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AngelShy24


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This story is a sequel to Wander over Yonder (in): The Friendship


A special mail delivery brings Wander and Sylvia back to the world of Equestria where they join their pony friends for a carnival celebration in Canterlot. They look forward for a couple of days of fun and exploration.
Unfortunately, a familiar enemy is hot on the trail of the wandering duo; quietly stalking them for revenge. But will catching them prove to be more difficult than this hunter thinks?

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 66 )
Comment posted by Shrekowski deleted Feb 8th, 2015

Ah-HA! So it is Li'l Bits :moustache:

Looking forward to what happens next :pinkiecrazy:

Awesome a sequel.:pinkiehappy: I loved the first story. I'm looking forward to seeing where this one goes.

Angelshy24, I'm really glad you did this after your first one, and loved that as much as I love this sequel. Of course, I want to ask you four things:
One: would you kindly tell if you'll be able to focus more on this sequel right now, meaning it won't take so long for you to release the remaining chapters to everyone?
Two: relating to the first question, when will you release chapter two?
Three: how many chapters does this sequel have, like the same number as the first story or less or more?
Four: think you could check out the stories I made so far? Just click on my user name, and when you get to my user page, you'll see the stories I've made so far. I think you'll love them as much as I loved yours.
Thank you kindly:)

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Here are thy answers...
One: Its hard to say. I still have two other stories that are long overdue for a new chapter; plus I'm back in college retaking a class. So it may vary depending on what I do each day.
Two: I'm aiming to try and finish the next chapter by the first or second week of next month. But still... we'll see what happens.
Three: This story is definitely going to have more chapters than the first one. Right now, about 12 chapters are planned.
And Four: I always try to make time to read certain stories of others. I look into your account soon and see what you have.

That Lord Dominator reference :rainbowlaugh:

It'd be hilarious if Discord played the role of bystander just to piss off his friends :pinkiecrazy:

EDIT: Somewhere, in the far reaches of the Galaxy, Emperor Awesome felt a mixture of jealousy and sorrow.

Great chapter.

Look's like Lit Bits will learn the hard way not to take ponies lightly.

Might want to leave a authors note in you're first story. So everyone who fav it can know about this one.

Will Sylvia get Big Mac to speak more that three words?
Will Discord have fun?
Will Lilā€™ Bits survive the wrath of Opalescence?

I haven't been on FIMfiction for 3 weeks and I see this! So far it's really good. Also you used my idea! Now that Discord is here the REAL chaos has begun! :pinkiecrazy:

Apologies, but I have to do this::ajsmug:

You know what they say...

Hater's gonna Hate!:rainbowlaugh:

I think the only reason people dislike this story, is because of the format you write in. :applejackunsure:

Leave it to Discord to troll not only Li'l Bits, but Wander and Sylvia as well :pinkiecrazy:

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Awesome! :yay:
Did you customly make that?

i watch all wander show and they say they are going make season 2 of wander over yonder i don't know when but i hope they making soon

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I know, I can't wait myself:pinkiehappy:
I think its scheduled to premiere in mid summer, but we'll soon see.

SAY WWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT??????????????????????????????????????????????

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Craig McCracken hinted that Season 2 might premiere in September
i.imgur.com/RcNwr8x.png

But yeah, I can't wait for Season 2 :pinkiehappy:
Especially after:
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:rainbowkiss:

Edit: Hoping it still comes in Summer. S1 aired in August 2013. I'd like it in June or July 2015

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Now I'm even more excited for season 2 than I was before!:pinkiegasp::raritystarry:
Thanks for the info!:raritywink:

Of course the last line would tempt fate :pinkiecrazy:

I thought I spotted a Stuart Little reference from Sweetie Belle's name suggestion.

You think they would learn by now not to say stuff like that.

Only another cat would be immune to Li'l Bits' charm. :derpytongue2:

Well, that and Discord.

We so got to make more chapters and hope to really see what happens @ the end please with all my heart.

Needs more banjo. Still nice to learn there was a new story.

Lord Dominator caught me by surprise. This'll be quite the season.

Pretty sure we know who the pony is. Her first line gave it away :rainbowlaugh:

Also, once again, somewhere in the galaxy, Emperor Awesome felt a pang in his heart.

6532476 Who? Please tell me because I have no idea who that is.

7036085 That enormous pony at the end of Canterlot Boutique

7036127 I'm a new commer to MLP and I havn't seen all of the episodes yet.

7036155 In that case, I'll leave you to your own devices. Wouldn't wanna be accused of spoiling

Even if I enjoy doing so

Suddenly, the Cutiemarks of Twilight and her friends began to glow, along with the marks on their thrones. They knew what was happening, but Wander and Sylvia were caught off guard when the ground began to shake under their feet.

I never liked that, it is like they would call for Batman, or some sort of rescue team, like in those cartoon shows.

aaaawwww i thought they would meet Celestia and Luna already.

I was hoping for some Lord Dominator

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In truth, I started this story before season 2 of W.O.Y.

Makes me wonder if Li'l Bits will ever fall back on her plan to hypnotize a populace for internet fame.

Yeah, there's a few grammatical errors, but I'm too tired to point them out. Good read, regardless.

On a side note, how about that latest episode of WoY? And do you hope the petition will get through to Disney?

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I loved both of them, especially "The Party Pooper". That was hillarious!:rainbowlaugh:
But, yeah... the whole reason behind W.O.Y being stopped after this season's end is completely stupid; especially since the Fandom grew after the musical episode. I already signed the petition and I hope the big bosses at Disney will change their minds over their major mistake.
Oh, and thanks for loving the chapter.:twilightsmile:

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Also, this story does take place before Little Bits' Internet fame. (Although technically, I started this story before that episode aƬred.)
Right now, revenge is the only thing on her mind

7124905 Petition to save the show? oooh! Linky plz?

Thought about the final battle to Yoshi's Island at the last part of the chapter.

Great chapter Little Bits is now Big Bits. I wonder who that voice talking to her was. Does this mean there's villain in the shadows?

Ohh....I sure hope to see the climax in the future!!!!

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