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DODGING RESPONSIBILITY AT MACH 20!


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Attempting to summon a creature without a Contract is literally gambling with your soul. However, Uzumaki Naruto is extremely lucky when it comes to gambling and manages to summon something that won't kill him outright.

"Sur-PRISE!"
"Gah!"
"Hi! I'm Pinkie Pie."
"Uh... I'm Uzumaki Naruto, future Hokage!"

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 439 )

Hmm...not really a big fan of Naruto. But, nonetheless, very interesting! Can't wait to see what kind of antics Pinkie will accomplish in Konohagakure!

I really like this but 3 chatrecters i think it would be cool to someon are trixie, the diamond dogs and discord... And pinkamena by the way I am on my iPhone when writing this so...

Hmm, even in the naruto-verse i`d say it would be overkill to unleash a :pinkiehappy: upon your foes.
to bad for them i`d say

This is awesome XD
I'm certainly not a "Narutard" by any stretch, but I am familiar with the series enough to see that you kept everyone pretty well in character.
I think I'll be watching :)

This is weird... I have a pure Narutoverse fic with practically an identical concept. (He gets foxes - and not kitsune, just foxes.)
Eh.
Putting coincidences aside, I like the look of this. (Especially impressed with Kusari-gama - very neatly executed pun.) Naruto does rather seem like he'll fit in well with 'em. (And the idea that Pinkie was randomly wearing ninja gear just 'cause is very funny)

What does his mammoth chakra capacity entail for the potential summoning of deity-level individuals (i.e. Celestia, Luna, Cadence when she turns up)? Are they to be considered equivalent to a boss (massive chakra needed) or equivalent to a Sage (beyond-normal chakra needed, as in when Jiraiya has to have some nature chakra to summon the Sage Toads - if I was reading what he did right, of course...)?

:pinkiecrazy: I am ok with this. Keep up the good work my good sir.

YES YES YES!
YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW EXCITED I AM RIGHT NOW!!! :pinkiegasp::yay:
.....Continue...... :moustache:

Ah it's up here finally. Good. I can't wait to read more. I'm also looking forward to seeing your other story on FanFiction.net, the Laughing Fox, to update. Until then, looking forward to more of this one.

WElp, I've found a new fanfic to follow!

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Thank you for your interest! I was hoping I would attract those who don't really pay attention to Naruto.

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Thank you. I have changed by a huge margin from when I first started with fanfics. I will continue to attempt to keep them in-character.

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Celestia and Luna are the boss-level summons. But there's hints as to what else Naruto will be able to summon. That's all I'll say.

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I plan on it.

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Oh? So you're a fan of my other penname too. Nice to know I have some overlap at least.

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I'll try not to disappoint!

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Will do!

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That's kind of the idea.

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I have plans for all three of those, dood.

so let me get this straight YOU let pinkie meet naruto first....pinkie pie the 4th wall breaker and naruto the most unpredictable ninja in the multiverse...
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the 4th wall is screwed huh? T.T

Wow. Haven't even read it and I'm hooked by the pic. That is some badass cover art!:pinkiehappy:

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meh all they were were ideas that i would like, i would actualy see what you are gunna come up with its not like im saying if you dont follow my ideas ill go cupcake on you. :pinkiecrazy: good job by the way

Alright, I finally read it. Loved it, and I think it's safe to say that this will get featured in the future.

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You have no idea.

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Oh, I hope so.

Replace "fix it:" with "UPDATE!"

1417895 I dont see what being on an iPhone has to do with anything, I'm currently writing this from my iPod and am not experiencing any problems. Just saying...

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meh i was using a iphone 3 ...also are you on the mobile site or regular because on mobile on my iphone i can only see like 1 letter

"Impressive, but I meant something more casual. Something that has nothing to do with your career."

Umm... I like shorts! They're comfy and easy to wear!
I'm not usually a fan of Naruto, but this sounds very cool!
Imagine how Sasuke's practices went. "I summon... Aww, another log."

Ok, this is one of those stories that is either going to be awful or hilariously brilliant. I shall read and MAKE MY JUDGEMENT!! *holds Death Scythe and cackles manically!*

Fun fact.
A Kusarigama is an actual Japanese weapon.

Wanderer D
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Not bad at all!

The only thing that bothered me a little was the unusual amount of information about who each Naruto character was... personally, I feel it was a bit redundant and could have been presented later on through dialogue, rather than in narrative. For example, instead of all the exposition about Tsunade's hospital, you could have had the Hokage and Jiraiya talk a bit about it. "I wonder what Tsunade will do when she hears that you're in her hospital," or something along those lines.

Anyway, I'll keep an eye on it.

Hmm, a fanfiction that crosses over to Naruto.
I've never seen that one before.

Thiiis, is very interesting :pinkiehappy: keep up the good work!

I'm not big Naruto fan anymore but I was obsessed with it in 2nd grade. Nice story anyway I'll watch this

>inb4 discord becomes part of the contract. Also I hope to see some interesting fights and when naruto tells the ponies that he has to kill :D

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Dood you in charge from now on!

1420712 will naruto show off his demon fox?

"Son Gokuu"
I see what you did there.

