• Member Since 9th Aug, 2014
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LickleSoxy


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Twilight has a secret crush. Finally finding the courage to express her feelings in the form of a very simple gift, she stands ready, at his door, waiting to pour her heart out.

Now, if only she could grow a backbone and actually enter his room, that would be great.

Discord/Twilight.

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Comments ( 25 )

Good as usual! I liked the story, but I must ask, how's To Judge A Book going?

One of my favourite pairings. Adorably fluffy too.

5007485

Thank you. :pinkiesmile:

It's coming along, don't worry. Just been a bit busy (and wanted to get this idea out the way, as it was nagging at me). :twilightblush:

5007491

Also one of my favourites! :pinkiehappy: Thanks!

That last line caused me a burst of the chuckles. :rainbowlaugh:

Thanks for writing! :twilightsmile:

5007548

Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading. :pinkiehappy:

Haha i love the original approach. Usually writers change personality of that character to fit that ship, yet you made him to still act like Discord and you even acknowledged his special bond with Flutters. You didn't forced him to be in love with Twilight, you opened the door for Discord and gave him the new possibility other than Fluttershy which made this story more believable. I could totally imagine this scene in tv show if writers decided that Twilight would develop more serious feelings toward Discord

6ix

well lets see how its goes

6ix

She could do this.

Twilight Sparkle was an alicorn. She was a princess, despite not being born into royalty. Her magical abilities surpassed that of most creatures in Equestria. She was, by a margin, one of the most intelligent ponies of her generation - at least, in an academic sense.

She could do this.

Improvement:

She could do this.

Twilight Sparkle was an alicorn princess who earned her way into royalty rather than born into the privilege. Her magical abilities and intelligence surpassed that of most creatures in Equestria; at least, in an academic sense.

She could do this.

Telling a story is almost like singing. You have to watch your flow or you won't pull them in.

6ix

With the exception of your first paragraph your story flowed rather well, a little bumpy, but well. It was good enough for me to wonder what Discord will do to Twilight.
Good job:twilightsmile:

aaaawww xDD
please write a sequel to this

5007896

Glad you like! I always try to keep the characters as in-character as possible, so I'm really happy to hear you thought they were. :pinkiehappy:

5009975

Thank you. I have been told before that my sentence flow can be a little off, so I definitely understand what you mean. I am working on improving it, and I'll keep in mind your comments for any future stories I make. :twilightsmile:

5010707

Haha. :twilightsheepish:

I was thinking of a sequel, but right now I have a couple other stories I need to focus on. Might come back to it one day, though!

MOAR!!!

DiscoLight is my favourite ship. :3

6ix

5013195 gee is that why I keep running into you on other stories? :pinkiecrazy:

5013478 XD Probably.

5013478 and HIIIIIIIIIII Meet ya on the next DiscoLight story! :P

Aww! Nice story. Totally almost skipped this just because it was a discord romance story. I've only seen one (two if you count the sequel) discord shipping story I liked, but I cant deny that this one wasn't half bad. It was good, though I would have like to see the morning after :pinkiehappy:

Haven't read a lot of DiscoLight stories. This one was good. You kept them in character pretty well. I hope you eventually write a sequel to this. I'd like to see what happens the next morning. :twilightsmile:

I like it! short and sweet

5010853 hey there ^^ its been some time now so i just wanted to ask if you would maybe really write a sequel

Haha, I love the ending! It begs for a sequel. :twilightsmile: Thanks for another Twicord fic, we certainly don't get enough of those.

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