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Xeon Sharpblade was just a stallion who loved his job. But after a one-night stand with a unicorn mare, he finds himself in an awkward situation.
XEON
XEON
(Greythorn, the overweight guard)
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(Oc's are okay. I will try to add as many as I can)
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stupid Xeon
OC: Daffodil Spark
i.imgur.com/UqY6XDr.jpg
(The one to the right)
Daffodil Spark is an orange earth pony with yellow mane and a seed with a sprout coming out of it as cutiemark.
Daffodil got a slight bit of social anxiety, often feeling very uncomfortable and stressed around people she don't know and in big crowds, always preferring to stick with her friends. Don't worry just give her some time and she'll be comfortable. In comfterbul surroundings, Daffodil is very open, optimistic and love talking. She is very loyal to her friends and family and will do anything for those she care about. If you make Daffodil angry, your in deep problem, as she will let nothing stop her, social anxiety or not.
5328748 thanks! I'll let you know when I get done with the chapter. One question though.... what would be her reaction to Xeon at this point? He thinks he's fat, and not quite at the point of the picture on the story. He can't caught on yet about the trick..... and I thought to ask the one who made Daffodil herself.
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Well, she'd probably think it's a little weird that he's gotten fat all of sudden, but accept it as the only logical solution. (Since she's an Earth Pony, she don't know all the things you can do with magic, for example making a stallion pregnant)
5328781 ah.
got it
5328782
Yep.
Try to get an editor for the story, use spellcheck maybe.
Also, you don't need to cut the chapters quite as much, these three chapters could have been one long chapter, but instead you split them.
Interesting story idea though, I'll see this through to the end.
5333201 Not harsh, but true.
Thank you for your opinion.
5333246
I try not to be mean when giving critique.
Thanks for the random watch.
5333257
I like to hear such. You are welcome.
Yay!
Bastion....dat belly dude
Something just crossed my mind for the first time. Once Xeon knows he's pregnant and has to give birth, that will be a very interesting delivery
that oc's so edgy
I'm wavering on the precipice of this story.
What does this war have to do with a stallion guard being preggers?
Well THAT escalated quickly.
It jumped from a guard getting dumped, to going to war again.
5347720 imagine a war at a time like this.
5347623 Imagine a war in the middle of it.
5347511 and then... spontaneous war!
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5351138
... I'm not seeing the appeal. It's just distracting from the main idea in the story. You aren't even covering the pregnancy much.
5353833 Imagine this at this early stage in the middle of a war.
Plus he hasn't even caught on yet that he's pregnant.
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Not to be rude, but that grammar just confused me even further.
5353857 .......not the best at grammar here.
5353866
That's cool; nobodies perfect.
Fact: The english language is the hardest language in the world to learn
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thanks?
The pic in the AN didn't work.
5354430 http://40.media.tumblr.com/aa5c853c54bc26c6cc25174db9c39700/tumblr_nagcy0x2jJ1sqcjo4o2_1280.png
Well, deities above, that went fast.
You rushed this chapter didn't you? I can tell.
Also, Changelings are stealthy by nature, I doubt they'd go for a direct assault.
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5354440 yes... rushed.
And yeah... they were long discovered. They were desperate.
Yay! Daffodil is best royal guard! :)
5354460 I can't see the pic
5354457
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Wow, really? Wow. Screw you too tumblr
5354470 Point is, I had to find a fat unicorn that was grey, and this one fit.
5354462
Let's hope Dropbox is more reliable
dl.dropbox.com/s/itb0bwq7m1mwxxh/Dust%20Tracker.jpg
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Wait, what? What are you talking about? Where did that come from? XD
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:D
5354489 you kinda pasted the pic from my story on the last comment.
Ddum dum dum pregnant with changeling dum dum dum
I don't see any other way xd
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5354683
then how he can be pregnant :p?
5356672 unicorn magic.
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That was because the author's note images as broken, and you had posted the images link in a comment.
5358038 aw snap.
5358038 here's the image though. cutiemark.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/Doctor_is_not_buying_it_2_S2E16-1080x420.png
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Broken image