Aspiring to live under a bridge, but the man keeps holding me down.
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When the Cutie Mark Crusaders ruin Applejack's stetson hat, Big Macintosh offers to take it to Rarity's boutique in order to get it repaired. But was that the only reason he's going there?
Takes place pre-Season 5.
Special thanks to TheDizzyDan and Scootareader for proofreading and editing and cleaning this story up in general.
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spike will be mad
Awesome! Can't wait for more
Faved
Mac, you sneaking sneak.
Good story. It could use a little more imagery and detail here and there, but that's not a huge issue. The major concern I found with it was that the dialogue seemed just a little bit unnatural and kind of forced. Just trying to help here!
I like it! Good short story!
And as someone said before spiie will be mad!
Ha Ha I like everyone thinks spike will be mad, I wasn't originally but now I think I may eventually incorporate spike being jealous into the story in future chapters.
Ah Rarity+Big Macintosh one of the rarest ships ever created.
This is good for a start and definitely better than the numerous Fluttershy+Big Macintosh ship fics.
Go for it, Big Mac.
I'm really looking forward to see how this turns out
cant wait to see where this goes
Glad to see Pinkie Pie offer some sound advice.
P.S.: I have a feeling Spike is going to be so jealous of Big Mac.
Ah the scene with Sweetie Belle and Big Mac was adorable and everything after it as well. This is great.
Also to quote Sokka from Avatar The Last Airbender "Smoochie smoochie someone's in LOVE"
Aw snap!
Hmmm. Not too bad so far, let us see what happens..............
This is great! I can really picture the scenes! Not too much details but enough to set the stage! Keep up the great work!
Huh... Now that I think about it. I don't think I've ever seen a "Pinkie Pie and Big Macintosh" shipping story!
And there's one part in the story that looked a bit off " She really hard started to take a liking to the big red stallion."
The story's great can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm putting this story on the wayside to work on my two other fics, The Secrets of Twilight Sparkle's Past Future, and Trixie: The Fall and Redemption. Don't worry though, I will finish this eventually.
Damn, was hoping to finish this on first, as it is the one I started reading first!
Oh well, guess I'll have to wait.
I believe it was rainbow dash who was the first to get her cutie mark...
I found some errors in the first and second chapter, also this seems really....rushed I guess....I don't know,I like it don't get me wrong but the word for a little female pony is filly while the one for adult is mare, also adult male is colt...not sure about the young male one though.
793409 Actually, adult male is Stallion. Male youth is colt. This was my very first fic, and I was pretty inexperienced when writing this. Thanks for pointing that out though, I'll change that right up.
610908 Found a view errors in this chapter as well, also...I did not like how Big Mac just asked her out and she agreed without even really thinking about it, I'll give it a chance becuase I find this pariing well thought of, but you need to slow it down, also, try to explain her feelings for him and please try not to bring Spike into this, it's bad enough that there are so many Spike/Rarity pairings (but that's my own view on how much I despise the pairing) hoping to see more, will be tracking. Also ,please tell me that there is Spike/Twilight romance in The Secrets of Twilight Sparkle's Past Future.
By the way...caplize the F in your pen name.
Umm in the original The Secrets of.... it turns into some crappy Twidash romance. If you've read my comments on the story, you'll know I kind of screwed up my feature box fic. It was just way too rushed and bad. I am actually rewriting it with some editor help, and I'll have the first chapter of the new story up quite soon. It's going to turn out different from the original, so who knows I might make it Twi/spike. I don't know yet.
I also see that you seem to enjoy romance fics. Have you heard of Jenova2? He's had some feature fics on the site. He also recently did something pretty stupid where he stole someone's fic in an attempt to give it more publicity or something. Anyways, he happens to be my older brother and he recently came home from college. I've been working with him on a new fic, a romance, called "Fashions fade, Style is Eternal," basically a 2nd person fic between you and Rarity. He submitted it earlier today, so yeah when it comes up you might want to take a look at it.
Lol is it really that important if I capitalize the f in my pen name? I kinda like it uncapitalized because it just adds to the stupidity of my pen name, which I enjoy. If it hurts my publicity a little? So what. I've already got a feature box fic under my belt. That's all I can ask.
Anyways, thanks for the nice comment. I'll try to fix those errors and I'll take into account what you said I should do when I continue this. I'll try not to disappoint you
793449 K fine I actually change my mind, I'll capitalize it
793745 Thanks, Magee
I'm honestly hoping for The Secrets of Twilight Sparkle's Past Future to be Twilight/Spike, I mean while I don't mind Twidash, there are a LOT of them...and I do mean a LOT.....it's honestly getting sort of old. I'm hoping that you do re-write it, for while I was reading some of it, I though it was really rushed a sort of did not make sense, no offense to you...I really enjoy your story and hear that your a really good writer. I have heard of him and yes I heard how he done soemthing such as that...I don't know, I mean I like Rarity (long as she has no romance with Spike) but I don't like, I think it's second person view or something, it's sort of werid and odd to me, no offense to the writer though.
