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Long ago, there existed a friendship between three immortal beings of great power. They laughed, they played, and they danced. Then, one day, a terrible monster tore through their innocent fun, breaking it until nothing remained but animosity.

Thousands of years later, just when that friendship seems to be repairing, the beast returns. And this time, it isn't going to stop until it has destroyed every last mortal creature on the planet.

Celestia/Discord.

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The story is great, and I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing the rest of it, but I do have one nitpick.

When Discord realized he was being turned back to stone -- when the episode makes it absolutely clear that he knows -- he screams "No!" and throws his arms out like he's trying to protect himself. That... is definitely some concern. Maybe he guessed it ahead of time, didn't think he could run, and tried to bluff his way out by pretending he wasn't worried, or maybe he genuinely didn't see it coming at first, but by the time the episode makes it a certainty that he knows, he's obviously frightened. Also, when the Tatzlwurm first attacked him, Cadance and Twilight at the end of Three's a Crowd, he jumped onto Twilight... he might have been pretending to be afraid as a joke, but he sounds genuinely startled. So while it's indeed true that it's hard to imagine Discord hysterical, Twilight has definitely seen him show fear.

Poor Milknut. And Discord's violent hysteria is very well done.

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Oh, I definitely agree with him being scared when he realised the elements were working. In the story, it's from Twilight's perspective, and I'm mainly basing it on the fact that all she probably would have seen was his smug confidence. By the time he realised what was going on, Twilight and the others were in 'glowing eyes' mode, and I imagine it's pretty hard to focus on what's going on around you by then. I did completely forget about that in Three's A Crowd, though. You're right, she's certainly seen him be startled.

Again, thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

OMG! Poor Discord, poor Fluttershy!:fluttercry::fluttershbad: You NEED to make more!!! 10/10

I CANT BELIVE HOW AMAZING THIS STORY IS SO FAR O_O
i cant wait for more :pinkiehappy:
keep going this is GREAT

Loving this story so far, and REALLY hoping it hasn't died...

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