A now grown dragon decides that for once in his life, that it is time to tell the mare of his dreams how he really feels about her. Love may have no bounds, but it is painful. At least though, this kind of love won't be painful, instead, memorable.
(A soft short story I thank Peter Gabriel's Album: Scratch My Back. My Little Pony is copyrighted to Hasbro Inc. I take no credit in its existence or characters. Enjoy and stay warm out there.)
(P.S. I might change the image and I also do not own it.)
Edited by: MisterSelfDestruct: Great best friend and wonderful wiz of the works.
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Make another!
3652042I don't know, I was thinking of making one from Rarity's perspective, but I decided to back out on that.
I was very unsure if it was even suitable in being made since this took me a while in thinking of.
3651017Thank you.
I would love to hear what Rarity said to that
This was SO adorable
3653458Thank you.
A dear friend of mine said the same thing.
3653481 I can't help it
I just wanna know 
3653634Well, like I had said before on the comments before; I was thinking of doing one out of her perspective, but I backed out on it. I feared that it might become mediocre.
3653646 Oh, what a bummer
3653661You could make one if you want, I did ended in some type of cliffhanger way, I guess. I would be so hyped to see someone's own Rarity Perspective.
3653672 Oh my, I would love to, but my writing isn't as good as yours
3654567That is why there are kind proofreaders or editors willing to critique such work and give you their point of view or advice!
If I remembered, plenty of people on your story's comment box was hoping you return to continue that story of yours. 
Who is to say an idea like that, so short and simple, cannot be taken to the next level and be brought into existence?
I believe you might have more skill in that than I.
3657215 Everything in my story is true. Spike is me and Rarity was this girl I liked and Twilight is my mum. It's what I went through and it was tough and I still fall into habits, but my friends and family help me break those habits
More skill than you! I highly doubt that, but thanks for the compliment. Your whole comment has made my day, thanks 
3658293No problem
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3658320 I guess I could give a go, but there is one thing I'm sure about, is this a letter to Rarity or is he infront of Rarity telling her all this, or am I nowhere near at all
3658336That's up for the reader to decide. I specifically made sure of that.
3658340 One word... Niiiiiice
3658355Thank you.
3658356 You're welcome
So many feelings in this one. I almost cry.
Loved it as much as the other Rarity/Spike one you have! It's so cute! I'm putting this one in Romance is Magic! as well!
Why do you think doing it from Rarity's perspective might be mediocre? And even if it is, best to try and not do amazingly then not to try at all.
As it is, a short but strong emotional piece. I disagree with the entire 'town coming to fear' Spike thing. They've lived with him for years, so they should be used to it. Same with Fluttershy... unless it was a MEGA growth spurt.
3748654 I don't have the inspiration to do it. If I just did it right out of the bat, then it would not seem right to me. I tend to wait it out for weeks or months in order to come up with a fantastic idea if I ever did a story from another character point of view. Spike's was easy to work with as well as the other one (or the original). Till the time really does come, I might actually do one with Rarity's point of view. I just patiently have to wait and focus on other things. Thank you for comment, though.
3750364
Now that makes complete sense.
3750398 Glad it does.
"Be bold little Drake" I said laying on my back in the dirt burping little smoke rings ,Why do I do this? Every darn time. All she did was kiss me.
Nice delivery, Good feels.
4721509
Da feels. This was adorabllleeeee
3653458
ONLY ONE WAY TO FIND OUT!
You think of a way random commenter.