I prefer writing and reading original stuff, with a sinful taste to abnormality, darling. 
Another heart-warming story on love between a young drake and old maiden who hearts and appearances share something in common, and that's love.
'Enjoy what love you have, even if it's among friends or family. Just know, there's someone out there that cares a whole lot about you. Age may exceed, but the heart stays young forever.' -TimeRarity64
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Honestly for this type of story, it needs a bit more but for what it is, I find it alright but not too good.
5288641 Hmm, I believe this is why I have trouble writing things from Rarity's point of view when it comes to stories like this. I can do Spike pretty fine. In suggestions, what do you recommend?
5288654 For this kind of story, I honestly think two chapters that tell each point of view would be nice. That way the reader can see where the two stand in their romance.
5288683 Hmm, that seems quite understandable, especially when all I need to do is focus on the center of the season. This is set before Spring. So, maybe I can coax something up. I shall make this incomplete. Thank you darling by the way.
5288695 Your welcome. :)
I enjoyed this a lot, have a thumbs up
5288728 same, this was calming to read to some chillstep.
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5288728 Thank you, darling. Now I need to think of a second chapter. This may take weeks.
5288874 Seconds, minutes, hours, days or weeks, it doesn't matter, things take time to progress and perfect, just like The Art of the Dress.
Not bad, but has a lot of grammar errors...
Where'd you hear this, by the way? it's really good.
So refreshing to read something on here that isn't crass or mindless pornography. Well done
Spikey awoke from his slumber, Stumbling out of the cave he checked his back for wings, Dag nab it , None.
He walked and waddled, How much taller had he grown? Just a smidgen. Drat !
He continued to walk stepping in something a timber wolf dropped off. Yuck !
He hurried to Raritys boutique , and was knocked over by a runaway carriage ." Was-up with today?"
Spikey walked in through the door, "Best day ever!'
Nice, could add a little more conflict .
OMG senpai, this is so usss!
I like this story.
It seemed a little rushed, but stories like this always make you want more, no matter how long they are XD
I enjoyed this quite a bit. Kudos!
5290928 Yes, I feel as if there should be something else to add a final chapter. Just planning what the final chapter would be.