I don't care if you're black, white, bisexual, straight, gay, lesbian, short, tall, fat, skinny, rich, or poor. If you're nice to me, I'll be nice to you. Simple as that.
Its that time of the week again! Grading night! The night that Cheerilee could be spending watching chick flicks with a bag of popcorn, but her job says otherwise. Its not that she doesn't like grading night-
But it can get a little...
Degrading.
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I am a terrible person because I laughed.
It's just the tone she says/writes it in makes it funnier!
The thing about a "badly-written story within a story," is that it doesn't work unless your own spelling and grammar are pristine. Much like Ms Cherilee, I should be in bed right now so I can't write out specifics, but give it another sweep - I promise you'll find something.
You should put the essays in italics - I didn't realize immediately that AB's had ended when it did. Scoot's essay was actually heartwarming and I don't get why it made Cherilee so upset.
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We're both very bad people... :3 Thanks for reading!
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Thanks for the advice! I will put things like that in italics from now on :)
Cheerilee was upset to find out that Scoots was living... in a box XD
Live Cheerilee, I think we all need more sleep e.e
Woah you're so lucky you didn't get thumbs down!
Usually users put some for no reason.
You've been spared! It was a good fanfiction.
I actually would have loved to hear what the other classmates wrote about!
5171467 Very welcome!
The laughs have been doubled.
Pegasus, not pegasi. She's only one pony.
Love the concept, though.
Applebloom could be in serious danger! Cheerilee snorted. She decided she would brush it off as long as she hurt no further reports of these sort of incidents.
Shouldn't it be heard?
And other than some odd paragraph spacing, the story wasn't too bad. You get a cookie.
I'll make her love me gosh sweetiebelle!
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No, no. You see, whenever Cheerilee gets reports of her students doing something stupid, she's always sure to clock the messenger upon the head.
I loved this, few errors but nothing major.
This fic was well written and just plain funny, I laughed every step of the way.
Great work as always and now added this to my fav list.
5174438
Aww, thanks so much!
I aim to make Cheerilee a huge troll
But really, thanks.
More? I'd like to see her reaction to Diamond Tiara's mess of a paper.
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Might write a sequel called "I'd like to quit but I can't pay the rent." :3
Thanks for the suggestion! Diamond tiara's would be... interesting, to say the least.
Dat MLA formatting though...
I'm sorry, I had to stop at the first "sentence," because that ISN'T a sentence. I can forgive a few mistakes, but the first paragraph needs to be near perfect or I just don't feel like reading further.
5175776 Sorry to say this, but the first paragraph was perfect, and the first sentence actually was a sentence, if you read it again
Wings sound like a surprising pet.
5175776
Sorry! Edited it.
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My first shot at a full blown comedy, I needed Scoots to have a chicken. A caring and heartwarming one, but still a chicken.
Thanks for reading!
5175882
I did make a mistake there, but its edited. Thanks though!
I think you'll like a similar story I wrote.
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OMG
I love it XD
considering Twist is my 3rd favorite pony, and this is plain brilliance.
A+
really though, liked faved and followed.
I awed when it was over. I loved it! now, onwards to the sequel!
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Aww, thanks!
Cheerilee really needs a vacation.
There are a few issues here. First of all, while you remembered to use apostrophes for most contractions, you don't use them anywhere else. Learn to use them. Secondly, the official canon spelling is "Apple Bloom", not "Applebloom". Third, I have to call you out on using the homeless/orphan Scootaloo cliché. I'm not taking that last one too seriously, since this isn't a serious story; in fact, I'm half-joking about it. I still want to note it, though.
Raspberry.
"hurt any more reports" heard.
unicorn's
Pegasus'
Raspberry?
Her eyes look green to me (unless she's grading to many papers).
Deduct Apple Bloom 2 points for lack of capitalisation.
Who drags a wheelbarrow, either they pushed it or it's a wagon.
Nice little cheerful one shot, needed that.
Good thing two older sisters don't know their pets have been hijacked.