A regular working day for the Earth pony takes an interesting turn when a crabapple falls on her noggin! Can her friends get their farmer friend back to normal? Or is Applejewel here to stay?
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Fabulous!!! Thinking of continuing it, in any way?
Applejewel!? This is better than Rarity in country.
Who's a silly pony?
Points for concept.
Bonus points for making it work.
A like for a plausible way of bringing Fancy-jack back (or Applejewel).
A favorite if next chapter does not disappoint.
Do go on.
Let's hope Applejewel doesn't flirt with Spike.
THIS IS AWESOME OH PLEASE! DO CONTENUE!
*Jaw Drops*
4919299 who is? YOU is!!!!
4920253 Applejack!
This should be interesting...
4919170 I won't give away anything...but yes :3
4919694 XD Lol
Oh God, this is too good. Please continue this. Please!
I am loving it,this story deserves a fave
4920910
Awesome!
Me likey!!! Please write more.
...What?
Syntax.
Applejack wipes the sweat off her brow as she works the orchard, smiling at seeing her progress.
You need an editor?
....
I-I'm not volunteering. Just asking.
Anyways, continue.
4931238 It's been fixed. Mm, I've never even given thought to asking for an editor, but I appreciate the thought.
I enjoyed this one very much.
Winona's must be happy to see her friend back.
Who knows if there's going to be a sequel because I think Rarity has gone back to Rarabilly. This was a great and funny story.
Awe. So short...
Still, thank you for sharing.
tht was so funny! I love it!!
I was kinda disappointed in its brevity, and I was hoping they'd let AppleJewel on her own to see if something would shake loose by itself. Would have loved to see AppleJewel paint the town red. Still enjoyable.
No offense. But the whole 'hit on the head to fix a hit on a head' cliche didn't make sense when it was new. :-(
lol Loved that ending.
6705182 Thanks
6705394 No prob.^^ I love changes like that, changing others and whatnot I just find an odd enjoyment of for some reason or other.:\
6705398 I can see what you mean. It's funny when something happens to someone and makes their whole persona change (in a comedic way mind you), especially when they change into something that's completely contradictory to their normal behavior. XD
6705408 Well, here's a thought of one. Imagine Twilight becoming a bimbo, but not so much the stereotypical type. A bimbo... whom though logically dumb, is emotionally wise to compensate.
6705416 Ah, I think I get what you mean. "Tits with wits" as it were. Right?....
6705425 To a degree. Perhaps caring about others, despite being absent-minded and pervy. Bimbos may like to have 'fun', but they also like fun overall. And enjoy helping others have fun and just overall enjoying themselves.
Now that I think about it.... Pinkie would likely love such a Twilight. XD
6705434 Hah! She would! XD ...... She would. Oh my. At any rate, it sounds like you have an idea in mind for a potential fic, friend.
6705438 Oh, I've got plenty of story ideas. I just lack the skills to draw them. Heck, even posted a number of concepts to the forum of this club: http://www.fimfiction.net/group/1566/hypnosis-and-mind-control
6705445 Ahh, I see. Nice! I haven't really delved into this particular group yet but I have read a fic or two from it.
6705452 Well, this fic of yours sorta fits into that category, eh?
6705458 Mmm....sorta? Mind-control is different, no?
6707308 True, but it would fit a form of self-hypnosis, would it not?^^
6708134 ...... I got nothin' Lol! Still, I'm glad you took an interest in this little imperfect piece of mine
6714225 lol Still thought it was good, actually.^_^ As of late, actually thought of many a fic idea. Posted a number of which to the hypnosis forum, since I lack the skills to actually write said ideas.