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RS-Belle14


I'm the best at what I do: being late. I also write stories, commission art, and translate between English and Spanish.

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This story is a sequel to Sweetie Belle's Sweet Birthday


After Sweetie Belle's Cuteceñera, Sweetie Belle and Spike are now officially an item. Everything starts out fine for the happy couple, but nothing is perfect all the time, especially young love. When Sweetie Belle begins to feel very self-conscious about her looks, Spike decides to sit her down and ask her a very important question: "What do you see?"

NOTE: While this is a sequel, this story in particular is also a bit of a standalone.

Second story in The Love Life of Sweetie Belle and Spike series.

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Comments ( 46 )

This was very well done. No words can describe how beautifully well written this was. I hope you continue with these stories. Kinda sucks that Hondo had to ruin the moment.

7233349 thank you so much. I ended it that way for a reason, though. Saving the magic for the right time ;)

7233562 Eh, guess you have a good point there. But overall I loved the story.

7233569 Thank you. Don't worry, they'll get that kiss in the future ;)

Excellent story can't wait for more
Spainsh Spike Oh'ley :moustache:

Well this was a story it does count as one. I did like this, it wasn't as good as the first there was high points and low points. If I was going to pick out the bad parts it would be nitpicking but Spanish Spike not every one is going to know what he said because most people on this site is English because you can only created stories in English.

Also shameless plug time, so does Spanish Spike and Broken Robin when she's speaking Spanish just go out for coffee every Tuesday?

7233691 There will be :) as long there's enough people who want it.

7233711 The only thing he said in Spanish was 'corazon' which means heart. Sorry, I don't know who Broken Robin is.

My only concern is that they seems ot be speaking very maturely for little kids. How old are they supposed to be?

Other than that, this was fantastic. Very sweet, mushy in all the good ways, cute, and heart warming. :twilightsmile:

7234427 I leave their age ambiguous because I want them to be a little mature but still be innocent. If I had to guess, they're somewhere between 12-14 in this universe. Thank you for liking my story :raritystarry:

7234043 The fact that Sweetie Belle is the one who says that makes it all the more better.

7234812 I find the fact that she still talks to her stuffed plushies not only adorable but totally in-character for her.

7234819 Ha. I was hoping people would.

Oh come on let them kiss

7241387 I'm saving that special moment for later in the series. Maybe next time ;)

7241471 It'll happen. I promise :scootangel:

:heart: the ending! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Sweetie Belle pulled Spike's head closer to her as Spike used his arms to gently hold her. With only a few inches between their faces, Sweetie and Spike closed their eyes, leaned in, puckered their lips, and-

*BANG!* Sweetie Belle's door opened to reveal Hondo Flanks, crossing his arms and giving the two young lovers a look. "Not. Yet."

7241673 Ha. Thank you :twilightsmile:. Just saving that magical moment for later ;)

>>RS-Belle14 Well, you did it in the funniest way possible! :heart::rainbowlaugh::derpytongue2:

7247490 Ha you think so? Mission accomplished :rainbowdetermined2:

Awww, i really like it

7250337 Thank you! I'm really glad you do :twilightsmile:

You tease. Good story tho.

7378803 I do tease. Maybe next time, though :raritywink:. Thanks

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The thing that make it funny is how we imagine it : and my imagination make it hilarious. No seriously, the way he entered, the look on his face and most importantly the tone of his voice. I was like that when I read it : :rainbowlaugh: and like that when I imagine it : :rainbowwild:

The things I do for love
The things I do for love....
"the things I do for love" ~courage the cowardly dog reference there

7512489 Glad someone caught that.

and second part read in sequence, and Cookie is gonna break her skillet when she finds out he interrupted such a moment.

7520342 Ha. Maybe. We'll see what happens when I post the next sequel.

boy i cant wait to see what happens next! :)

7568791 Ha. Trust me, there's going to be a lot of things happening. I just have to get a few things out of the way first :twilightsheepish:

Scootaloo jumped back. "Where'd you come from?!"
Sweetie shrugged. "Rarity said she'd explain it to me someday

lol

Goddamn it hondo! Super cute and wonderful sequel to the origional.

8729943
Ha. He is that kind of parent. Thanks! There will be more to come.

8733441
Well, at least Hondo’s one of the good guys.

He’s just someone who cares for his family, his daughter, and even Spike as we saw in this story.

I’m ready for the sequel. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

--LoveandEdify

10036637
I will make the sequel this year.

10039553
Sounds great. 😁😁😁:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Looking forward to it.

--LoveandEdify

Not that I noticed but is it strange that Apple Bloom and Scootaloo have just as the strong but same feelings for Spike as well?

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