No, no; it's not what you think!
Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo are suddenly aware of their entire home being plunged into total chaos. They soon find out that Discord, the Spirit of Chaos has escaped, and it was all thanks to them.
Suddenly, Discord decides to cheer up the little fillies by letting them hang out and play with his chaos induced daughter... Screwball!
Takes place during Episode 2 of the season 2 premiere; supposedly the day after the class field trip.
Not too long of a story, and each chapter is fairly short.
Chapters (6)
Commence read.
Well this should be interesting.
Has potential. Let's where you take it.
I'll admit... This story IS sorta making me warm up to the idea of "Daddy Discord"
2274324 Already?
Ok, I see three problems that actually bother me. You have Applebloom swap between Wut, and What. You repeatedly say 3 rather than three. And Sweetie says that she is scared. Show, don't tell.
"I can't find Rarity anywhere," Sweetie wailed pitifully.
Not the best example, but you get the idea. Or you could have Sweetie... 'She stared out the window, "Come back Sis, we need you."
2274996 I don't get the question...
We have barely seen their relationship, or even Screwball's personality.2275119
It's a bit choppy at times (I second 2274996), but I do like Screwball, and this looks like it could be a fun ride.
COOL STORY BRO
Your Title is very misleading.
Commence read.
Poor Carrot Top/Derpy.
Okay Screwloose is BEYOND adorable!!!! I FREAKING LOVE THE SCREWS!!!!! EEEEP!!!! Please make more chapters!!!
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I know
But I was expecting for people to notice that.
2317243 Very clever.
2316175
You mean... ScrewBALL
2325939 I mean both Screwball and Screwloose.
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gotcha!
Ah,
Commence read.
Screwy stuff.
How will it be fixed?
I felt that there was a lot of tell in describing the chaos. I wouldn't mind a little more show there.
Cool
That picture is priceless.
The inevitable happens next chapter.
Screwball's going back to jail. Well at least till Discord's 'reformed'.
Poor Screwy... She just wants to have a bit of fun.
Good story. I hope you do a sequel that takes place during the events of "Keep Calm and Flutter On."
2326052 and Daddy Discord, perfect family picture.
2441307 don't you mean the funny house and a white coat?
I kind of felt sorry for poor Screwball, on the bright side her Daddy gets free eventually
Crap. I wanted them to fuck eachother.
Good story! Have a like!
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The closest thing to CMCs doing each other that I have read to date would be: "The CMCs Learn a Lesson."
heh, Screwing balls
Darn, guess I'll have to keep looking for... that... type of story some more.
Anyway, will read later probably.
stated Sweetie Belle while sobbing a bit, “She made fun of me, she called me names… and… and… she called me a baby; I’m not a baby Apple Bloom!”
Grow a pair sweetie!