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Soarin' thinks there's something wrong with him.

He's been practicing a certain two-pony stunt with Rainbow Dash for quite a while now, and yet all they have to show for it are cuts and bruises.

Maybe he hasn't been putting in enough practice.

Or maybe, just maybe... there's nothing wrong with him at all.

Art by Pimpartist101.
Written for PimpArtist101's contest.
Special thanks to Shortskirtsandexplosions for his help.

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xxskittleponyxx

xxskittleponyxx #1 · Jan 18th, 2018 · 1 · ·

It goes together perfectly!!!
I hope that you win the contest!!!

WyngsTriumphant

WyngsTriumphant #2 · Jan 18th, 2018 · · ·

Very nice.

Good mix of action, and the payoff at the end was good. There was a bit of a drystreak near the middle though. Don't get me wrong, I liked the idea and was 100% interested, but I also recognize as a shipper that we like to have a bone thrown our way. Just some slight hints here and there to keep us chasing the carrot on the stick, until we get to that satisfying ending.

Overall not bad at all. Been a while since I read up on Soarindash, and this was an excellent refresher.

xxskittleponyxx

xxskittleponyxx #3 · Jan 19th, 2018 · · ·

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I know! This story was amazing!

xxskittleponyxx

xxskittleponyxx #4 · Jan 19th, 2018 · · ·

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OOHHH!~
Can I read it?

xxskittleponyxx

xxskittleponyxx #5 · Jan 19th, 2018 · · ·

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Please?

Enigmatic Otaku

Enigmatic Otaku #6 · Jan 19th, 2018 · · ·

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It's fine.

PimpArtist101

PimpArtist101 #7 · Jan 21st, 2018 · 4 · ·

This story was so amazing to read! Thanks for entering my contest!!! :D

Jay Watson

Jay Watson #8 · Jul 18th, 2019 · 1 · ·

This was great;, always loved those two playing off each-other like in this story. Dash is sch a schemer; always trying to get Soarin alone with her! Loved the shipping!

LightningStrike34

LightningStrike34 #9 · Jan 12th, 2021 · · ·

Rainbow smirked, her disposition suddenly seeming more confident. “Oh yeah, got plenty of that baked goodness back at my place. Don’t really eat them that often myself, so you’re more than welcome to help yourself to what’s in the fridge. Of course, I expect you to work your butt off practicing with me before I can reward you with so much as a crumb.”

Doesn’t Rainbow Dash not like pie?

My Rainbow Dash

My Rainbow Dash #10 · Feb 19th, 2021 · · ·

Oooo. Now nice of Dash to keep giving him more pain. Ooof.

Eclipse Midnight

Eclipse Midnight #11 · 3 weeks ago · · ·

“Uh… I, eh… I…” For the first time in quite a while, Soarin’ found himself tongue twisted. Despite practically being a celebrity, Soarin’ had never been invited to a mare’s house, let alone Rainbow’s. Some small part of him thought that she was inviting him over for something else, but the rest of him quickly rationalized that he was thinking too deeply into it.

yes keep on going with your thinking while me not fangirling over here