Spike confesses his love to Rarity only to be rejected. Hurt, he goes to every and anypony whom he thinks can help him change to become somepony that could win her heart. But when they all say the same thing, it'll be up to the Cutie Mark Crusaders help him find love with Rarity. Or will she have her own plans for the young dragon?
This is my first fanfic. I'd like to thank Shadowghostalex for editing my work, ShadowSpider for proof reading and LavendarRegards for proof reading.
There is currently one song in Chapter 5 and 7. The identity of the singers can be found in the author's comments at the bottom of those respective chapters.
Chapters (14)
+1 for Queen reference. I'll read it later.
Pretty good. Needs an editor, like you said, but apart from that... quite decent. Like my friend up there, +1
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Twilight?
For Spike!
A rock show! Everypony loves a rock show!
8010185 Lol, thanks so much.
. I definitely need a second pair of eyes. When I read this out loud to myself a third and fourth time, I can see the mistakes in my writing 
. I will go back to edit chapter 1, once I finish the next chapter.
8010186 Hehehe, I didn't think about song writing, but I might throw a few im just for you mate. Thanks for the positive feedback!
She did what she had to do now Spike needs to move on.
He's going through the 5 stages of grief.
wow... Twilight royally sucks at condoling/rationalizing/whatever the word is, especially when Spike literally stated that nobody will ever love him, and that Rarity was his ONLY chance, and she NEVER EVEN ADDRESSED those irrational, emotional points... surely she's read even a page of psychology... but then again, she isn't exactly the epitome of sanity, herself
8016011 When I was writing this chapter, rather than just be another poor Spike moment, I thought Twilight would be better as a character to question his logic. Unfortunately, she did come off harsher then I intended but I was trying to show that brother and sister dynamic at its worst. Anyway things will look better for the two. I promise
Hope the next few chapters will come off a bit lighter.
His stubbornness will be his downfall.
I think you should listen to this song:
8075373 I love it mate!
I'm not sure whether I can fit it this in this story and will need to think about it a bit more. I however am definitely keen on using it if not here then another story I am thinking about writing. When I listen to it all I hear is "Blood on my mane!" 
Spike Appriciation Party will take everyone Spike knows.
8083071 Yeap and it'll be a tall task but somepony has to do it.
You know what they say: Love for high standards is a one way ticket to Suplex City.
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Never heard that one before? Guess I better brush up on my wresting knowledge. But I think I get the idea.
It's probably Bigfoot.
Even Flurry Heart knows Spike is getting played and she's a baby Alicorn with ultra-powered magic.
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excuse me but spoiler alert! Nah just kiddin
8115711 I had so much fun writing that scene this morning!
but please hold the spoilers 
Hey mate, in the title, make sure the cap the 'l' in Love.
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Cheers mate! 
8115783 Cheers!
http://www.titlecapitalization.com/
Use this site for chapter and story titles.
8115787 Lol no worries, I will next time.
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8116022 HAhahaha
... that was awesome!
8116108 jealous siblings!
I got spike!
He's mine!
I need him to schedule my daily reports!
what's so funny Rainbow Dash!
Haven't you heard
what?
He's got two....
line starts here!
why? me?
The technology in Equestria is extremely limited. Unless this is an anthro or human story, references to things such as computers, Twitter, or the Internet in general should be left out. You could easily remove the latter part of Spike's statement and literally nothing would be changed.
I hope this story ends with Spike and Sweetie Belle getting together!
This means that the Cutie Mark Crusaders got their cutie marks a little over a year ago.
Someone's a fan of Martha Speaks.
Wait, what!?
I like that Home Alone reference.
8116250 Truth be told the number was a random choice, but yes it was definitely intended that this story would feature sometime after season 6.
Martha Speaks - Lol, I've never heard of the show until you mentioned it
. I looked it up though and here's a fun factoid, the woman who plays 
) in the show also plays Martha in Martha Speaks 
. Fun fact!
The woman certainly has many talents.
(still holds true 
)
SpikeRarity (<- editedTruth be told, it was more a jab at me, looking at building up my vocabulary and grammar skills. The fewer vs lesser joke was originally written in reverse and I was corrected using Grammarly
"AT LEAST I CAN SAY TO AND YOU." = that was sort of meant to be Scootaloo's comeback suggesting that Applebloom's accent is so strong she can't speak probably, so imagine this bright filly using a higher level vocabulary been told you can't speak
. A bit of a Twi moment having to explain that joke 
. Might look at it again and see if it needs a bit of work :
:
Home Alone Reference: Thank you! I'm glad someone mentioned it. I heard Kevin's voice as I wrote it
I can't spoil the ending but it gets pretty obvious who the lucky mare is.
8016011 that is if spike actually shuts up listen
A pretty good chapter. Also, I cannot wait to see what Discord's part in all this is going to be.
8147974 Oh don't worry. I won't keep you waiting for too much longer.
Spike is in a losing battle he can't win now.
8148246 Just wait for chapter 12 when it comes out
.... that is once I've written it, of course! 
So It Seems that Discord has added to sowing the seeds of Spike noticing Sweetie Bell more and more, If that happens then I called it.
Another good chapter. Keep up the good work.
8150477 Thanks Lavendar!
8148632 I dunno
, I reckon Discord was just being a jerk for being a jerk's sake 
.
8150793 You're welcome.
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I took your advice and upon review. Consequently, that joke has been removed. Cheers.
This is another good chapter.
I also liked your choice of "Spryo" for Spike's pony name. It seems like a good match to me.
Spike doesn't want to wait and being impatient of being patient? Sounds like the CMC.
Discord?!?!! O-Man-ga!!!
Applejack's Lie-Dar is picking up high levels.
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She's not the only one
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Dude seriously, you are a pony emoji story telling genius! I was laughing so hard.
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I have good people helping me out. Every single one of them are just awesome!