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I like the Soarin x Applejack stories. Let's see how this one turns out.
Wait, am I first??? Huh...
Verdict: I thought it was cute in that "deep love" sort of way. Bravo man.
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This pleases me.
even if I like SoarinDash more, this is good
Short, but sweet. I really enjoyed this story.
Hey what is the spoons position, because I has no idea.
Cute and to the point. I like it.
I have not read the story yet but I had to comment.... 15 up votes with no down votes..... how do you do it o wise one.
Is that possible?
Well he is a Wonderbolt and all they ever do is train so he probably has enough strength and stamina to keep them both aloft... but does he have the will power and concentration required...
lets find out.
That answers that question... great story, cant wait for 'next time' if that was a hint to your next story.
Bravo, 20 up votes now and still no down votes.... you know how to write a great story it seems.
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This should tell you everything. Nothing dirty in picture.
1883881 Thankies.
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Very interesting! very enjoyable!!
For your very first clopfic I say bravo and well done Hope to see more stories and maybe a sequel to this.
Well, that was actually pretty good. I don't really read SoarinJack (or whatever it's called) but you seem to have done it pretty well.
There were a couple of errors, grammatically, but that's to be expected from a new writer. Just make sure you proofread your story after, and even during, writing it.
I could mention things like characterization, making sure the story fits the characters and not the characters being bent to the story, but they aren't really issues in shorter stories like this, and you'll most likely get better at that over time anyway.
But at the end of the day, it was a good story. You've got a like from me.
(You also get bonus points for actually doing a good job with the clop part).
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It's a way of cuddling. In it's use in the story, Applejack has her back to Soarin's front and they are both lying on their sides.
Present tense is called spooning
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Thank you. If you want to read more SoarinJack, Jujubeland has a few of them
Not bad!
There is one thing, but it's more a thought than a problem, so I'll take it private.
Hi
IT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!
i am able to SEE WHAT I READ IN MY MIND,SO I GET AN EXPERIENCE OF THE ACTION
Thumbs up! That was really romantic.
Hey. This is a late response, but I really enjoyed this story. I have found some glaring typos that you might want to fix, however:
"to" should be "too".
"if" should be "of".
Once again, thanks for this story.
This site needs most straight married clop. MOAR I SAY!
Fucking loved it!