WHO DID YOUR ART?!
Also, NINJA PINKIE!
As well I SHALL READ IT!

Pffft! Luna and Celestia? Who cares about them? Sic Pinkie on your enemies and watch them flee in stark raving terror! :pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:......:yay:

Really looking forward to this fic, as the other Naruto xovers I'm following haven't updated in a while. It'll be interesting to see how Naruto uses them during the exam as well as on missions.

Awesome! You sir, have brought together two of my most favorite shows together in one fanfic and you are doing an absolute good job at that! :pinkiehappy:

Like how the ponies of Equestria are summons too. What would be really cool is if Naruto summons the 6 Elements of Harmony all at one time and the 7 of them fight in the Chunin exams against Neji! That would be totally priceless. :rainbowlaugh:

Good story, good chapter, and I look forward to reading the next one. See ya!

- Super-Brony12

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Why thank you!

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Holy crap! Didn't think I'd attract your notice, good sir!

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Well, I hope you'll like it.

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I am aware. Hence why I made the OC toad.

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I'll try to keep that in mind.

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Thank you.

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Yes yes. I do love them prinnies.

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Show off? While he is the type to boast about it, he doesn't tell those closest to him for a long time about it in canonical.

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Actually, it's not a DBZ reference. What I'm referencing is older than that.

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Do you see the little link under the pic titled "Source"? Click that.

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:pinkiehappy:

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It would be overkill. And, since Naruto is going to put more thought into his actions, it wouldn't look good for the judges. Rather, he'll summon just one pony. Not telling which one though.
And yes, there will be times when he summons all six Element Bearers.

1424827 I'm using the mobile site on an iPod touch second generation.

Hmmm... I haven't liked Naruto in a long time, but I am definitely going to give this a try! Brilliant idea, my friend!

Yeah, good point.

Maybe he'll summon all 6 elements when he goes up against Garra or when he helps Jiriya and Tsunade against Orochimaru? Just guesses. Summoning all 6 in the Chunin Exams would be overkill, you proved an excellent point that I didn't think about. Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

I'm ok with this and can't wait for more. You can do it! :rainbowdetermined2:
This is also my first comment ever so it seems fitting it comes at the start of something awesome

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Oh. Well... To Wikipedia!

This is AWESOME! :rainbowkiss:
I love Naruto, please make more! :yay:
I hope Hinata at least makes a little appearance :twilightsmile:
Here take this it is my most prized possession: :moustache:

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Thats because he needs the Ninja tag :rainbowlaugh:

Son Goku king of the Monkey clan? awesome reference. [img]file:///C:/Users/The%20Salamandinator/Downloads/happy-i-see-what-you-did-there-l.png[/img]

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Oh. Okay. I'll add. Forgot to. :derpytongue2:

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Danke!

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First comment ever? I'm honored.

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Haha! Four pony smilies! Yay.

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Oh, so you know the story? Good. While Dragon Ball was my favorite adaptation of it, I've seen a number of other versions. All are awesome.

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Okay, bad Silver. You read this tonight!

What? Oh I as just yelling at myself:pinkiehappy:

Hm... Would this author be willing... Tough to tell, so I'm just gonna ask: wanna read my story xd

Hands down, this is the best crossover I've seen since The Mysterious Origins of Scootaloo, which crossed so many things... just so many things...

It was a little too heavy on the manga style language for my taste, although that's just personal preference. By the way, you said earlier that descriptions are difficult for you, and although I didn't find much wrong with them, there were a few places that didn't describe the scene at all. That ought to be corrected, if possible. PM me if you would like help with that, okay?

While I'm at it, did you like my story? Do you think it could be feature box worthy some day?

Interesting, you've melded Equestria's canon into the Summon world in rather interesting ways, including one that explains quite well why the Ponies would not be known to most human summoners. I am pleased and will not have to resort to tormenting you with dental surgery for this story's plot!

However: "The main problem was that the villagers didn't realize, or care, that Naruto was actually slightly dyslexic and his problems with reading could be dealt with by practicing. He was also a visual and kinesthetic learner, meaning that as long as he had pictures or visual aids, or he was being taught something by doing it, his memory would retain it a whole lot better than any lecture or text could teach him."

Are you trying to sneak factual knowledge in this story? YOU THOUGHT YOU COULD TEACH ME WITHOUT ME REALIZING IT?! No one makes ME learn while I'm reading fanfiction! THIS WILL REQUIRE DENTAL SURGERY TORTURE!!!

*ties you to a dentists chair and brings over a drill* Now, I will ask you, is it safe? :pinkiecrazy:

Thinking of how this world works, FLuttershy's 'Stare' must be rather like the Mangekyo Sharingan! :flutterrage:

Dan

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It's the Japanese name for Sun Wukong. Aka. The Great Sage Equaling Heaven. Aka. The Monkey King. Aka. The Victorious Fighting Buddha (or "Buddha Victorious Against Disaster" depending on how you read it.)

NOTHING TO DO WITH DRAGONBALL. It's one of my biggest peeves when people associate the heroic Monkey with that stupid show.

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Well, thanks for the explanation. Sorry that I didn't know. I grew up with Dragon Ball, and that was just the first thing to jump to my mind.

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