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Brony for life


There are many academy records in the Wonderbolt Academy, and Spitfire loves getting cadets to train hard and shatter those records.

There is one record she never wanted to see broken: the Academy Death Record. In the ten years since she became a captain and began training cadets, the Wonderbolt Academy has never seen a single pony die in action. That record was broken today when a malfunctioning piece of training equipment took the life of one of the newest recruits... and a personal friend of Spitfire's.

Co-authors: Scootareader, Joshwolf999
EDIT: FEATURED 8/12/14 8:44 PM

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Comments ( 131 )

Wow, this sounds good! I better go read it!

Excuse me, I seem to have something stuck in my heart ... :fluttercry:

I'm gonna read this soon! Sounds good! I also like the cover art!

Now I'm said most of the stories I find have rainbow dash die in a flight accident.:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

4840478 I have two clopfics you know.:rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by ShimmeringStallion deleted Aug 12th, 2014

Dash died again?:ajbemused: oh well, a deal is a deal.:facehoof:

4840496 Aww, it was just a joke, I even ended it as such! You didn't have to delete it... 'sides, with the other comment, it made it sooooo questionable!

"Clopfics that end in Rainbow Dash dying"... Sounds like a group-name! :rainbowwild:

4840781 I just didnt want you to spoil the story with your comment so i deleted it :rainbowlaugh:

Yeah, this coverart is better than the one I would've made. I'm gonna read the story now!

Awesome. And sad :rainbowdetermined2:


And if found no typos whatsoever,

At your service, m'lord. :raritywink:

The feels:fluttercry::heart:.:raritycry: What are you talking about. I'm not crying, I just have something in my eye

4841153 The feels are in my eye! Th-They won't come out!

4841197 I was going to make a dirty joke, but I feel like its a disgrace to the topic at hand:rainbowlaugh:; or should I say, hoof? Yes, I know, commence the face palms:facehoof::rainbowlaugh:

So...I will be seeing more like this sorta story soon, right, guys? 'Cuz it was super good.


4841275 Aww, c'moooon! Don't just hold a joke back! :pinkiesad2:

A story that I was a part of is in the feature box.
Someday, I'll tell my grandchildren that I managed to do it. Right between something about a gazebo and a super popular changeling fic.

Now that, is an academy record.”

Also five stories. FIVE! You must really hate Dash.


From the feels-wrecked one known as...

Did you use a fucking meme generator to make that cover art?

4842545 Yes. you got a problem with that? (takes off sunglasses) deal with it.

I think that's a little weird.

Not gonna lie, I thought we were gonna have to drag you kicking and screaming.

Made me think of this:

Great fic too! :fluttercry::flutterrage::raritycry:

That was about what I expected.

4843209 I actually search for stories by characters :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy: Also im glad you like my fic!

A good walk through the stages of grief.

I do that too. Sometimes you just want to read about a certain pony.

4841485 well, I can think of something else that would possibly be in your eye:rainbowlaugh:. Sorry, but you asked for it XD

4844032 I DID, buuuut that was... kind've... a letdown... I was expecting something better...

... 3/10.

4844067 I'm not a comedian. I'm just some guy on the internet making inappropriate jokes on a heartfelt story:rainbowlaugh:. Also, I have a really immature sense of humor. Lastly, this joke has been proven funny by at least 5 people I know, so here goes nothing. What's the difference between archeology and grave robbing. about a thousand years XD. Seriously though, if you don't find that funny, well, there is just times when you can't please anyone XD

*shakes your hoof* Nice ta meetcha! They just released me from the asylum yesterday!

Nice place, ain't it?

Love it! Here's a life quote for you in return:

When you copy from one, they call it plagiarism. When you copy from many, they call it research!

I do! I regularly search for Twilight/Rainbow stories (when I want Twidash) or Vinyl/Octavia (when I want Taviscratch). I also search for individual characters on occasion when the mood hits me.

4846618 If you want a good TwiDash story then look no farther! No More Magic is the story for you!

This Should Be Featuread Again....THIS WAS AMAZING......


I'll be honest I really felt any sadness reading the story, sorry.

4849145 I guess some ponies have no soul lol.

Everyone feels differently. :twilightsmile: Thank you for reading. I hope you enjoyed some parts of it, if the feels didn't get to you.

4843209 Sometimes people just put other to add in surprise. So, you know that someone's in it and you're technically adding their tag. You're just not specifically putting them in. They should've done that. There have been a few stories on this site with twist characters and they just put other, so it doesn't spoil it.

P.S. I do look up stories by the character tags, but that's only if I'm looking for a specific story and I don't remember the name.

My current emotions: :applecry: :fluttercry: :fluttershysad: :pinkiegasp: :raritycry: :raritydespair: :twilightangry2:
And of course.....
HOW COULD YOU KILL RAINBOW DASH!!!!! :twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:

Just kidding. :pinkiehappy:


4850021 I enjoyed it, I just have a slight case of psychosis that makes me very emotionally thick. But I am very good at acting so I use that to not look like an asshole :twilightsheepish:

This story had a lot of heart and soul to it. I doubt Pinkie would have been quite so oblivious, but that's nit-picking. I'm giving this a fave. Nice job.

4852212 glad you like it! don't forget leave a like!

Now that, is an academy record.

HOLY COW. THAT LINE. FEEEEEEEELS!!!!! :pinkiegasp: :fluttershbad:

You sir managed to turn an annoying meme into an amazing, emotional, thought-provoking story. It was wonderfully crafted. By far the best thing was the huge focus on Spitfire's turmoil instead of something common such as her friends. There was none of her going around to apologize, only to get a door slammed in her face. There was none of her quitting due to her mistake. Everything was about her struggling, and then eventually returning to honor the memory of a friend.

For this amazing story, I bequeath to you...a mustache. :moustache:

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