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Nice so far, but you mussed up an end italics tag

4425984 Thanks. I went in and fixed it.

4426012 midway on chapter three there seams to be another italics tag out of place [i/]

Okay. I just have to say that the preview pic from the main page? It looks like Ditzy has a giant dildo strapped to her head.

I'll be in my bunk.

Id really like a fanfic like this to touch upon the possibility of one not being sexually attracted to ponies. You can love a person, even romantically, but be drier than a desert when it comes to sex with them. Oh well.

I really liked this, it felt very genuine. :twilightsmile:

4426307 Darn you, what has been seen cannot be unseen.

I like it . Would love to see a follow up story:pinkiehappy:

The blonde pegasus mare trotted over to the table, a small white plate balanced on her head, and a pink one in her teeth, both topped with a freshly baked blueberry muffin. The pink one she placed in front of her daughter (who thanked her by giving her mother a big kiss on the cheek), and the white one, she slid onto the table in front of me.

this just feels like lazy writing to me.
it'd be better if you just wrote what they did, there's really no need for the parentheses.

EDIT: read the whole thing, glad you got rid if the parentheseseseseses.

Wow...this guy's a dick :ajbemused:

4426452 I honestly don't know why I didn't get rid of the parentheses; I knew they weren't needed yet I left them in. They're gone now.

You, i like it, write moar.

-Miyoyo

D'aaaaawwww...:fluttercry:

This story was nice, to say the very least. And I thing a sequel could be interesting. think about it, Sam's tries to get his life in order now that he's no longer just a friend to Derpy. but a mate as well, and also a father to Dinkey. Could be interesting, and a story I would definitely read...:twilightsheepish:

I, THE GREAT KING BRONYCUS, DEMAND THOU MAKETH A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY WITH A CUTENESS LEVEL OF OVER 9000...if thats ok with you.:twilightblush:

4426580 Nah, he's just stuck in ideas that aren't relevent any more is all Zam. He'll learn.

4427053 I, THE GREAT CREEPER CHEWED PENCIL, SECONDS THIS MOTION!

You have gained my attention. I am adding this to my favorites, and you have earned a follow.

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S'alright, I liked the whole shebang once I finished it.

Top work Mr Author ma man! :moustache:

4427218 Yeah it's interesting so far, and I really like that Ditzy in the mare in question. I allways felt the she should have a role that wasn't just comedy relief.

cute story:twilightsmile:

DINKY, FINALLY A DINKY STORY THAT IS NOT A EVERYONE :pinkiehappy::heart:

I think any of us would at least be a little hesitant, don't you think? I don't care how much of a fan you are, it would be very weird for a while at least.

Honestly though, I really liked how you made this more of a family building story and a clop. :twilightsmile:

made it 100 liks I feelz special:rainbowkiss:

4427611 THANK YOU!!! I was literally just looking at that 99 wondering when it would hit the big 1 double 0

beautiful! truly hart warming!! amazingly written!!! i love this story so much, wish there was more chapters to it!!!! i love these characters especially!!!!! thank you for sharing this story with us!!!!!! until next time.... PEACEEEE!!!!!!!

4426318 I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad you thought it sounded genuine; that's always my goal when I write these types of fics.

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I allways felt the she should have a role that wasn't just comedy relief.

That was my goal when writing Derpy. I'd written her for another fic, and I ended up making her a goofy, and comical, but I ended up getting criticized for it. With this one I wanted to make her realistic; clumsy, and a bit silly, without simply being comic relief.

4427580 I'm glad you liked it. I love these types of stories where the focus isn't on the clop, but on the development of the characters, and the story.

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You guys are lucky; while I hadn't initially planned to write a sequel for this story, I've actually been working out an idea for a sequel using a few scrapped ideas from this story. So sometime in the future, Sam, Derpy, and Dinky will return.

4428096 Huzzah! You have made my day good sir!

4427516 I KNOW!!! :pinkiehappy: Aside from Sweetie Belle (and sometimes Scootaloo), Dinky is my favorite filly, so I just had to include her in this story.

4428307 Dinky is best filly, other than CMC. :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

4428035 That's worth shooting for. I've been working towards the same.

DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

I'm really hoping for a good explanation of why Derpy disappeared for a week and left Dinky to think she had been abandoned.

Guess I'll just have to read the next chapter and hopefully find out. :pinkiehappy:

I don't like the sound of that! :pinkiegasp:

Comment posted by mcfarty deleted May 22nd, 2014

If it is an intelligent being capable of knowing right and wrong then what is to stop you? If it is a animal HELL NO it would be beastialty. Only if it is a sentient being do you DO it.If you know what I mean.:trollestia:

Comment posted by Dat monster hunting pony deleted May 22nd, 2014
Comment posted by Dat monster hunting pony deleted May 22nd, 2014
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