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MlpFluttershy


"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." - Dr. Seuss

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After overhearing Fluttershy talk about her crush, Discord makes it his goal to find out who this pony is.


A silly little Fluttercord one-shot

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 34 )

OH MAN I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL!
I am greatly fluff-writing-deprived at the moment. I'm kinda doing the same as you, I guess...but in a different way.
Dang, Fluttershy was assertive in this! Persistence for the win!:yay:

AAAHHHHHHHH!!! SO AWESOME!! I absolutely love how Fluttershy acted in the end! That was absolutely adorable!! And Discord you stinker, thinking to spy on Fluttershy in the shower...SQUEE!! I LOVED THIS!!

:flutterrage: OMG I don't know why there are dislikes on this story, I really hate it when people just dislike a story to be a troll or just because they don't like the ship. They should only dislike if the story was really bad and badly written, and this story was absolutely AWESOME!!

adorable =3

But I just wanna say Discord was kindof a stalker XD

5749620 No, you called me sir. :pinkiesmile:

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I say that for every story I enjoy. I'm a proofreader, so I'm just used to giving criticism. :derpytongue2:

Five Flutter-yay's to that book. Adorable! Discord truly is a gentlecolt!
:yay:

I love it have :yay:!!!!!some heats :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

This story...

It's amazing:heart:

Sweetest thing EVAAAAAR! :heart:

Cute, sweet, and perfectly Fluttershy. :pinkiehappy:

how kawaii fluttercord best combo ever:pinkiehappy:

This was a sweet and lovely story. I liked it.

Cute. Fun. That about what I can say.

I don't really get why you found it necessary to say the ponies wear clothes. It doesn't seem that relevant. I kinda hold by that other story I found once which pointed out that it might be a little different spying on someone in the shower than seeing them normally, even if it is a nudist society. So, redundant author's note is redundant, if you ask me.

I like that you, barely, avoided the diary cliche, by having Shy get to him before that, because if there is a cliche in fanfic it is "oh, look a diary".

Well done, have a like. All good Fluttercord deserves all the ones they can get.

Ehhhh Fluttershy seemed kinda ooc towards the end.:twilightsheepish:

I like it! Sweet Discord < 3

Awesomeness! :yay:
The only problem I really had with it was the OOC-ness, but that's just nitpicking.
Have a RD :rainbowdetermined2:
And a derpy :derpytongue2:

IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! ONE ZILLION POINTS TO GRYFFENDOR (or whichever house you're in) XD :heart: :derpytongue2: :heart: :heart: :heart: :yay: I DEMAND A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!

Ohmahgoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh! This is awesome! The people that hit dislike on this is an ugly troll, each and every one of them. Sequel please? Please? I'm doing my puppy dog eyes, so please?

So I was checking if you had updated Discord's Student, and upon seeing that you hadn't, I decided to give this another read.

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It's still pretty darn awesome. Deserves every single one of those upvotes!

I smiled. This was cute. And funny.

This was sooooo cut and adorable:yay:

I so wish this story had more then 149 likes...
oh wait! I know how to fix that!

*click*

there 150 likes

This was a cute story!

I liked how you showed Discord's character in this, both his chaotic and jealous feelings for Fluttershy and the world. And I liked that conflict he had was resolved rather quickly thanks to Fluttershy's help.

You deserve all my likes!

Sooooooo cute!

I love how Fluttershy doesn't take Discord's crap and trips him up at the end.

...am I the only one who for like, half a second thought that when he said

A million years passed faster than I thought.

It meant his magic just went out of control an somehow sped up his perception of time so litterally a million years passed, and everyone he knew minus the immortals were dead?

Short, sweet, I loved it! Great job :)

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