Lazy Afternoon

Big Macintosh and his human friend - a paraplegic named McAvoy - shoot the breeze in the barn one warm afternoon.

One-shot written as fluff for reasons of fluff.

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Ebony Gryphon

Ebony Gryphon #1 · May 31st, 2014 · 2 · ·

friendshipping at its finest. A little weird BM wanted to lay across his legs, but not enough to detract from the story as a whole

Jack Kellar

Jack Kellar #2 · May 31st, 2014 · 1 · ·

I see what you did there... and I love it

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Evil Paladin

Evil Paladin #3 · Dec 26th, 2015 · 1 · ·

This story could be the start of a shortish multi-chapter story. Though admittedly I'm not sure what the overarching plot could be, beyond just a series of events between them and McAvoy interactions with the rest of the town.

Though all in all, I liked the story. It's not often that the human in Equestria has a large physical flaw (aside from memory loss to the point where they don't remember their own name) and a desk job in Equestria.
I like that he was outside of the trend.

Though, you would think that McAvoy would be more bitter about the fact that Mac crippled him.
Regardless of being stuck behind a desk all day, losing the use of your legs is still a pretty massive thing to deal with emotionally and in regards to how one does everything from then on. Especially any activities in the bathroom.
Also going over non-paved terrain is tricky to do in a wheelchair.

Huh, I guess McAvoy showing up, getting crippled, dealing with it, and forgiving Mac could be the arching plot line for the multi-chapter.
Should you decide to go down that road.
It's still enjoyable as a one shot.

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