Yes, it is.....it shows that you are professional, not just by your writing skills but by how you present yourself, if you have not noticed by now, I'm very professional in all of my writing, even when I'm writing to friends, family and author or pony friends that's because it's engraved into my system and I need to prove to others that I can act....I guess wise?
Never a problem, I got your back (though I'm pretty sure you don't need it, with your skills) and I'm hoping to see more of this story, I really enjoyed it.
I thank you for saying such but I not that important, just try not to disappoint your fans and pony friends (which I hope includes myself 
)
I'm glad, keep on fighting in the writing war!!!
Well... THAT was one major run-on sentence!
Those Diamond Dogs picked the wrong pony to ponynap, once Big Macintosh gets through with them they won't know what hit em!
Glad to see you’re back I had almost given up hope. Keep up the good work.
1321551 Haha I was never gone, I was just doing other stuff here (with a lot success actually). However, I recently felt like I needed to finish what I started with this fic
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I read the description and giggled a lot, then said "Oh my god" to myself.
This could totally be a real episode.
Going on my read later list. I need to see how this works out.
Let's see they have harmed his crush, checked; messed up her shop and possibly AJ's hat, check; interrupted his date, check; ok then let me search for some epic fighting music... hmm... do you want modern or orchestral?
So far an pretty interesting story, interesting twist on have Big Mac being the one to be forward instead of Rarity, then again most of the RariMac fics I've seen tend to follow her instead of Mac.
1322192 So I take the uniqueness of it following Big Mac is a good thing?
Thanks!
1322206
In the fanfiction world, oh hell yeah. Now if you will excuse me I must go find the epic fighting music
1322261 Please do, you'll probably need it for the next chapter
See what you get for badgering the author long enough!!! A story taken out of hiatus and being
written again!!!!!
1322269 This. Was. Awesome!!!! Hope they're prepared for a Big Mac beat down!!!
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That's definitely going to make rarity swoon!!!
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It's got to be the classic epic fighting music:
1322881 Yup, I've come to come to realize that this probably actually is my best story overall (the thumbs up/down ratio definitely seems to point towards that), thus I shouldn't neglect it.
I'm glad you enjoyed this next chapter so much, everyone can pretty much thank you for it and all the chapters to come.
Did the fourth chapter even seem like the same story written by the same author? I've grown so much as a writer since May, and I'm assuming it was better since nobody's down-voted it, but idk. Any advice is always appreciated.
Haha, the Mortal Kombat theme does seem like a good choice for the next chapter
.
1327515 Well, all that the like/dislike is showing is that someone on here is a bucking moron!!
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Yeah, the new chapter is good, and even though it has more words, it just kind of felt shorter. I will have to re-read
the earlier chapters to see if there is a noticeable difference at all, of course you could rewrite them in your more up
to date style, but then you'd be taking advice from someone who got an E in GCSE English....twice!!! And I'm from the
damn place where it originates!!!! So yeah ignore this bit as I obviously don't know what I'm talking about!!!
And for the music, that was all I could think of at the time, but now I have these:
Or for a slow time battle, (well pretty much anything by these guys, their music is just so epic)
The good old CMC...
They made those emoticons specifically for this story.
1364689 So the story's good in your opinion?
1364705 Yes, now make with a new chapter all ready, or else...
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Looks like I'll have to send AJ to crack the whip and keep you on task!!!!
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1365585 Oh no! Not an incredibly attractive Applejack whipping me to keep on me on track! Anything but that!
And obviously don't wanna mess with a crazy Twilight either. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
I was actually going to work on the next chapter during the server switch. Hopefully I'll have it up by tonight!
You really like this story, don't you? Was it painful for you when I decided to put this on hiatus all the way back in May?
1365612 Oh yeah!!! I have been keeping an eye on it since then,
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(everypony's favourite stalker!!!) in the hopes it would get an update!!!
1364705 Oh, what the hell? The damn site didn't notify me that you replied to my comment! Yeah, it seems pretty good so far (Not like I've read anything beyond the first chapter). I like how it's all turning out though. It's a good way for Macintosh to end up going to Rarity's boutique. Damn those Crusaders; they're always making someponies hook up.
What's this I see as I wake up?
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A new chapter? Awesome!!!
Oh Big Mac, whoever thought you could take so little to be knocked out......
Oh well, time to bring bucking Armageddon to the Diamond Dogs!!!!!!!!
1373277 It's featured right now lol. By the way, your picture didn't work.
And what do you mean so little? He basically galloped headfirst into a rock wall.
Did you like this chapter?
Oh. My. God. I just finished reading a story I was into, only to find out that this AND another story I'm loving have both been updated?
So much for my sleep plans. I'll edit this comment after reading, but I already know it's gonna be fantastic.
EDIT: Yup, I knew it! Amazing chapter, though a bit short for my taste (or maybe I just read too fast. Who knows?). Also, am I the only one expecting Big Mac to just kick that damn door down and take out the Diamond Dogs? I mean, it's just a wooden door, and given the urgency of the situation, I bet he could do it.