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Author's note: I don't like the formatting here. The mods made me change it to match their standard, but it completely ruins the flow, in my opinion, especially for chapters two and three. Maybe you won't mind this formatting, but if you do, please check it out on Google Docs instead: Link.

Once upon a time, you met Twilight Sparkle and that's what this story is all about. This is the real life events of what happened in real life, you just don't remember, but it did happen.

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Comments ( 18 )

Do you think Santa Claus knew when you were little that you'd grow up to be this big a jackass?

She was all like "I just found out that Mayor McKingly Queenish The Third is trying to kill all of Equestria with her magical penis. I have to go take care of this, because I'm super awesome and great and can take care of this. But in order to do so, I have to leave Earth and go back to my home planet of Equestria and take care of this. And I have to go now and will never come back, because the spell to come back here only worked once and once I leave I can never come back and I'll never see you again."

Oh snap, that plot twist.

This entire thing was like horrendous One Direction fanfiction on steroids. Its seriously the worst trollfic I've ever read. :twilightangry2:

this story is awesome the passion the drama and the romance. it has it all and that plot twist at the end made cry.

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This is hilarious. You have my up-vote!

Also, I love the foreshadowing at the end of chapter two.

Not that all time greatest troll fic (nothing will stand up to Sonichu Saves the Day), but pretty good and quite amusing. The writing style is a good spoof of how many beginners write

Author's note: I don't like the formatting here. The mods made me change it to match their standard, but it completely ruins the flow, in my opinion, especially for chapters two and three. Maybe you won't mind this formatting, but if you do, please check it out on Google Docs instead: Link.

The reason your story was rejected initially, based on that Google Docs link, is because the original "formatting" is the kind of writing you're supposed to learn not to do in elementary school.

Even with the chapters broken up into proper paragraphs, this is...really just terrible. There's a way to make sophomoric humor of this nature work. This isn't the way. This really reads like something you wrote while you were drunk.

Well, if I had a time machine, I too would go to the future to watch the MLP movie.

Yo dis be sum messed up shit right here

Ooh! Don't forget that you made out with her!!! XD:rainbowlaugh:XD:rainbowlaugh:XD:rainbowlaugh:XD:rainbowlaugh:XD:rainbowlaugh:XD:rainbowlaugh:

This first one is not good, even though I only read a little bit of your story

And I give it a downvote for a reason.

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