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Wario and Waluigi have an amazing lifestyle going for them! Living in a massive, floating, castle that was given to them by their almighty Koopa King: Bowser; couldn't be any better! They had butlers, maids, and even a beautiful woman to boot! But, when Wario and Waluigi receive a letter from a strange land, they're teleported to it. The land of Equestria!
Note: If you wait for my PEGASI 2.0 story to come out, you'll understand who the OC character is in this story.
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Author's note:
I've literally looked everywhere for a Wario/Waluigi crossover and this will be the first!
Enjoy and if you spot mistakes/errors, let me know.
475629 Shouldn't you put that in the description instead?
This is certainly... something.
>> Pikeachevee Nah.
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WHY DO YOU HAVE THE NAME OF MY OC'S EVIL SIDE.
Now that's over and done with..
Looks interesting! I'll read later.
SunriseTheVulpix
Your OC's evil side? I came up with this for my OC.
The Wario Bros. need some respect, too. Seems like they're getting a lot of it here. Good job. Your rewards:
One (1) mustache
One (1) fave:
One (1) thumbs-up:
And one (1) demand for THE NEXT CHAPTER!
I'm working, Garino. I'm working!
There's chapter 6.
Wow. When I said get to it, I didn't mean it literally...and it's good. Keep it up.
Lol. :3
This story... WOW... i... just.... wow...
what i'm trying to say is this was really, REALLY good
*liked and favorite in case i wanna read it again*
Thanks guys! ^ - ^
Waluigi: Gramer Nazi
Lul
I saw this and I just had to post these. God I love Waluigi!
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This is one of my oldest fics. I'm surprised people still read this.
2753129 I haven't even started reading yet. I saw this on your profile and I had to post those two videos. I'll probably actually give this story a try sometime.
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Meh. Bear in mind that this is a very old fiction and that it wasn't as extensively edited as my later ones were.
And my OC was a pegasus at this time. Lel.
Have to say one of my favorite games of all time is Wario Land: Super Mario Land 3. Wario is awesome and that all that needs to be said.
Isn't Waluigi supposed to be "Wario's weird cousin"?
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Iunno. I made this a long time ago.
Pfft... HA! They think Wario saved the mushroom kingdom, he almost ran it into the ground once
It seems a little rushed, but otherwise ~
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Okay, the main problem with this story- character development. With many of the characters you introduce, you act as if the audience already knows them. This isn't too much of a problem with characters from the show, or from the game that this story obviously crosses over with. It is, however, a problem with OC's. Shadowflash appears out of nowhere, with no backstory and little description. Along with pushing him in with already too many main characters you don't know how to handle, he is a one dimensional character with no real reason to be in the story. Honestly, the story may even be better if you take him out. I'm sorry if I sound a little harsh, but that's my two cents. I hope you may go back and put a little more details in the action scenes, and maybe put a little more effort into your timing. Otherwise, it's an okay story, and I hope you continue writing.
Wario has saved the world and other worlds a couple of times throughout his games. I mean, he did it for the money though instead of the good of the world but he still saved them all
That was fun. Then again, when is Wario time not fun.