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Applejack had certainly dealt with her fair share of critters taking apples from the farm in her life. Unfortunately for her and the rest of Equestria, this latest apple thief encounter may just be more of a hassle than the ponies can deal with...
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This isn't Thunderstruck!
j/k j/k
lol
OH HOLY CRACKERS OF EPIC STORYNESS!
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I like how Naruto isn't instantly trying to make friends, how he's a snarky bugger, and whooped Applejack without hurting her. This is gonna be good!
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Call down Merlion...you gotta remember...this is...
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Glad you liked it. Hopefully more will come soon after I finish up the next chapter in my other story.
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You just did that to me five minutes ago and you got me again! What the hell man?
Gah... Stupid tree...
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A pair of hands reach up and grab the legs.
very good, like this. fav
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You actually made me go back, reread it...and make an edit to make it seem less...wrong...
Oh hell naw.
A Naruto fic? This I gotta see.
this story is utterly hilarious... Though only complaint is that applejack seems like kinda a bitch when she immediately thinks of bucking him in the groin cause he is male. ..... Mares watcha gunna doo
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It's there! You see it! Although, if you mean where will it go...always bet on Pinkie Pie.
Well, that probably made no sense at this point in time, but stick around and see.
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Yeah, she is kind of...but then again, fear and humiliation are a hell of a combination.
please sir, may i have some more?
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I'll let Pinkie Pie think on it.
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Naruto eh? I'm interested to see where this goes. Is it current Naruto? Or is it Part 1 Naruto?
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Actually, a future Naruto.
How much older and what became of him in that time? Well, the story will get around to that eventually.
571941 Possum-grade awesome.
I've kinda been out of the naruto circuit for a couple years, but I've been on the lookout for this exact premise! the writing didn't seem to have many mistakes, and the story flowed rather well. it's too early to tell for certain how this story will pan out, but I'm getting a good feeling about it!
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Ah, the million bit question, right? How will it pan out...
Well, we'll see! In all honestly, I have a vague idea of how big benchmarks I want to meet with the story, but the journey to those benchmarks is far from thought out. I find that for me, it's best to just have an overall framework, and let the randomness take care of itself when I outline each chapter individually. The story seems less strained, and a bit more free flowing that way; or at least that's what I think.
And I'm not adverse to seeing what my readers would like to see. No promises though.
Not bad, not bad at all.
Nah, just kidding
AWSOME work, looking forward for more
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You and apparently more people than I expected.
I'll try to get something else up soon...ish.
I rarely see a fic that deserves to be favourited on it's first chapter.
You have successfully produced a crossover that doesn't straight off say why the protagonist came to Equestria, yet you amazingly managed to incorporate the majority of elements from both MLP and Naruto:
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I don't know what to say except that I will stand by this fic and guard it with my life, as I am a massive fan of both MLP and Naruto. If you need any translations or need new ideas or concepts, don't hesitate to PM me!
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The First
P.S. i noticed that he had ANBU armour on, and yet he is hokage in the cover pic. Care to elaborate? Or will it spoil part of the storyline?
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I'd like to say that the picture just looked cool. But really, it's a simple explanation that will be explored in the story.
By the way, it's quite funny that I've managed to accomplish more in this crossover of 2,000 words, than I was able to achieve with my other current story in 20,000 words.
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Well you have created a much better piece of literature here! What is the status report on the next chapter?
this looks good
i look forward to reading more
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Oh god, I'll get another chapter out...just don't hurt me...
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Uh, yeah...I feel obligated to write the next chapter as soon as possible at this point. What was a side exercise has taken on a life of it's own.
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Thank you very much; I'll try to get out another chapter soon.
The first time I've seen a Naruto fic that did it right. Absolutely beautiful, keep going, I am all the intrigue.
Please sir tell me....... will there be moar
because i love HIE fics.
You have my interest, sir.
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The more people comment, the more I am humbled.
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Yes, there shall be more. After all, we gotta see Rainbow try to beat him down in ten seconds flat, don't we?
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572279 Dat Rainbow Dash........... Were did you find it? because i want it!!!!!!!!! Comments for the Comment God
EDIT: Also good work with this fic! didn't think it was possible to find a good naruto MLP fic, kind of like how it's impossible to find a good MLP Halo crossover. But then you pulled this off!!!! Comments for the Comment God!!!!!
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And abuse that interest I shall!
I enjoyed it. I really like how you went for a future Naruto, who seems a lot more mature than he did in the manga. Are we possibly going to see Kurama (aka the Nine Tails) at all? Cause that'd be pretty wicked.
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I'm not ruling anything out yet. Well, except for blowing up Equestria. That would just be silly.
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Well, Kurama seems to be slowly becoming a bit nicer in the manga, maybe he wouldn't blow up Equestria? ... Nah... He'd totally blow it up still.
I like how you have an older, slightly more mature Naruto. I wonder why he is in Anbu armour?
Well written, going to track and thumbs up. 
571712 Outta Curiosity, Who is best pony to YOU? Lemme guess...AppleJack?
There'll be a storm of laugther from Dash yes ,but I fear the storm of laugther will disappear very soon ...
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Bwahaha, not really. Right now I'm focused on her cause I'm trying to write her dialogue better; basically practice. I haven't really thought about my favorite...they all make me laugh.
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In...ten seconds flat?
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To Tartarus?
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And you will pack your story in your bag?
Hey ,don't forget to ask for an autograph from Cerberus for me ,please? Oh wait ,I'm an Exiled Forsaken ,forget about it 
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Bwahaha...
Well, I suppose since this question has come up a lot...I'll go ahead and give a little insight on my ideas. Under normal circumstances...Naruto is basically too freaking powerful for the MLP universe. I have already decided on how to juggle that little problem. As for where this fanfic goes other than that? It's going to be character driven; interactions between the cast and Naruto after the introduction arc. Unique ideas, coupled with some of the shows. How will this play out? Well, you'll just have to see.
And for the most part, it WILL remain a comedy...but even comedies have their downsides every so often...wouldn't you agree? A lot of the questions will actually be explained, I promise. But...some of the explanations may lead to more questions than answers at times.
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But...some of the explanations may lead to more questions than answers at times.
Oh Jesus you are so right.
That happens very often in stories!
572507 While Naruto IS way too powerful for MLP, he's still one of the best characters to use for a crossover because:
a) while he's a ninja he's never actually killed anyone, so you don't really have to worry about violence
b) he's very much a "friendship" centered character, so his making friends with ponies isn't all that far-fetched
and c) even an older and more mature version of Naruto is still very much a fun-loving prankster looking for a good laugh
I congratulate you on your choice of cross-over characters and hope to see more from you soon.
Ehhhhhhh sure, why not... dattebayo...
hmm this story is epic
Since Naruto is wearing a black cloak with a fox mask, does that mean he's a part of anbu.
Hmmm a story that has Naruto in it. Well so far not so bad, keep up the good work.
Cocky? I love a little cocky with my crossover