I don't care if you're black, white, bisexual, straight, gay, lesbian, short, tall, fat, skinny, rich, or poor. If you're nice to me, I'll be nice to you. Simple as that.
When you have a reputation to be a liar, it isn't easy to win back the trust of others.
Especially when "Others" means the element of honesty.
Resisting the temptation to lie again and sell another product hoax, the Flim Flam brothers decide to go back to Ponyville and make a fair living on the Apple family's farm. And while gaining trust from the ones you've tricked is hard, it just might be worth it.
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Again I claim to be RD yet I really enjoy tales with AJ,Twilight and even Rarity over RD lol.
This was well written I spotted I think oneish spelling mistakes near the top, But as you know I'm no grammar hound I'm in it for the story.
And this has the making of something good.
I really would like to see where this is going.
Also can't wait for updates on your other fics.
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Thanks! I love writing about AJ, Twilight, and Rarity, its kinda hard to write about Dash sometimes…
Anyway, thanks so much!
This seems good...
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Thank you! It means a lot
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I fear that was sarcasm for my underwhelming statement.
What I meant was, *coughs*...
This is a fresh idea amoung other more common ones and it shows great promise. I hope for more soon.
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I had absolutely no clue why my sarcasm detector was going off like that. I really need to check it more often.
Anyway, thanks for the praise, both real and sarcastic!
Interesting chapter. I think you are doing a great job, and this story will be very interesting if things progress as they are right now.
Idea seems interesting. But I felt several details either was unnecessary or just didn't make any sense. My brain was all over the place trying to imagine the morning scene.
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I agree...with a little bit less detail, you won't overwhelm your readers. I would try spreading your detail out a little bit more.
A good story, as always!!
Have fun on your vacation!!
Yay!!! More Flimjack!!!!!
Nice fluff chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Thanks so much! Honestly, its pretty fun writing about their personalities clashing
More coming soon!
Too short!
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Thanks for your concern, but some of the chapters may be short but sweet. I don't plan many of these though, so don't worry.
This was adorable.
I enjoyed it and loved the style AJ was written in.
Just like her I'll have to warm up to the flim-flam bros, a the moment.
Good chapter.
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Glad you liked it!
I don't think AJ is quite satisfied with their behavior
Really, thanks sooo much!
(More of these types of chapters ahead if I can help it
Shipping stories are always nice to read.
Nice to see you are adding some nice scenes to the fic instead of focusing merely on the ship.
Some say the chapter was short.
I say a short chapter that flushes out a characters persona as well as the scene is a great move.
Gives the story some detail and life.
Far too many focus merely on the shipping and nothing else.
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Thanks!
Ikr, so many people are like "RIGHT TO ZEE SHIPS"
I want them to actually hate each other before they "love" each other.
Lol oppisites always do attract.
Sorry for also flooding your comment sections lol, Kinda excited in a few days I'm getting a brand new computer.
I'll be able to write alot more so expect to see me around more., Right now I'm using a ps3 and beilive it or not.
Writing fics 200 words at a time is very hard main reason I have a slow update time myself.
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Consider yourself contributing instead of spamming
SOO EXCITED FOR THAT!
I think you mean "sister's skills" it's a common mistake I see regularly, and have made myself a few times, when you say a character's name or name of an item tacking an S at the end means there is more more than one of said individual or item but tacking a ' between the S and the individual or item means that something could belong to them. Apple Blooms means there is more than one Apple Bloom, but saying Apple Bloom's is more what you were trying to say. I noticed a few other errors, but that one was the most glaring error to me.
I think you mean "mosey over to their farm"
lol, keep up the good work!
i LOVE THIS!