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Good story :'D
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it
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Frak, was worried about that but I couldn't get an answer on whether HTML Tags worked there. Thank you so much for pointing that out. *goes to fix*
That's a thing?
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Two things.
1) I died watching that Gif. That is awesome.
and
2) Yep. It's where someone or something cums with the force to physically lift / toss someone.
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4882708 That's fucking awesome.
I must find more.
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Wow. This is incest to....wow. but this is so well written I'm going to continue!
That warning was to long to read
I have no idea what I've just read myself into
Hmmmm, I will read this as well, and try to help a bit more, pointing out mistakes, not like I did in the last one.
But I will read this other day.
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I can't find it anymore but there was one with Rainbow Dash cumming a sonic rainboom out of her pussy onto Saorin, with a weaponized beam of cum blasting onto him. It was hillarious, but I have no idea where I saw it at.
But yeah, cum rocketing is one of my biggest fetishes. Or at least on of my favorites.
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Yep this, RichDiamond ship, and Bon-Bon with Lyra, Tootsie Flute [shifters like on the show], and Amethyst Star. Are the final incest ships. Then I got lots of nonCest ships planned [SilverVinylTavi; SpikiLee; Celestia's Herd; ScootaDashAdoption [with a touch of LunaXTrixie]; Luna's Transient Herd Status; And that's all I can think of for now.]
But their going to be fun as I get to them.
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Something magical
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Thanks, I made sure my Pre-readers with access to GDocs went over it a few times before giving me the all clear for submitting. So hopefully that mixed with a shorter fic will mean less mistakes.
I was so eager to read BerryPinch that I skipped to this fic. I'm loving it after just the first chapter. There are fewer errors in this writing so either you've improved our your proofreaders are getting better or both.
I love the setup for this story, Berry's inner monologue, and Ruby's cute-thusiasm.
I think I'll go back to the first fic and finish reading Derpy/Dinky, but I'm glad I got to see this one sooner rather than later and have it to look forward to.
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Before I read this I would like to say, 'wow, that is a lot of triggers'.
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Bastard Wing sounds like a really good name for a Gundam Wing abridged series.
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I would watch it ^_^.
hmmm,just finished the first chapter. I'm happy that I couldn't find a single error.
I'm not sure if it's been brought up yet, but these pet names are amazing.
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It hasn't and thank you
. In my head canon when making this, I thought of Berry Punch who'd be the kind of pony to have lots of pet names for things and ponies. And the more she liked a pony the more pet names she'd have, with special ones for the bedroom, and random ones for everyday life.
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Pretty good. Maybe a little slow on the buildup if the reader just wants the clop, but the story behind that is solid.
That many triggers and none of them feel too forced.
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And thanks, I was worried that, that many triggers might've made this fic tank, I'm glad that it worked out as well as I hoped it would.
I'm really enjoying their romantic moments together a lot. Now, with the foreplay, it's getting pretty exciting while still staying very sweet. Nice work, from what I've read so far!
Since this appears to be leading to another polyamorous relationship, you're welcome to add it to the raffle with Torch.
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It's the base for a future bit of polyamory. It's something that I'm going to be building up towards across a few fics, but right now It's only going to be Ruby and Berry in this fic.
I found a few errors, but they are well hidden so Kudos (never sure how to spell that
) to you for that 
best fetish ever
good choice.
cant wait to read the next few chapters
have a moustache
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Awesome, I get a 'stache
. Thanks for the compliments, and yes you spelled Kudos right 
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I like the head-canon you're working with in this universe the more I read and understand it. It fits well enough and is pretty creative. The Nascents make for interesting variety in how their bodies respond to stimulation, and the magical elements of sex are exotic and interesting, if a bit disconnected from reality. I can't say I've ever known cum rocketing to be written by anyone but you, and I'm not sure how to feel about it really beyond giving a chuckle. I've enjoyed this pair's prolonged foreplay with each other, in any case, and I'm glad to see Ruby get full oral stimulation in this chapter.
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I think I posted the GIf somewhere in this fic. But:
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[from Scary Movie. That scene always drew a laugh from me, and for some reason became one of my favorite fetishes.]
And thanks, for the compliments
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4931878 Ok cool. That'll be neat to see when it happens.
4885127 Yes. I love all the pet names.
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Great end to this fic! I'm glad to see Spike accepts Ruby and Berry.
Ruby's courage along with Berry's pride for her was heartwarming.
I'm looking forward to seeing DT/Rich and the others!
Honestly, the story itself is pretty good, but it seems rife with errors; most of them are fragments or misplaced punctuation. There were even one or two capitalization mistakes too. May I suggest getting somebody to look the story over?
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How they didn't notice the fragments, I don't know.
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*shrugs* I'm just grateful about the things they did catch, and that Google word checker lets me fix words that are woefully misspelled
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... OK so yet another way Equestria is infinitely better than Earth: Yeast infections are apparently not a thing o.O
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Most definitely not
. After all, with all the sugar, cake, and stuff Pinks dives in / pops out of / bathes in (other than a normal bath) in the show. The fact that ponies run around in the nude, taking part of highly stress (on the body) activities (Hoofball / Running of the Leaves / Other stuff that'd cause sweat and lots of it), and the fact that they sit on stuff in the nude. Yet never catch the stuff in any form of canon. Shows that Yeasts Infections are something that don't exist in Equestria (or the world they are on. Since Gryphons don't get it either).
Seriously for a female. There'd be nowhere better to be born. Other than dealing with Estrus. Estrus sucks on so many levels (and it's good it only happens between April and September [in 18 - 23 day cycles]) which makes it less than a human females. But other than that, it sucks.).
4884822 oh my god so would I. It would be amazing
What in cardinal blue fuck?
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cardinal blue fuck ?
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I have SilverOctyVinyl partially written in GDocs, but RichDiamond hasn't been started yet
. I haven't had much time to write IRL, heck I haven't gotten to my newest chapters of Types of Love and The Golden Crusade since their last update T_T. But one of these days I'll hopefully have the time and energy IRL to write it up.
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So my old account that had all my fics was blocked from me and I lost all of it. But I've plans to get them back up.
SilverOctyVinyl and RichDiamonds were some great fic ideas that I had bouncing around in my head for years now. But with the depression, and then just really busy IRL. I haven't had the time to redo them from scratch.
Where's the vore?