• Member Since 16th Jul, 2014
  • offline last seen Jul 29th, 2014

Sky Lily


I like to write and read dark stories.

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Applejack has experienced many tragedies, but never in her life did she think she would ever have to deal with the fact that she may never have a filly of her own. . .


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Based on the comic: An Apple Without Seeds.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

not a bad start:pinkiehappy:
cant wait for more!

Can't wait for the next chapter

4719599 that's what I was aiming for.

Not great, I noticed several errors in the second half, plus everything is so rushed and all the other characters act like cardboard cut outs of concerned friends, they just don't feel genuine in their actions.

4725120 thank u for giving me your honest opinion. This is my first story, so I'm not quite used to writing different emotions and feels. Hopefully, I'll be able to find a editor and pre-reader to help me with this.

When will the next chapter be out?

4740231 I have absolutely no idea. Why do u ask?

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