I don't care if you're black, white, bisexual, straight, gay, lesbian, short, tall, fat, skinny, rich, or poor. If you're nice to me, I'll be nice to you. Simple as that.
This story is a sequel to Grading is degrading
After a well deserved rest, Cheerilee is ready to finish grading the class reports. All she hopes for is some well written, normal pieces of writing.
What shes going to find is about five cups of coffee and a headache.
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So Pipsqueak's definitely going to be a Pirate when he grows up then?
5177528
That's the Equestrian dream
Thanks for reading!
I'd like to leave an upvote but the story overall feels a little...flat.
There's no satisfying ending and virtually no paragraph spacing. The whole chunk of text a the beginning makes next to impossible to read properly.
That's not saying this is a bad idea. I actually quite like the premise and the characterisation in this story. I just think you need a little direction on your writing.
5177603
Thank you, it's always nice to get fresh advice. I felt this may have been just a tad dry, but I needed a sequel and only meant it as a "cute" one shot follow up. But really, thank you!
5177621
Honestly? Why not just consolidate it all into one story? I know it's a bit late now, but there are plenty of stories filled with one-shots as the chapters.
The format you're writing in here is perfect for that.
All teachers must have a moment like this at some point in their career. Just, not as insane...
5177627
Hmm... now that I think about it, that's a great idea. Just something to roll it all up.
I may do that. Thanks again good sir/ma'am!
5177637
Yeah, they really do XD
But face it, the danger death class is out to ruin Cheerilee.
Sorry, but I fail to see the humor here.
5177722
Heh, I was trying to be a tad dark...
I see it worked
Thanks for your opinion!
5177645
So true.
I agree the chunk of text at the begining could have been split up to be easier to read though I had no problem reading it myself lol.
I don't think the writing was flat at all but more indifferent then anything else.
This style of writing is very hard to pull off I myself have never tried it due to thinking I could never pull it off, It is meant to feel dry and almost black and white with color showing only when it is necessary.
Though some say this had a dark moment or two, and that Cherilee is selfish putting herself before others., I think no she is merely a sane pony in the throws of what is surely a chaotic place.
If I had to liken the style of these great fics to anything I'd have to say " Clerks." Loved that movie.
And loved this fic.
Once more you have given me yet another story to add to my favs.
keep up the good work, you know you want to
Other than the wall of text opening, this is pretty good.
5177873
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Thanks for your opinion!
I do love writing in this style, and I'm glad you think I'm good at it! I bet you could do it too!
(And I LOVED your representation of my style
Thank you so much!
I hope to continue entertaining you and all of fimfiction.
5177909
Gahh, thanks!
5177928
I am gonna fix that in future stories.
Thanks so much!
Cheerilee remains sane only through large applications of morning coffee it seems.
5178098
Yes, it seems she does.
Then again, who doesn't?
Thanks for reading!
5177592 HAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOVED IT
PINKIEPIEISILLUMINATI/10 Great job as always! Also, NEW TEXT ART :D!:
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5178577
Thanks so much!
Wow
Nice textart!
Yay! Awesomeness!
And God dang do I feel bad for Silver Spoon.
5178625
XD
Thanks!
(Yeah, Diamond tiara is... abusive, to say the least.)
5178620 In the time it took you to reply (3 mins 19 seconds) i re-read the story and loved it a second time, i have to admit, this is one of the best works you've ever made, seriously, it's amazing.
Stay Awesome!
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XD
Thanks so much!
(speed read
See this is why I feel bad for the good teachers out there who collect all the crap from parents that their special little snowflake can do no wrong. Then they wonder why that kid becomes such a screw-up in the future. I wish there was something that made parents actually correct their kids when they do wrong and not pass the buck. If only there was something like that...
5179063
I know right?
Thanks for reading!
And yeah, being a teacher can be...
very degrading.
5179089
Funny thing is, I see some of the people who were like this during school. Yeah, they lost it when they weren't the center of attention anymore.
5177637
No, there are some teachers who probably have to deal with stupider kids out there and still can't do anything about it or risk losing their job.
I laughed my but off on Twists. Imagining it in her voice made it better.
Silvers Spoon's got issues. Serious issues.
5178074
You're welcome.
Is the Pepper in this story named after the skunk from Littlest Pet Shop?
poor filly's parents!
Filthy Rich, who would
The teacher who "saw a problem and didn't try to correct it until too late".
hoity toity brats, and future outlaws - would stop her.
Good story, by the way.
Much improved from the last one, and much funnier too. I think DT deserved a lower grade because she missed a big piece of the assignment and because she's a brat.
I was disappointed that you didn't make a joke about how Silver Spoon thinks "Goldie" has been alive for years and years.
"I've had Goldie since I was just 3 years old... one time Goldie looked sick, and mom and dad were looking at each other kind of nervously. Then mom took me out for ice cream, and when we came back, Goldie was all better! She looked a little bit different from before but I didn't care as long as Goldie was ok."
What the smeg is wrong with this mare?! She thinks about doing something for the filly with annorexia, but then dosn't, and not even a thought about the filly living in a box. For Celestia's sake Cheerilee, have a heart.
5182508
Yes, she is :3
5179323
XD
it was fun to write, considering twist is my favorite filly
Thanks!
5182778
Thanks! *Must edit better*
5183891
Thank you so much!
OMG XD
And then one day I came home and goldy was way more white then gold. She almost looked like a different hamster!
Wait a minute...
I must use that somewhere in a future story.
...and a tub of ice-cream...a big one!