A fairy pony tale romance involving Princess Rarity and Spike the Dragon
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Not bad. My liked it, but too fast, I guess.
Pretty cool story, too fast though. It would've worked if it was more spread out and longer. Also, why is the Griffon king named after Harry Potter's school house? Oh yeah, the witch that courted Spike was Chrysalis wasn't she?
a bit quick to the punch... a few lose ends... but it was a good read
The wall of text! Hit a extra enter between paragraphs and indent. Save the eyes.
sweet, cute little fairy tale
What everybody else has been saying: it seemed rushed. Don't get me wrong it was great but maybe take it a bit slower.
Oh my gosh!
It's too cuteā£
At best I could consider it an outline for a much longer "Beauty and the Beast" style story. It's a good concept, but too rushed and short to be properly realized.