what they say, if you don't do it big, don't do it at all :P . Or in this case if you don't spread it big.... and so on. Although that just makes it sound like a disease or something. Don't worry there isn't a cure for it either, no cream or anything, mwwhahaha. Anyway, I only added it to groups that were appropriate, well mostly.

Great start. When does this story start in the mlp timeline?

5969496 You mean work for right? That would be awesome, but the answer is yes.............. Ok you got me, its still a yes (no). But seriously, it saw it on youtube or something, can't really remember. Story of my life........... I think.
(P.S that was a joke, you can laugh now :/ )

5969514 Not yet decided, where would you like it, to start, I take suggestions. They may not have any impact, but it doesn't hurt. I'm more of go with the flow or do what ever feels right, rather than planing it out sort of guy.

5969527 Hmm personally i say he should end up sometime in season 1. That way he could get more involved in the events of the series. We could see more on how he would affect and change things.

5969520 Also, Mihawk would destroy Tirek

(Hint hint)

5969538 Obviously I can't start it before the defeat of nightmare moon. It would have to be some time after Luna came back. So maybe season 2 ish? Or the very earliest near the end of season 1. Meh, I'll figure it out.

Interesting, can't wait to see more:pinkiehappy:

5969548 Maybe he wouldn't, you never know. They could be stronger than they look or the one piece could be weaker than they look, compared to other universes. Don't judge a book by its cover as they say. For example the force to destroy a table, for example, in one universe, could do more or less damage in another. The rules and etc are different.

5969586 I've seen what Tirek can do after he bums his power from other people, *cough* Moria *cough*

and I've seen what Mihawk could do before the two year time skip at the War of The Best.

In my own opinion, Mihawk would destroy Tirek.

Because he probably would just end him before he reached his final form.

With that strategy even Chopper could beat him, lol.

5969678 Probably, but it's not black and white. Mihawk may have the power and skill over Tirek, but to win a fight, you have to rely on so much more than that. Power, speed, environment, skill, experience, fighting style, endurance, strategy, instincts, weapons, and so much more.

5969697 Also, not much has been revealed about Mihawk actually. I can't wait till they actually address him in the series, really hash him out as a character.

But with that mentality, who do you think would win, Donflamingo or Tirek?

We basically know all about Mingo, what's your opinion?

5969715 Well......... as long as, Devil fruit powers are not like magic in MLP, in some way, and can't be drained by beings like Tirek. I would say Mingo.

5969715 Although keep in mind, it's not technically Mihawk, its someone else with his skills, body and such. You know, just a reminder :)

Or if you prefer, it is Mihawk, but someone controlling his actions, somewhat.

5969785 I really hope he doesn't cut a mountain in half by accident...

I lie :rainbowlaugh:

awesome a displaced story of my 3rd fave One Piece Character and Fave non-Devil Fruit User Dracule "Hawk-Eyes" Mihawk

5970049 You know, its not official if he has or doesn't have a devil fruit. Maybe he does have one, and thats why he is so strong with the sword? Just food for thought.

I normally don't like displaced stories,but for Mihawk I'll make an exception.

P.S. his sword is called Yoru and it's the world's finest sword.

5970424 Yep, I was just trying to make it more realistic, not all fans know the swords name you know. But thanks :)
Hope you like the story :)

All right. Faving and if you need an editor just ask someone you think might be able to do it for you :P

Nice work so far, just make sure you odn't fuck up and all that.

Keep going brah :P

5970499 Ill try not to, but is there any need for that language........... fecker? lol, oj :P

5970555 Just want to help and have some fnu.

Also waking up still.

If you need any help or an editor I'll help out, cause I feel like it XD

5970078 kinda defeats the purpose of his character though (you can attain power though hard work and willpower ), as a rolemodel of Zoro who wants to be as good as Mihawk it would be a cop-out if that power was effectively only a 'cheatcode', as it were.

5970627 I'm addressing that, in later chapters. And remember alex is from our world, not a cartoon world or anything. He wouldn't be able to beat anyone, even with training. and by anyone in mean anyone in mlp or one piece, well unless they were really really weak, and he had a gun or something. And originally I was thinking doing it about zoro, but like I said to someone else, no one has ever done a mihawk story like this, but they have done a zoro ones.

5971225 Your just jelly, because he looks good ;)

Went to see if new chapter of Gon X Equestria come out, saw your comment, came by, Extremely glad I did.

5973740 Glad you did too :P
Don't be afraid to like and fav it ;)

5970627 And besides, this is a displaced story. So it's not going to 100% Mihawk. Otherwise, I might as well send Mihawk instead of Alex.

I... I have to apologize for not reading this earlier... Good job. A few errors here and there... (Sorry for not pointing them out, but I don't really have time for such activities.)

Well, it is only like 2 days old. As for the spelling and such, I am looking for a good editor, what with me, having a certain type of handicap for that sort of thing. Oh and good picture :) , it suits the real you :D

5976833 Working on it, rough is "roughly" :P, at 90% but not sure I like it, might scrap it and do the chapter again, probably just edit it a lot instead. I want to get it right.

5969538 And I've just figured it out, when, in MLP timeline, this will be set :D
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5977040 Yep, Mihawk. Don't be afraid to fav and like it ;)
:D

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