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Just a writer who likes MLP and hopes to make a living off it: https://ko-fi.com/ink_hoof

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This story is a sequel to My Little Pony: Friendship is Shining


When Shining Armor first came to Ponyville, he brought his sister with him. After the events with Nightmare Moon, Shining stayed in Ponyville while Twilight Sparkle went back home. Now Twilight is back in Ponyville with her parents to visit, and guess who wants to stay?

A story set in what I'm calling The Shiny-verse

Chapters (9)
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Comments ( 30 )

So nice of Twiley and her folks to pay Shining Armor a visit. I'm sure he'll appreciate it. :heart:

Almost forgot about the aged up Cake Twins there for a moment. :twilightoops:

"Oh, we went on a second honeymoon when Shining got accepted into the academy," the mother responded. "In fact, that was when we-"

That was probably when Twiley was "concevied", so to speak. :duck:

Twilight having a crush on Pound Cake? Oh goody, just wait til Shining Armor hears about it. He'll tease her to no end. :rainbowlaugh:

Shining Armor is never going to get use to having anyone call him "Shiny-hiny". Except potentially his special somepony, but that's different. :rainbowlaugh:

That's a nice conversation between Shining Armor and Big Macintosh. :eeyup:

Go team Pinkie lol!

Losing a game of cards to Angel? Why doesn't that surprise me? :rainbowlaugh:

Spike, I'd like you to meet my good friend Murphy...

nice short and sweet chapter :)

"He took a full-speed flying filly to a very sensitive part of his body and is waiting for the pain to subside."

Wow Twilight, you really don't know your own strength. :rainbowlaugh:

Spike jinxed it, thrice over, once the Cutie Mark Crusaders is born... So we have SIX! Six Foals without Cutie Marks. Consider Ponyville burning when that happens.

Another cute chapter. :)

Though I think it might flow better if you used "Twilight Velvet" and "Night Light" as the parents names instead of saying 'The Mother" or "The Father."

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Yes, it probably would. I had intended to have the names put in after the first chapter. For some reason just never felt like the right moment. By the end, it had been too long to toss names in.

It's okay Twilight Velvet, it's always hard to admit your kids are growing up. But it's a part of life, and it's something every parent has to accept at some point. You'll still see them, and you'll still have the memories. :eeyup:

"Are you sure this was a good idea?" Spike asked as they watched the young unicorn run off.

"Probably not," Shining answered, "but I'm sure it will be entertaining. Come on. Let's go before she clears half the shelves."

Having second thoughts now are we? Well it's too late to say "never mind". Shining Armor you have no idea what kind of horror you've just unleashed. :rainbowlaugh:/:twilightoops:/:pinkiecrazy:

Famous last words Spike, Famous last words.:ajbemused:

Nice way to bring Twilght to Ponyville also for her to have a crush. Best of luck with the series.

This is a perfect example of why I think they're overdoing Big Mac's two-word vocabulary in the show. Being quiet and not saying much is fine, but there are times when even the quietest of people (or ponies) will have something to say. And when they do say something, you know it's going to be worth listening to. I hope that Mac gets to do something like this in the show at some point, even if the topic of conversation is completely different.
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Nice chapter, but there are two points where you wrote "Shining mother" instead of "Shining's mother".

Pinkie likes her alliteration. So, are they going to cook up a solution with the knowledge they!ve accrued? :rainbowlaugh: sorry, I had to say it! I had to!

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Because that wascally wabbit is tricky.

"That doesn't make sense."

Make sense, oh what fun is there in making sense? We really need a Discord emote.

"Oh, we went on a second honeymoon when Shining got accepted into the academy," the mother responded. "In fact, that was when we-"

Aaaaaaaand Shining's been scarred for life :trollestia:

Ah, Big Mac. Quiet, yet so very wise :eeyup:

"Besides, how much trouble can one filly cause?"

At that moment, Murphy, the god of misfortune, felt a disturbance in the force.

"Are you sure three foals weren't enough?" Shining Armor asked his mom, grinning.

Who's the third?

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I think the third ‘foal’ is Night Light, who acts like a foal at heart at times.

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Twilight Velvet is bio-luminescent. She is literally the Shining Mother.

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At that moment, all of Ponyville felt that impending doom was rapidly approaching. But instead of being scared or worried about it, they were just really annoyed.

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