The Elements of Harmony, a tale from a millennia of tongues and texts. A tale of might and magic; of the tests of time and bonds. A tale of the epic of the past of they, and those who wielded them through struggle, friendship... and tragedy.
All know the current tale that has been told by Princess Celestia, but only she and her sister are the remaining holders of the original story. Of the casting of three, the death of one, and the pain of the one who bore the weight of it all.
Story image provided by Ziom05 of DeviantART.
Chapters (5)
Pretty interesting....... I'll track it.
Looks promising. I'll track it.
Holy shit that cover art is badass. I'll give you a thumb just for that! I'll read the story later.
nice concept i haven't heard of before, tracking.
Beautifully written
Star Swirl has a fantastic prattling humor about him that paints him in the wonderful light of a favorite grandfather or something of the like. Luna's personality is spot on from the Luna Eclipsed episode, very well captured! Favorited and tracked, I have a very good feeling this story will be one of my favorites.
Looks very promissing! I will be tracking this piece of litterature :)
Cheers!
Kyor
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Oh my God that cover art is AWESOME!!! Where'd you get it?
In other news, great story, I look forward to more
Interesting concept and awesome cover art.
Tracking.
this is an amazing story so far it needs more though. this is one of the best fics out there so far.
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Well thank you, I hope I get a lot of views and reviews... nothing to do with me, I just like to see people enjoy themselves
looks like discord hasn't met Luna yet, and if he has just didn't name her here. if my first idea is correct this dun b good
471346 He and Luna have a strained relationship
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ooh this sounds even more fun, continue good sir or m'aam
well now we know where twlight gets it from i guess...
472709 Was that too lame a joke?
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Not lame just kind of Nerdy, but it fits Celestia (at least my idea of her) pretty snugly. Endless life, no friends, endless paperwork, she'd have to learn to not mind paperwork to survive.
473225 She wasn't always alone... which is what this story will be ALL about.
i like how the story is unfolding slowly and how discord actually is part of the meeting amazes me. this is one story that needs to be finished thanks overlord-flinx for making it and i like how you put a little bit of twilight sparkle in celestia
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i meant relatively friendless, she IS the princess after all, and fear does not a friend make, i also don't count Luna because she's family.
As Discord talks to the statue of him,
"...granite, a little hard-headed..." icwhatudidthar...
Interesting portrayal of Discord! Will be watching for more...
Frostwyrm
hey do you think you might finish this story up. Because it can't end here you are just starting to unveil everything so keep going! plz.
Oh gosh I want to favorite this but it hasn't been updated in half a year. What is the deal here?
1316984 Very few were interested... So I put it on hold until my birthday.
I love how beautiful the story is and i have been waiting for it to be updated. I don't understand how people are not interested with the origins of these great characters and the best villain ever (Discord).
wait sorry used the wrong pony cry
an.. an update
Wow! Writers coming back from the abyss, how interesting
as the other three i have nothing to be mad about just that fact that this story keeps gripping me and i can't get away from it. in short
THANK YOU FOR STARTING THIS STORY BACK UP
so, is Equestria really a diarchy? Luna seems to regard her sister as her 'senpai' and not really as a sibling...or she's just being weird because she was woken up..
2062433 It is. It is just that in this time span, Luna regards her sister with pure, unquestioned loyalty and devotion.
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Elements of The Past
Grammar score out of 10: 9 spotted some but no many.
Pros: An interesting look into the past of Equestria. A good plot line that keeps you guessing. Good depiction of Celestia.
Cons: Luna seems to be off for me, first off it looks like she's in the form she was in during season 2-3, not the pilot when she was smaller and a lighter blue. I have a hard time believing Chrysalis as the element of generosity. Discord isn't as chaotic as he maybe should be.
Notes Section: You took a bold step in going into Equestria's past. Hopefully the cons I pointed out with Discord and Chrysalis will be answered in time. Sadly the show doesn't delve much into the past leaving any stories that focus on the past a total crap shoot. That being said the story is enjoyable and I do look foward to reading more.
Enjoy your review! Please help me out by looking at my story:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/82632/fallen-princess
2193025 A fair point you raise on Discord, Chrysalis, and Luna. I could explain them all, but the two former will be explained in story. Luna on the other hand I explained in "Price of Power". The form she was in at the start of Season 1 I refer to as 'de-powered' form.
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Ah, gotcha, perhaps I shoulda rest that first. Carry on
The Goddess of the Sun, even she has tough moments, I am still not sure if the Gods created the jewels that could even defeat other Gods themselves or if they had found them....or were given them....hmmmm
Poor Celestia
And then the four Gods fought, killed Star Swirl and forgot about the elements....or sent them away
Why are Gods so prediticalbe (spelled that wrong) at least I think that's what might happen, and the Chrysalis, Goddess of Illusions and Trickery, very bad ass and I always had much respect for Philomeena
Ahhhh.....shit
This is good that they got the five but I got a bad feeling about it. I think you meant before hoof or on the other hoof rather then hand. And I believe you are to caplize the e in Elements of Loyalty or something of the same
Can't wait for more
I haven't been here for a while, when I came back and found that you have written a new chapter too this it was too attractive not to read. You are still doing good, grammar slips or not I don't care, a good story is a good story. You have got to keep writing this is exactly what I expected from you, nothing short of awesome.
i liked your story but who is that monster standing next to nightmare moon and discord ?
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Daring do’s nemesis