• Member Since 24th Aug, 2012
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Garbo


A Pasty Plebeian Pencil Pusher

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An alicorn named Notional walks into an Equestrian town, only hoping to find someone to listen to what he has to say. His expectations are not met. Written as an acrostic with a strict line endpoint.

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Comments ( 11 )

Man, how long did this take?

5089092
Not as long as you'd think, but a while.

This, my friend, is takes true talent. :raritywink:

Good job.

:fluttercry: this is really good. The sad thing is that this is always happening. Shunning people because they are different.:twilightsmile: good job by the way!

Very well crafted, but you do have a mistake that I caught...

"She stood up, shook the
The dust "

The the mistake might be small, but should be fixed. :raritywink:

5089316
True. Probably didn't notice it in my rush to get all the lines to be about the same length. That was actually that hard part, not the acrostic. Also, I know you're not in charge of oneshotober, but where is this stuff all going? The same group?

5089337 I honestly have no idea. I'll let you know if I hear anything.

5089337
I was going to say, that neat right-hand margin is bloody incredible. That the story meanders as it does is quite forgivable considering the constraints.

Now, make it rhyme too. :trollestia:

5090043
That would be cruel and unusual punishment. Maybe something shorter than this, but certainly not 1200 words.

No words. This is just plain epic...

My god, I said epic and meant it. Time to use the poor man's amnesiac again!

THERES NO SUCH THING AS A STORY TOO BAD TO BE TOLD OR AN AUTHOR UNDESERVING OF PRAISE WE ARENT ALL GIFTED WITH THE SAME SKILL BUT ALL HAVE IDEAS WORTH SHARING

So True

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