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Enigmatic Otaku


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Turquoise Blitz (T for short) is a loving, gentle dragon-pony whose deeply enamored with his marefriend, Anthea. Through thick and thin these two 'ponies' have been (in the near literal sense) inseparable.

But when Anthea suddenly declares to him that they've been spending a little too much time together and could use a short break from each other, T takes that as a sign that she's no longer interested in him. Will this break be what the couple needs, or will it confirm just what T fears?

The fact I've chosen for Kilala's contest is:

One time, Anthea and T mutually decided that they should take a little break from each other since they were together pretty much 24/7. T was a mess because he'd keep worrying about her and was scared that she wanted to break up with him. During the little break, Anthea ended up showing that she could hold her own and be very productive. Because she wasn't with T, she ended up grabbing the attention of quite a few stallions all of which she had no interest in. T, however, felt that he was unneeded by her and was holding her back the whole time. They got back together around a week later and Anthea spent the week after that reassuring T that she loved him.

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Kinda mean spirited prank if you ask me.

5671213

I can see why you'd think that. But then again, I can see Annie doing something like this, and I vaguely remember Kilala mentioning somewhere that Annie's sense of humor is a bit dark.

despite dong all that and more

I think you meant "doing that and more", I suggest you read through to see if you can spot any other errors. I noticed a few other errors, but this one was the first biggie I spotted.

5671254

Got dammit! Thanks for finding that, me and a friend read this multiple times to spot errors, but some things slip through the cracks.

5671239
Can you also see her dodging an angry pony and shouting "it's just a prank bro!" :rainbowlaugh:

Aside from that, "That dragon-pony ain't right" -Spike.

5671284

Why did I picture Spike selling propane and propane accessories...?

Oops 'People' before Annie exits her home,,,:raritywink: Oh well we can make another. . .:moustache::raritystarry::facehoof:

5671292
Gem and gem accessories.

I loved the whole thing hope to see more

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