(My entry for Kiala97's fanfic contest) After arriving at Cantetlot with his friend Claire, Del meets meets the daughter of Fleur de Lis and Fancy Pants. To this day, he's shocked about how well their friendship had grew ever since.
When going up to Canterlot, he was introduced to Créme de la Créme by Claire and they ended up becoming great friends. He finds her absolutely gorgeous.
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quick note, when someone is using term that is done in quotes while talking then you say it the quote with apostrophes and as an example it would look more like, "So is 'Coal'," he added quotation marks, you also use a comma to within in the quotations if your continuing something that is tagged into the sentence that shares the quotes. Pleas try to be mindful these little things, and try some some self-check practices if you can't find a proofreader or editor for your projects.
I found another little mistake, it's a quick fix
I think you meant to say "Del sat at a table,"
I really liked this one, it was a fun read.
Very cool to see how Del and Creme met!