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Daxn


Vidi Terram Novam, Vidi Caelum Novum. Terram, Terram Novam in Hanc Vitam! Mazda descedentem et absterget omnia dolori lacrimas!

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This story is a sequel to Ab Initio-From the Start-Al Principio.


Twilight Velvet: a mare that, broken down by her own fear of lack of control and Death, decided to turn her daughter Twilight Sparkle, punished by Princess Celestia with a term in Magic Kidnergarten, into her own little foal, and tried to make Twilight's friends join her obsession. Kicked out of her own home by Night Light, her husband, Velvet has joined Pinkie Pie, one of her "little foals," in Ponyville. Together, they decided to do something... peculiar, with their combined monetary and mind forces: create an Adult Daycare for Adult Foals, thus cashing off their obsession.

At the same time, Silver Spoon and Sweetie Belle, after one Foal Play session, have decided to mend the schism existing between the Cutie Mark Crusaders and Tiara's crowd.

What adventures will be experienced by the two mares? Will be all the customers squeaky-clean ponies, or a "naughty" one will join with the normal ones?

What will happen to Silver Spoon, Sweetie Belle and the latter's friends, now that their feud had been quelled?

Find out here, in this story!


Set after the 30th chapter of "Ab Initio- From the Start- Al Principio"

Reading the story is storngly advised for understamd everything this story will contain here.

OC credits will listed chapter by chapter.

Re-worked on the 12th of January.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 54 )

Hm... I don't know what I think about this story. The next few chapters will make the decision.

YAY NEW STORY! An this is one I have been anticipating. Still want to see how the other story ends though. Not now though its 2am where I live.:twilightsheepish: IMA go crazy if I try to read this tired.:pinkiecrazy:

I just hope Pinkie Pie doesn't forget about her instructions. She has a job to do, and like it or not she has to do it if she doesn't want to end up in trouble with Twilight. :eeyup:

I see now. We're trying to reform Velvet with this Adult Foal Daycare, are we?

I just hope for your sake that you make it seem cute.

Also, I want to see you continue Sweetiesilver in Knowledge Is Crinkly, as well as keep Ab Initio going as well. I need a calming end to the fic that started this.

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Not exactly. It however keep her occupied.

Also, I want to see you continue Sweetiesilver in Knowledge Is Crinkly,

That is a pretty hard endeavor, but I will try create something readable.

I didn't finish From The Start but I'm reading this story anyways because sex. nuf said :ajsmug:

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There won't be any true clop, thought, since I can hardly concieve sex that isn't something that for many is IKEA Erotica.

I am also unaware about what is actually considered "sexy," so everything is a guess-existimate

I will do it, however, because I guessed it was a decent touch for the story,

4660047 agreed. i like from the start, i wouldn't have been an editor/co-writer for it as long as i was if i didn't, but i look forward to seeing where this goes. i also think this story will make Knowledge is crinkly, the first side story to from the start, most likely canceled, since it can easily blend with this one

4677650 i don't understand why some find regression sexy, especially with the ponies. all i see is cuteness from the adult foals. daxn never intended for anything sexy in the slightest.

please don't take this the wrong way, i just wanted to give my opinion, since daxn is a friend of mine

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i also think this story will make Knowledge is crinkly, the first side story to from the start, most likely canceled, since it can easily blend with this one

I've worked hard on the third (and last) chapter, I better use it!
(if you are interested, sned me a PM for the third chapter. I could use some advice.)

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Well, actually, in this story, I am going to mention something more sexually explicit, but nothing too serious... hopefully.

4677891 Much disappointment
4681543 I don't fined regression or adult foals sexy, it's just sex+diapers=Fap nuf said

Only 25 minutes after opening the door creaked open to reveal….

Please be Sweetie and Silver, please, please...

You haven't updated Knowledge Is Crinkly in forever, and I'd love it if Sweetie and Silver went first.

It seems a bit odd how two-faced Pinkie Pie seems to be about fueling Velvet's insanity, and the inefectiveness of the thearpist. It's almost as if she can't decide whether or not to betray her orders, for the sake of living her fantasy.

Well if you were getting a business out of a person's insanity, and their insanity was beneficial on both a personal and monetary level, I can see how one could be conflicted.

On another note, I would like to say that I'm enjoying this thus far, and that I ascribe to the "soon™" mentality regarding updates, and didn't think the wait was too long.

