The mane 5 have all become princesses, therefore they are still connected to the elements. However there is somepony missing from that. Will that pony realise what they need to do before their time?
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lady Phoenix
Hiya, I'm Ana and I'm not what you call normal. Im actual part phoenix. But shhh its a secret! Anyway hope you enjoy my stories, otherwise why are you here reading this? Oh hi Wade, I loved the film
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Da Feels :'(
LOVE IT
You have a BIG problem in this fic - word substitution. Using things like "threw" instead of "threw", mixing plurals and possesives, and in at least one case "where" instead of "were". Blow this off if you want, but you and your fics won't be taken seriously at all unless you either get an editor or be more careful about this word choice. The ending is also VERY sudden compared to the rest of the fic, it probably would have been better to make it one of the longest scenes, since it's the climax, instead of one of the shortest.
Yeah, the climax was a bit rushed but otherwise pretty good. Although the reason she's friends with Rarity is kinda...iffy, she made the dress that Soarin saw her in?really? But otherwise pretty good
So much bad grammar and misspellings. Also this same damn story was done just the other so it Is not original.
Im giving this a fav because I think this is what would Rainbow actually do, if she became a princess she would actually be disloyal to her husband. So for her to die so she can be with soarin is more fitting.
4607556 and make up and stuff like that, she helped her in other words
4607503 Just saying you put threw twice. And I see what i can do for the ending :D
I am kind of negatively conflicted with regard to all of these stories with all but 1 of the mane 6 being princesses and the one left out being Dash.
As it currently stands, if any pony would be next in line to be a princess, it would probably be Dash. Sure season 4 hasn't been that good to her, but she was fairly close as of the middle of season 3. AJ and Rarity seem pretty far away still, with Pinkie and Fluttershy in the middle.
If I were to order the ponies by when they became princesses, it would be Twi(obviously), Dash, Pinkie, Fluttershy, Rarity, and AJ(dragging her hooves).
4607806 True, but I think that is what would happened if they all became princesses but her. Anyway hope you liked it either way :)
However for me the order they are mostly like become a princess would be: Twilight, AJ (because she the most 'complete" there not that many episodes about her slipping up and etc, either because they writers don't know what to do with her, or she's about the best she can be), then maybe rainbow, fluttershy, pinkie, rarity
Although you might agree, my 'favourite pony /(s) is drawn between luna and fluttershy. But to be honest, my favourite character, is easily Discord. He's just my sense of humour, he just a lighter version of the joker, but has the power to what ever comes to mind is all.
the feels on the bus go round and round
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That it true but having a husband kinda changes that to a point. Why would she become immortal [Not true immortality I know] and never get to see her husband on the other side?
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Til death do us part.
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But death does not really exist, much like how time is simply a illusion. It's a concept created by human kind to get a better grasp on the workings of the universe. We've been dead for billions of years, our structure was made from the dust of space.
Lastly Marriage and Love is two different things. Marriage is simply the seal, not the bond between lovers.
4608194 life it self could be an illusion as well. We could be like in that theory of us lot being in a computer simulation or what ever it was. Or there's many and many others.
It was an all right story. I give it a solid 6.5 out of ten. There were a few instances when the sentences should have been split or differently worded, might want to watch for that in the future.
4697679 Thanks :D
And english isn't my strong point, even though it the only language I know fluently.
I am almost craying, that is amazing, i read it like 100000000000 times...
The Last Rainbow was a beautiful story
it.
4781136 4872160 Thanks glad you like it :D
DAMMIT!
DAMMITT!
Who does it hurt so much?!
Why do I cry?!
Why.
DAMMIT!
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Because she (Dashie) didn't want to become a princess.
That's how she wanted to go out.