ShiftCest is BestCest! [FLVerse fic] Ruby accidentally gets drunk and makes a drunken confession of love to her mother. Berry Punch, refuses at first wanting her daughter sober to talk about it. This fic is what happens from that talk.
I was so eager to read BerryPinch that I skipped to this fic. I'm loving it after just the first chapter. There are fewer errors in this writing so either you've improved our your proofreaders are getting better or both.
I love the setup for this story, Berry's inner monologue, and Ruby's cute-thusiasm.
I think I'll go back to the first fic and finish reading Derpy/Dinky, but I'm glad I got to see this one sooner rather than later and have it to look forward to.
Wow. This is incest to....wow. but this is so well written I'm going to continue!
I was so eager to read BerryPinch that I skipped to this fic. I'm loving it after just the first chapter. There are fewer errors in this writing so either you've improved our your proofreaders are getting better or both.
I love the setup for this story, Berry's inner monologue, and Ruby's cute-thusiasm.
I think I'll go back to the first fic and finish reading Derpy/Dinky, but I'm glad I got to see this one sooner rather than later and have it to look forward to.
hmmm,just finished the first chapter. I'm happy that I couldn't find a single error.
I found a few errors, but they are well hidden so Kudos (never sure how to spell that ) to you for that
best fetish ever good choice.
not sure if that is a good pet name but it kinda works, so thats good.
cant wait to read the next few chapters
have a moustache