Comment posted by bright foal deleted Aug 2nd, 2014

4770303 i agree. they were the first that came to mind for me. i do hope daxn remembers not to give silver that accent though.

Well, the first day went fine so far. I hope Velvet's Crazyness will stay in the house when the other two left.

I just hope that is the extent Velvet's madness extends to. Because if not, when Twilight returns to Ponyville, she's going to be furious with Pinkie Pie for allowing it to get so out of control.

Comment posted by bright foal deleted Aug 28th, 2014

Good setup! Can't wait to read next chapter.:pinkiesad2::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by Blue Flash deleted Aug 14th, 2014

4788110 The only thing I hate more than cliffhangers is poorly written story. This was not a poorly written story. But I still hate that cliffhanger. Kudos to you, Daxn, for a beautifully (:rainbowdetermined2:: and awesomely) written chapter. Your prize for this awesome chapter: One of Fluttershy's famous, awesome, cool, radical, did I forget to say awesome yay's

:yay:: Yay!

Wait.. Is it toasted carrot, roasted carrot or burned carrot?:rainbowderp:

4923023 we had some probloms with that name,:derpytongue2:
also

Author's Note:

Partial credit to Bright_Foal.

really?
I wrote the whole song and gave most of the frame work, not talking on logic screening, but oh well, credit is credit.

p.s.
If you keep messing up the credit I may not help you anymore, sure it will take 3-4 more chapters, but that's my payment dude!

...I hope it's just restricted to those two and other willing foalplayers. I can only imagine what Princess Twilight would think if everypony went into foal mode.

It seems that Matrona might have misgivings about Twilight Velvet's mental state.

I must say, this is surprisingly interesting. I think I will continue to follow this all the way through and maybe later give better feedback. Not entirely what to say here other than, congratulations on another good story.

well, i look forward to when sweetie and silver arrive... and when twilight comes back and has to put up with this, maybe even having to detire velvet a few times before she takes the hint

also, the names of the other two adult foals changed a lot. why was that?


PS. it feels good just being a reader again. man, was it exhausting being the reader and co-writer, though i did still enjoy the experience

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Disorganization is an awful thing to witness.

Huh, it seems so weird that Pinkie is surprised by all the ponies looking so weirdly at her. I would've thought she'd come to expect such a thing by deciding to play the part of Velvet's third child.

If that end comment is anything to go by, it looks like Silver Spoon and Sweetie Belle are the next clients.

Hello, Silvs. Hello, Sweetie.

Nice to see you here.

me like.
also you know where to find me if you need help.

Another excellent chapter. Thank you!

So, does the full treatment involve both bladder and bowel incontinence? And two of the previous options involve one or the other? :trixieshiftright:

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Yes, the full treatment, for now, is incontinence of both things. the other options are either of those.

5341941 I thought that was the case, but I couldn't be sure.

I'm out of this. sorry, its personal... I don't like fillies and colts in diapers, sorta.. you know, keep them innocent

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Nothing sexual happened, so...

What, this fic is cancelled?! :pinkiegasp:

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Yest. It's difficult to write something, if there is no true plot to speak of.

5416537 So, does mean the end of the "From The Start" universe?

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From me, yes, it's "sleeping" now.

Naturally, other authors can use this as base, if they wish. I could even make them canon some of them.

5416553 We can't help you to make a plot and you make the story anyway? :applejackunsure:

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You can. In fact, it's appreciated!

5436571 YAY! :yay: Thank you! :pinkiehappy: I will be very glad to help you to make a ne w plot! :pinkiesmile: Just wait for a brief time and I will give you a plot! (Just be comprehensive with me, I am a Brazilian :twilightblush: )

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Okay.

Also, do not worry, I am ITalian, so I can get how English can be difficult sometimes.

5436755 Hehe, thanks again, to soothe me :pinkiesmile: Well I realized that you were not English by the name of chapters :derpytongue2: And I think we should talk in English, because I don't speak Italian and I think you don't Speak Portuguese, right?

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Yes, I don'tn speak Portoguese.

And suddenly Velvet comes off as a bit of a bitch. Considering it was either that or send her to a mental institution, Sparkle showed a lot of mercy there. It's like: "How dare she not institutionalize me and let me turn my insane obsession into a business! The nerve!" Just speaks of bad parenting, not to mention Night Light from the original who seemed more interested in his standing with the nobility than what makes his daughter happy.

i think it maybe cancelled seeing as it hasnt been updated in almost 4 years

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