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RustyKat


Losing my mind, and proud of it!

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StormFlash was just a royal guard. He never thought that love could just suddenly strike the heart at will. When he falls for a Griffin, the two fight to stay together though all kinds of hardship.
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Chapters (5)
Comments ( 29 )
Comment posted by CanoLathra deleted Jan 15th, 2014
Comment posted by RustyKat deleted Jan 15th, 2014

Nyeagh, please no emotes.

5324602 Hi, I'm Flames. So nice to meet you. :twilightsmile:

How is this story displaced?

5324610 Well, its displaced because no one supports Griffons and ponies shipping. :applejackunsure:

5324617 Thats...
Displaced is group dedicated to stories about humans having been torn from various earths or otherwise, and being stranded on their own version of Equestria. Usually by an interdimensional being known as "The Merchant" whilst at a convention of some sort whilst cosplaying.

5324634 Wit for it, kk? I was just getting to that. It's not done for a reason. :applejackunsure:

5324657 Okay. just please stop putting emotes in your story,okay? It comes across as tacky.

5324667 i'm sorry. :fluttershysad: But I shall.

Pacing is whacky, characters are bland and pretty one-note, and you need to make it so that the reader is more invested in the story. I feel a lot of the likes are for the shipping alone, and not for the actual story, which IMO is pretty forgettable.

You can guard me any time."

giggity

An image link? Well I do like links.

*clicks*



And now I have a griffon boner.

5354051 I'm gonna need an artist source, bro.

Hey blacksilverflames, I don't mean to be rushing you, but do you mind finishing this story, I like it

5407364 :pinkiegasp: Sure. I'm writing another chapter.:yay:

That place with the unicorn Pegasus roaming around."

:trollestia: : i don't see what you're talking about

nice chapter:twilightsmile:

Back fowl beast

Is this a misspelling, or are you calling the dragon a chicken? :rainbowlaugh:

You could try to make this sound like a real story, not a child book.:ajbemused:

5409056 I am calling him a chicken. :trollestia:

Wow, this chapter is amazing, you're a great writer, I know you can write more, just gotta keep yourself determined to write, I can tell you gave this a lot of work into it, keep it up:pinkiehappy:

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