Good story :'D

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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it .

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Frak, was worried about that but I couldn't get an answer on whether HTML Tags worked there. Thank you so much for pointing that out. *goes to fix*

cum rocketing

That's a thing?

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Two things.

1) I died watching that Gif. That is awesome.

and

2) Yep. It's where someone or something cums with the force to physically lift / toss someone.

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4882708 That's fucking awesome.

I must find more.
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That warning was to long to read

I have no idea what I've just read myself into

Hmmmm, I will read this as well, and try to help a bit more, pointing out mistakes, not like I did in the last one.
But I will read this other day.

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I can't find it anymore but there was one with Rainbow Dash cumming a sonic rainboom out of her pussy onto Saorin, with a weaponized beam of cum blasting onto him. It was hillarious, but I have no idea where I saw it at.

But yeah, cum rocketing is one of my biggest fetishes. Or at least on of my favorites.

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Yep this, RichDiamond ship, and Bon-Bon with Lyra, Tootsie Flute [shifters like on the show], and Amethyst Star. Are the final incest ships. Then I got lots of nonCest ships planned [SilverVinylTavi; SpikiLee; Celestia's Herd; ScootaDashAdoption [with a touch of LunaXTrixie]; Luna's Transient Herd Status; And that's all I can think of for now.]

But their going to be fun as I get to them.

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Something magical .

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Thanks, I made sure my Pre-readers with access to GDocs went over it a few times before giving me the all clear for submitting. So hopefully that mixed with a shorter fic will mean less mistakes.

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yeah this is a super cute ship fic, wait till you get into the conversation / argument between Berry Punch and Ms. Horny. Ms. Horny is awesome.

Before I read this I would like to say, 'wow, that is a lot of triggers'.

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true, so what'd you think about the fic after ?

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Pretty good. Maybe a little slow on the buildup if the reader just wants the clop, but the story behind that is solid.
That many triggers and none of them feel too forced.

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Thank you. Yeah the ForbiddenLoveVerse is basically all about trying to build a relationship / solid foundation for the ship [even in short ones like this], so the emotional payload is greater when clop happens.

And thanks, I was worried that, that many triggers might've made this fic tank, I'm glad that it worked out as well as I hoped it would.

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It's the base for a future bit of polyamory. It's something that I'm going to be building up towards across a few fics, but right now It's only going to be Ruby and Berry in this fic.

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Awesome, I get a 'stache . Thanks for the compliments, and yes you spelled Kudos right .

4931878 Ok cool. That'll be neat to see when it happens.
4885127 Yes. I love all the pet names.
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Great end to this fic! I'm glad to see Spike accepts Ruby and Berry.
Ruby's courage along with Berry's pride for her was heartwarming.

I'm looking forward to seeing DT/Rich and the others!

Honestly, the story itself is pretty good, but it seems rife with errors; most of them are fragments or misplaced punctuation. There were even one or two capitalization mistakes too. May I suggest getting somebody to look the story over?

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I had three people look it over though.

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How they didn't notice the fragments, I don't know.

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*shrugs* I'm just grateful about the things they did catch, and that Google word checker lets me fix words that are woefully misspelled .

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Most definitely not . After all, with all the sugar, cake, and stuff Pinks dives in / pops out of / bathes in (other than a normal bath) in the show. The fact that ponies run around in the nude, taking part of highly stress (on the body) activities (Hoofball / Running of the Leaves / Other stuff that'd cause sweat and lots of it), and the fact that they sit on stuff in the nude. Yet never catch the stuff in any form of canon. Shows that Yeasts Infections are something that don't exist in Equestria (or the world they are on. Since Gryphons don't get it either).

Seriously for a female. There'd be nowhere better to be born. Other than dealing with Estrus. Estrus sucks on so many levels (and it's good it only happens between April and September [in 18 - 23 day cycles]) which makes it less than a human females. But other than that, it sucks.).

What in cardinal blue fuck?

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cardinal blue fuck ?

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I have SilverOctyVinyl partially written in GDocs, but RichDiamond hasn't been started yet . I haven't had much time to write IRL, heck I haven't gotten to my newest chapters of Types of Love and The Golden Crusade since their last update T_T. But one of these days I'll hopefully have the time and energy IRL to write it up.

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So my old account that had all my fics was blocked from me and I lost all of it. But I've plans to get them back up.

SilverOctyVinyl and RichDiamonds were some great fic ideas that I had bouncing around in my head for years now. But with the depression, and then just really busy IRL. I haven't had the time to redo them from scratch.

Where's the vore?