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In the last desperate act, the sector V of the Kids next door fired the moonbase against Grandfather. But something unexpected happened, a giant portal was opened in the lab wing of the moonbase which sucks everything around it, grandfather included and got thrown into the world of equestria.
kinda lame description, but if you can help me with it. just send me a message.
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LOL no 1st for you
A crossover? With one of my favorite tv shows of all time? HELL YES I'M TRACKING!
Not being familiar with the entire KND storyline makes it hard to follow what is happening in the first part. Who is grandfather? Number 0? etc. The writing style isn't bad, but I was getting lost quite quickly.
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It's from the KND movie.
Number 0 is Number 1's dad, he started the KND.
Grandfather is Number 0's dad, who was evil but then turned normal, then got turned evil again.
416480 grand father is fathers... father who is basically the ultimate evil person and wants to make a ton of tapioca. (why? he's old.)
number zero is the best oprative ever and is number one's father and fathers brother. and also the son of grandfather.
if you have wached the show number zero is number 1's dad and grandfather is actually the father of number zero anyway the story is intresting to say the least but i dont think its fare to have the pony's owning the baddies from knd.
not sure if wantdash.ponychan.net/chan/files/src/132722756574.png
So, grandfather would be number minus one ?
416670 tis a little more complicated than that number zero was the origionator of the knd where as his father wanted the world to be ruled by adults and thats not even scraping the surface of the issue its complicated enough to give twi a headach
OK for those people who were confused
Grandfather = father of Monty "numbuh 0" Uno and Benedict "Father" Uno
Numbuh 0/monty uno= father of Nigel "Numbuh 1" Uno and the founder of the "7th Age of KND" which is the modern KND that we/i watched.
Father/ benedict uno= the younger brother of Monty "Numbuh 0" Uno and uncle of Nigel "Numbuh 1" Uno
Numbuh 1/ Nigel uno= Grandson of Grandfather, son of Monty "numbuh 0" Uno, uncle to Nigel "Numbuh 1" Uno
well there, i hope its not confusing. well the "UNO" family really have a confusing family line. I could add pictures for those who aint familiar with the KND (oh and you guys really should watch that, its the only cartoon that makes me want to become a child and join their organization
) just message me or comment here if you guys want me to add pics
KNDxMLP:FiM FTELW!!!!
445780 AWESOME. whens nubah one gunna wake up
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glad you like it.
i want to answer it but i can't, we dont want to spoil others now do we?
AWWWWW YYYEEEAAHHH!!! Here we go.
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LOL
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it's sir, and thank you
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now, you really did give me an idea ahaha
a) First Impression - Hmm.... It was an okay premise through.
b) Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation - This is okay.
c) Suggestions - Needs more description. What they look like, and stuff like that. A person who has never read the story wouldn't know what the cross over character is like. Yup.
keep writing, however ~
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will do, but still kinda busy with the other story lol
Really great idea, I do love the KND. But I do think you have done what I have done in some of my stories, accidentally. You've over-used the word 'said' etc when it doesn't need to be used.
Example: numbuh four was cut off by the shout of numbuh two
"Fire"shouted numbuh two
The problem is that you've already told us that Numbuh 2 is shouting so we don't really need to be told again.
However I think if you fix these minor problems you'll have a really ace story. Simply wizard (sorry very Enid Blyton phrase)
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dont worry bout it, been reading and learning alot more since I joined the group. I improved now, but procrastinating with the story lol. have ya read the other one?
KND...google.com/imgres?num=10&hl=en&safe=off&tbo=d&biw=1280&bih=923&tbm=isch&tbnid=psCl4jnT3wDk8M:&imgrefurl=http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/54998&docid=EgmPIOSlVVEt3M&imgurl=http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m27cspVHEo1r1qodgo2_1280.png&w=526&h=350&ei=RaGDUMFwjeyLAoOOgJAF&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=4&vpy=295&dur=614&hovh=183&hovw=275&tx=86&ty=68&sig=105502395924060492909&page=1&tbnh=141&tbnw=212&start=0&ndsp=34&ved=1t:429,r:6,s:0,i:93
YEEEEAAAAHHHH!!!!
y no updates
another chapter?
Please update and post another chapter. Wanna see Sector V storm Canterlot.
Kids Next Door: Battlestations!
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you've been whaching the show?
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every now and then i watch the show online just for the heck of it. Im wondering why 8-bit Bacon hasn't posted Operation: C.A.N.T.E.R.L.O.T when he says that its completed? does he need a beta reader to review it for him? if he does then i can do it since i have way too much spare time on my hands.
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Actually I do, editor too.. I don't want to post stories that is so bland that you'll actually think air has a taste.
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It can't be that bad. look, I'm currently filling out a proofreading form, so when I'm done, if you want me to look over the chapter for you to see what needs to be changed or improved I will. i will send you a PM if I have been accepted. okay?
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Sure no prob. It's my last week before vacation anyway, I can focus on the story and read some dictionaries/thesaurus (if possible) next week lol.
1821806
personally i like the show
1821806
what dose the code mean for operation C.A.N.T.E.R.L.O.T
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Children Attacks Near The Equestrian Royalties Land, Over Tactically.
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OK i get it,cool
i wonder when the next chapter will come out ?
it's been almost one yr, wean i get to see a new ch soon?
what is keeping the next chapter? give us some news.
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New story, I might release it at the same time I submit my new story, you can preread it if you want just send me a message
I like this. could use some more description at times, but not bad. just one thing:
Alt. line: we have the same numeral system
sorry, it just bugged me a little.
hmn...needs more descriptions. The links work, but maybe you should have put more descriptions in instead? Hmn...I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.
OH! P.S. Don't worry about the vocabulary. Its all about how the ideas come.
"A single item with multiple uses, is far better than multiple items all with the same use." -The inventor of the peanut.
ISA
Fuck YAA!!!
This is epic!!!
So, this is dead right?
i'm going to put this story in my read later list so when more chapters come in i'll know sooner(really hope this continues because their are really no stories about KND on here, i find this to be really disappointing because the show is really good, and hopefully add this story to my favorites)
416459 Well then, since this has apparantly gone the way of the dodo, might I humbly offer this to satisfy your KND cravings?
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/322782/codename-foals-next-door
2191860 If you don't mind, I wouldn't mind if you posted another.
In case you don't I've written my own KND crossover over here.