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Jet Storm


Writer, pre-reader and a dad to two colts and a filly.

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When Ms. Cheerlie asked the class to prepare a family tree and present it for class, Scootaloo couldn't help but be reminded that she is an orphan. However, what she’ll find out about her family may just surprise her yet, especially when she finds another pony that has necklace very similar to her own.

The story is set shortly after Season 7, episode 7: Parental Glideance.

A story co-written by Jet Storm and LavendarRegards for the Everfree Northwest 2018 Scribblefest.

Special thanks to the following people:

Editing:

Prereading/Reviewers:

Coverart from Season 6, Episode 7 of MLP:FIM.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 22 )
Ri2

...Uh, but they can't be twins. Rainbow's much older than Scoots.

Also, shouldn't Scootaloo's aunts know Derpy's the mom?

Ri2

Oh, that's how.

8770121

Also, shouldn't Scootaloo's aunts know Derpy's the mom?

When I wrote this bit, I was imagining that Derpy took off too quickly for them to get a good look at her. She only stuck around long enough to be sure they opened the door.

Perhaps some more exposition was necessary there to make that clear?

Jerry! Jerry! Jerry!

My brain exploded!

8770126
I'm right there with you.

Magic, how the buck does that work? :pinkiecrazy:

The first chapter felt like a crack fic, then the second part made it all make logical sense, but still felt like absolute madness :rainbowlaugh:

Twas a silly story, i like it :twilightsmile:

So.... Any chance for a "the next day" epilogue? :scootangel:

8770121

...Uh, but they can't be twins. Rainbow's much older than Scoots.

:rainbowlaugh: Buwhahahaha, I wonder what made Derpy think that.

8771401

My brain exploded!

So did, RD's :rainbowderp:!

8771182

So.... Any chance for a "the next day" epilogue?

Yes!!! There totally is one :raritystarry: ... but it'll have to be released after the contest :raritycry:. There's a 6k word limit, and LR and I just managed to get under.

8771558
Awesome, looking forward to it!

Also, as for the age difference, I mean if like Whooves said and they were dumped in different points in time, they could still be born in the same batch as fraternal twins, and just grown up in different "places" in the timeline.

8771561
Lol, who knows? But don't worry it'll all be explained soon. :raritywink:

8771581
Who knows? Why this nose knows! obviously :derpytongue2:

Sorry, couldn't resist answering with that :rainbowlaugh: (feel free to read or ignore it. I just wanted to make a silly response with that title)

a third chapter of a family outing would not be a bad thing just saying :twilightsmile:

8773646
I take it that you enjoyed our little story :ajsmug:?

8773701
yea I enjoyed it it was very adorable and a neat twist I rarely see with rainbow and scoots its a lot better then rainbow being scoots mother because reasons

Need... third... chapter...

Sorry, time paradox stories are a weakness.

“They’re my adopted family,” Rainbow Dash explained. “My parents couldn’t conceive a foal of their own. I think that’s why my birth mom chose to drop me off at their house.”

Bullshit. They look too similar to Rainbow to be adoptive parents. And how can they be twins? There's a pretty big gap in their age

EDIT: HOW IS DERPY RAINBOW DASH'S MOM?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

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You get a pass. THIS TIME.

There is a lot wrong with this scenario... but I suspect the author has a little secret that will be revealed in the next chapter. I have my suspicions...

“Umm… ” was all that Derpy could mutter when all of sudden, the doors burst open and a gust of wind blew into the store, “Doctor!”

Ah.

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