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Wow this was unlike any other Clop Fic. This was very good and I'm surprised it's not getting more reviews. Anyway this meets all the qualification and I'll be adding this to the "Clop" folder in Twilight's Library.
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-ish That's a bit of a lie; I'd be really happy if it did well, but there really isn't much I can do if it doesn't get that many reviews. 
. Thanks again for adding it to the folder 
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. This story's really my second attempt at writing clop, so as long as the up votes outnumber the down votes I'll be happy
Good job with the story, wasn't sure what to expect when I saw the pinkie pie tag but I knew your earlier soarin X fluttershy so I gave it a shot. Needless to say I was very pleased, build up was good and amazed me with a plot that wasn't just "needs sex uses closest person to relieve self" but actually kept the image of fluttershy with the thought of not wanting to cheat on soaring. Favorites and liked!
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Yeah, I tagged Pinkie because, although she is only in a small part of the story, she plays a large role (similar to Rarity's role in my last story). As for not having Fluttershy cheat on Soarin', the alternative was never an option for me, especially after a major plot point for my last story was Fluttershy being afraid that Soarin' was cheating on her. I know there are those out there who go that rout (and I'm sure it would make for an interesting story), but I just couldn't do that to them; it's not my style. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
You sure are shippin' it like Fed-Ex.
I've always like to think of Fluttershy as single. Otherwise, great fic.
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I could see that. My main reasons for shipping Fluttershy are a) because I like unusual ships (and what's more unusual than Fluttershy and, well, pretty much anypony), b) because I plan on writing at least one story for each of the mane 6 depicting each pony in a committed relationship (because those are the types of stories that I like), and c) because the first fic that I wrote for these two was based on this image and I wrote it thinking "for whom/why would Fluttershy be wearing something like this. And the rest is history
There may come a time where you must call upon the apostrophe to banish the ambiguity between pluralism and possessiveness. But this time is not that time.
2720559 I'm not entirely sure where in the story I used the apostrophe when I didn't need it (I use both plural and possessive quite a bit throughout the story), could you give me the context of this particular misuse?
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The sentence I quoted? Ctrl+F for "Stallion's that"
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. Anyway, thanks for pointing it out.
There we go, all fixed. The reason I couldn't find it before was because when I read it earlier, all I read was the quote "Stallion's" I didn't see anything other than that. But then, it was a little after 6 in the morning, and I'm not really great at fully comprehending things until after 7
Is it wierd that i was laughing while reading this
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If you enjoyed the story, then no, it isn't weird
Well it was a good
Oh my god! That's impossible! You did it again! You kept fluttershies innocence in tact! I bucking love you man!
I feel sorry for whoever ate the pie.
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And innocent is the only way I could ever depict Fluttershy, even when she's feeling aroused.
Awww, thank you
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Oh man, me too
, though, I know that that's how Pinkie Pie likes her snacks (at least, that's how she likes them in the fics I've read). lol, I could just imagine one of the ponies taking a bite of the pie and asking why it tastes funny.
wow, this was actually one of my favorites for clop-fics because Fluttershy is still in character and her sudden lust for sex is just the heat.
2934159 Yeah, I love Fluttershy's character too much to change it for the sake of a story like this. That's why I liked coming up with the concept for the "summer heat;" it gave me an excuse to write lusty Fluttershy, while at the same time maintaining her shy innocence. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
"the two ponies rutted LIKE ANIMALS"
Well, damn.
Even in Equestria, most stallions just want to rut. So... MacDash and RariLane, huh?
When are you going to do their stories? And don't worry, I've got your Tavi one open and ready to read!
3490541 I've certainly thought of doing a summer heat type story for each of the mane 6. I even have a set number of heats that each of them have gone through (Rarity: 3, Pinkie Pie: 2, Fluttershy: 1, and Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Twilight: 0) Actually I was planning on doing two for each pony: one cute and romantic (like my first fic), the other being a heat fic.
And honestly, I can't think of Fluttershy as being anything other than how she's portrayed on the show, even when she's being intimate. I tried my best to keep her as true to herself as possible.
I'm glad you liked the story.
3490846 well when you make more let me know... so far this is one of (if not the only one) of my favorite fanfics I've read in a long time! keep up the good work!
So I've been trying to do a bit of research regarding, well, clop, and I hadn't seen any really good fics for a while that really dictated heat like this. And honestly this is a spectacular reference guide for the one I'm writing. So I thank you, and give you one of these
3490846 hmm this is closest thing for Twilight Heat story from you
can there be one where he gets her pregnant?
When Fluttrshy talked to Pinkie, I expected a scene with Mr. Cake. Something like "entered the room, smelled the heat, tried his best to resist the temptation, then grabbed Mrs. Cake and dragged her to their bedroom".