Hey fellas. I'm Freddy, and these are my friends Bonnie, Chica, and Foxy. We were sent to this place called Equestria after buying something from a merchant. We each bought a part missing from our costumes, and after buying it, my friends and I woke up in the middle of a forest, as the characters we went to the comic con as.
But, as we meet with the population of cheerful ponies, not everything is as it seems. Mass disappearance of children in towns? Constant nightmares of two headed figures that act like spiders? Mysterious music boxes playing eerily familiar music? It looks like it's up the Freddy Fazbear and Friends to save the day (but mostly the children).
Chapters (14)
Please let Golden Freddy and his guys be the ones to educate these four about other Displaced! I can imagine how they'd react to meeting his versions of the FNAF crew...(Bonnie the Sith Sentinel, Pirate Foxy, Old Chica with the manners of TF2's Heavy)
6034033 I couldn't imagine anyone else to do the job. But it would have to wait for a few chapters (maybe chapter 7 if I follow my outline), because I plan to have my Freddys' gang meet their universe's golden freddy, and deal with it before meeting another golden freddy.
6034049 If that Golden Freddy is also a Displaced then he and Sir Freddy may have problems. *announcer voice: let's get ready to RUUUMBLLLLE!* and anyway that's fine. Just lemme know when you wanna get started.
6034072 Well, my Fnaf golden freddy is just one of those guys from the universe the displaced's form is from. I was planning on making him similar to how he was in the games.
6034095 Does that mean that the security guards will be there (even if ponyfied)?
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6034151 yep. Also, that picture looks good, but I noticed something in it that bothers me. The security guard isn't wearing purple. Aren't the security guards thought to be purple?
6034168 I think it's just a way to distinguish the killer.
Good story in general. I never really liked the FNAF games, since it was just always brought up, but this is an interesting concept.
One thing that I didn't like though, is how they took it so easily. Turning into an animatronic? Any sane person would probably freak out, and just, maybe and possibly go crazy. They took it easily. They were of course confused, and scared by it, but after that, they just took it fine.
Love the story though.
I just love how most displaced stories start out in everfree and the Three CMC are in a near death situation cliche
6034675 They're animatronics, so they don't have that many emotions anymore. Probably the only ones they feel are the one the FNAF animatronics were programmed to show to the children.
Definitely watching this. Nice job!
It was good! Pretty well written, you definitely have a talent. I'll keep reading the next few chapters to see how the plot progresses, so don't stop writing!
Hmmm... curiouser and curiouser...
This has potential, I will be watching this closely,
Don't disappoint me.
6038357 Aww man, I was going to disappoint everyone. Now I can't.
6038455 in the words of Ursula:
"My dear sweet child, it's what I live for."
-Ursula
6039322 Why does that name 'Ursula' sound familiar? Is it something from shakespeare?
6039342 close,
It's from disney.
6039368 Wait, emperor's new groove?
6039379 You're thinking Ezma. Ursula is the half-octopus sea witch from The Little Mermaid.
i like it
i hope u dont crossover this story tho
6040300 what?
6040306 i love displaced stories but i find crossovers with other displaced stories 2 b teedius (is that how u spell it?)
why cant i find a dicplaced story that is its on self-contained story?
its just a pet peeve of mine
sorry for the confusion
6040784 Oh, well, I do plan to do crossover's for this story in the future.
But most displaced stories will have crossovers just because some displaced like helping others. It's all a connected series of universes, so it's unlikely that one story won't have crossovers with another.
6039379 The little mermaid.
Broadway version
I get it now Red means their hardwired instincts and Blue is their human mind
6043381 yes basically, but the red is also to represent the child's soul (the one that was murdered and put in the suit)
Heh, begin, five nights in ponyville. Hehehehe!
Yeah! Keep going!
Awesome chapter! Am I up soon though?
6060003 yeah, depends on how I make the next chapter. I would either have two more chapters, or one longer one. I'll probably make the longer one, and then we can do a crossover. But now I got to work on my other stories.
Death to the night guard!
This is a interesting new story, one I will keep a eye on if, for nothing else, the sheer craziness of four murder bots.
WHY DID I NOT ADD THIS TO MY FAVORITES SOONER?! Gah, I Am Upset With Myself Now...
Best Regards,
Prophet_Of_Madness
The return of purple guy!
Golden Freddy Is Merely The Beginning. More Will Come, More Will Strike, And They Will Need To Be Ready.
Best Regards,
Prophet_Of_Madness
In the beginning there were five animatronic then one went ape eh it crazy and started killing things
-Alice, Alice in Wonderland
Shit just hit the fan, folks! SHIT JUST HIT THE FAN!!!
Good story, btw, keep up the good work!
The Golden freddy lazer joke, that was pretty funny.
6088587 I made a joke about Golden Freddy's laser beam?
6088848 I have a random sense of humor.
Now it make me think what is going to happen if your characters meet the Displaced Golden Freedy, and also it make me question...
What about the other animatronics like Toy Chica, Ballon Boy, Springtrap and "The Puppet"? Are they going to appear?
They move quicky in the game? In theory 1 second for us is around 5 or 10 minutes in the game, it seems that they move very quick because the time move at high speed.
Ninja my name is Archon the MANIC.
Not maniAc!
(I'm not good with being tactful in correcting people)
6114991 sorry. Small typo.
The puppet attack again... They need to learn to do something, or maybe call for reinforcements.
You are a horrible person for killing button
6172052 I feel bad about it, but i needed to progress the story. I hate it when children are harmed, and the freddy gang will get revenge on purple guy.
WWWWWHHHHHHYYYYY MUST BUTTON MASH DIE!!!
Wish Jason Voorhees was here to kill Purple guy.
Ultimate rage mode!
will every purple unicorn die?
more please!