Hi! I'm a Christian female who loves My Little Pony! I have a somewhat unhealthy obsession with Discord.
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That was soooooooo cute!!!
The d'awws... they're too powerful...
*struggles for breath against the d'awws*
How cute! Fluttershy's braver than people give credit for, so him acknowledging it was really nice.
Aww.
That. Was. ADORABLE
Great story! I love everything about it, especially the great detailed descriptions.
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Heehee, thank you! I'm so glad that you all enjoyed it and thought that it was cute.
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Thanks! I strive to make sure I'm keeping everything detailed.
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Thank you! Yes, I thought that he would probably notice how brave she was at some point or another.
5880007 You're welcome!
Well, this was rather nice. I mostly loved the first half, Discord's worry over Fluttershy and putting his trust in her was great.
Awwww <3
Loved it c:
Also one part that seems to need a rewording, it didn't flow too well.
I read it as
But the original sentence seemed confusing. Mostly "withed", otherwise the intent was clear enough.
5879957 Also holy poops I liked how you color-coded your reply, it's pretty cool!
D'aww, that was so cute! The fact that I was snuggling with my Fluttershy plushie made this even better.
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thanks! :) :)
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Oopsie! Sorry about those grammar derps, but thank you for pointing them out. I really need a proofreader. I'll try to fix the chapter when I can figure out how to edit it without deleting it x3 Still new to this interface of submitting stories/chapters.
Edit: Derps fixed!
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Thank you.
5880347 Oh wow, you're new here? This is great for a first story!
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Yes, well, I'm not exactly new here, per se, but I'm new to posting things here. I've been a lurker and a reader here for quite some time. But, thank you!
Now that's how you balance Fluttershy, doubt in the voice, evidence in the actions. A nicely done job!
Nice story! The characters seem perfect in terms of personality, and i laughed at the bowl of sugar part!
Yo why did you just kill me? Honestly, someday I won't be able to return from death-by-cuteness.
This is incredibly well written, especially how you portray Discord's unusually normal friendship with Fluttershy.
Bravo dear writer
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Thank you! I tried to put emphasis on getting their characterizations right.
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Ah, thank you so much
5882400 I meant every word. You made a usually unpredictable character seem more... I want to say "human" but... Anyways, point is, this is a story to be proud of
Congrats for getting on the popular list!
I loved it! It was quite well written and was very cute.
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Oh my! Brave is on the popular list?! *explodes--metaphorically*
Thank you for alerting me!
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Thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
5883039 You're welcome! Such a good story deserves the Featued Box as well! I hope it gets there, seeing as it advanced to the popular list!
Truly, Fluttershy must be the bravest pony of them all. Real courage is being scared witless and moving on anyway. If I know Fluttershy, that's every second of everyday.
Fluttershy is just like Mrs Brisby from the The Secret of NIMH
Aw~This was such a wonderful story! I like how "Dissy" has kind of become Discord's nickname in many stories, and here it works great from Fluttershy. Their characterizations are done very well, and it's sweet how Discord tries to protect Fluttershy and insists she is courageous (which she is, really).
Nice.
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*nods in agreement*
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Haha, it's been a while since I've familiarized myself with that, but I do see a resemblance there.
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Thank you! Hehe, yeah. I admittedly use the nickname 'Dissy' when referring to him outside of stories, anyway. Thanks, I'm glad that you think that they are characterized well. Glad to hear that you enjoyed it.
There are literally 69 likes right now, and I'm hesitant to change that...plus this is a Fluttercord fanfic.
Beautiful.
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You beat me to it. That was exactly what I was going to say.
Am I allowed to be utterly shippy gleeful? Because even if it says no romance, it is so easy to see this as a prelude to it.
Either way, great work here.
Bravery comes in many forms. Having strength. Showing strength. Being able to intimidate or outwit.
Bravery can also be...well, not being afraid. You've done an excellent job of really focusing that into this small gem. It's a well written bit that makes me wonder "Yeah, why don't we see Discord helping with Fluttershy's duties as animal caretaker? What's he like in polite, day to day activity, now that he's reformed?".
Nice story. I look forward to more.
5886649 Hah. Of course!
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Thank you! Yes, Discord's motivations and his past and my headcanons on how he acts in a more mundane setting are things I often think about.
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Yes, you are allowed to have shipping glee. I personally don't ship them romantically, but I don't mind if you see this story as potentially romantic.
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Thank you
She knows Harry's only trying to imitate her: Praise the Sun!
Cats will mess you up no matter who you are, and it never feels right to fight back.
Some ponies run at him, screaming. <coughCelestiacough>
Couldn't Discord just snap-heal the wound?
Celestia called him both those names, often, once upon a time.
Seems legit.
She wasn't even scared of him in the maze. She was counter-trolling him like Deadpool would.
That was sweet.
No course language huh, well foop that shizznit.
Lol I thinks there's something wrong with me
Anywho I really enjoyed this tale. The characters were on point and fun. And the moral was great.
There is no bravery without fear Ms. Shy
Fluttershy was a hundred percent in character! It! Was! SO CUTE! XD
As for Discord, on one hand, I feel like this is something he would do; on the other, it seems a little overplayed. He was adorable, and I wanted to hug and squeeze him like jello! XD But, at the same time, he seemed a little weak. You almost made him sound like Fluttershy. Not that I mind this type of characterization of anyone, it's just that Discord was an itty, bitty bit OOC.
In any case, I LOVE IT! Not bad for a Fluttercord fic! Then again, I love Fluttercord, and its a tie with Twicord in second. THIS was just WONDERFUL TO READ! XDDDDD
OH MY CELESTIA IT'S SO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FLUTTERCORD MUST BE CANNON OR I WILL DESTROY THE UNIVERSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fluttercord for the win!
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Bashing other people's ships isn't very nice. I rather like Dislestia. We don't have to choose one or the other to be the best; we can appreciate and/or respect both ships, even if we don't ship one of them.
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I'm very glad that you enjoyed it!
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Thank you very much! I'm glad that you enjoyed my story. Yes, I know that my Discord can be a bit OOC. I tend to write him a lot 'fluffier' than in canon.
6100976 sorry, you're right. I just become a bit competitive sometimes.
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That's alright
:3 Hey there.
This a great story.
I really like it.
And Bluegrassbrooke also likes it.
I'm obsessed with Bluegrassbrooke.
I am also obsessed with Discord.
I am so happy I discovered your stories.
Write moar?
so cute!!!
so cute!!!
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Don't worry I'll save you from your evil doppelganger!
TOOOOOOOOO CUUUUTEEEEEE
She was at first. She shrieked and hid, I recall... That would be interesting to discuss... the guilt, the shame, the regret. Agony, I suppose.