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Enigmatic Otaku


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Soarin' thinks there's something wrong with him.

He's been practicing a certain two-pony stunt with Rainbow Dash for quite a while now, and yet all they have to show for it are cuts and bruises.

Maybe he hasn't been putting in enough practice.

Or maybe, just maybe... there's nothing wrong with him at all.


Art by Pimpartist101.
Written for PimpArtist101's contest.
Special thanks to Shortskirtsandexplosions for his help.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 13 )

It goes together perfectly!!!
I hope that you win the contest!!! :heart: :rainbowkiss:

Very nice.

Good mix of action, and the payoff at the end was good. There was a bit of a drystreak near the middle though. Don't get me wrong, I liked the idea and was 100% interested, but I also recognize as a shipper that we like to have a bone thrown our way. Just some slight hints here and there to keep us chasing the carrot on the stick, until we get to that satisfying ending.

Overall not bad at all. Been a while since I read up on Soarindash, and this was an excellent refresher.

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I'm sure he will. ^^

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I know! This story was amazing! :heart:

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I did an entry but it's shitty..

I really hope he wins

Sorry for taking up your comment section....:twilightblush:

I deeply apologize. :ajsleepy::fluttershyouch:

I just wanted to say, I love this story so much and it was really well written. Good luck! ^^

This story was so amazing to read! Thanks for entering my contest!!! :D

This was great;, always loved those two playing off each-other like in this story. Dash is sch a schemer; always trying to get Soarin alone with her! Loved the shipping!:rainbowdetermined2:

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