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JujubeLand
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Lol this isn't bad at all. I like it a lot!!! ^-^
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Pretty good for 60 minutes!
The odd balance between adorable and cloppy? *shrug* Meh, it works.
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Another great story!
There just isn't nearly enough AJ x Soarin fics out there, be it innocent or cloppy.
1637668>>1637696>>1637711 Thanks for the positive feedback, y'all!
1637909 I agree, which is why I'm doing my part to contribute to that pool. Have you read my other two stories featuring them?
1638426 Ee-yup
Both of them were already among my favourites, and I'm looking forward to more!
Ooh, yay a new Soarinjack clop.
Edit: Short and sweet, but still good.
I love this pairing.
1639151 I know, right? SoarinJack is quickly becoming my OTP; they're just so adorable, and incredibly fun to write!
Thanks for the read!
Hot hot hot! I'm a sucker for AJ stories.
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Just read all three stories tonight with this pairing (had already sort of with the first two in prior weeks/months and skimmed this one in last couple days or so), and have to say it's interesting how you got this from one moment between them at the Gala. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Soarin_dayum.png
First was lengthy, but definitely cute and naughty, finding caring but silly Soarin' with proud and honest Applejack. Loved that whole one and how sweet it seemed to be. While these other two may not be in same continuity necessarily (as far as events and such), both were still interesting in ways of keeping the passion alive. Though this one unlike the two, didn't seem to strike with me like your last story.
Despite the fact that contained tickling (a fetish I don't particularly care for, a friend of mine off-site who does it a bit to mess with), I kept an open mind and liked it and even did green thumb it. Dunno if ran short on time and had to cut down on the detail of sex that normally do, even in some of your shorter stories like the other Sexty Minute Ponies prompts and even if did help myself thanks to your um, other saucy stories revolving around this couple, did seem kinda short when they had just started copulating and then next paragraph, had all but finished up. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png But overall, just seemed like was not as good as could be? Even if it was on a time limit and couldn't go without focusing on the main point of this prompt, which I saw was "that special spot". Well, while short and not again among my faves of yours that've read dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy_umad.png , was definitely an enjoyable read. 
Definitely would love to see stories for how the other couples mentioned in Lunch Break got together, since one or two of those have yet to be explained, at least of the ones have seen you write, Jujube. And hope to continue to see you possibly churn out other stories quickly like this one was, after the last one was finished and submitted! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_bedroomeyes.png
1656511 You're right that this one didn't have quite the same amount of detail in regards to the actual sex, but I don't see that as a bad thing. With this one, I wanted to focus more on their sensitive spots and how it brought them closer together, and with the time limit, I had to cut short their copulation a bit. This one was meant to be a bit more fun than the other two while still having some sexy times. Sometimes, I find it helpful to not focus quite as much on the sex and more on the story. Even if this one wasn't quite your favorite, I still appreciate the feedback.
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And curious what else you might do with this couple or others, that's canon or not with their relationships.
Well, I guess I can see how that makes sense, even though again, didn't quite enjoy this as much as the other two had read last night by you with this same couple, exploring relationship out of ONE moment of interaction with one another and their future. Nothing against Soarin's weak spot of being ticklish, or the lack of sex (which I did sorta nitpick about as well in last story, if you recall, even though understood that one was about Shining's pregnancy fetish moreso), but just didn't, even though I'm not a hard to please guy. But... can't say why this time either, that I liked it but didn't LOVE it as with most of your other amazing works have read so far (still have a few been meaning to). dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png I haven't given up on your stories though and I'm still looking forward to seeing what other stories you can write, Sexty Minute Ponies prompt or otherwise!
This fic is adorable. definitely a fav!
1672732 Thanks! If you're interested or haven't done so already, feel free to check out my other two fics featuring AJ and Soarin: Lunch Break (another short clop piece) and Where Earth and Sky Meet (a slightly longer story that still features some sexy lovin').
1672772 I read Where Earth and Sky Meet, one of my favorites! Didn't realize it was the same author! :D
1672826 Heh, guilty as charged. Soarin x Applejack has certainly claimed a position as my OTP.
Very fond of this pairing, and while it's not my OTP it's high on my list.
Aye, I agree with the Guy Above me here, Even though its not my favorite This is still good story
Well, this certainly is a rare shipping pair. I really liked that. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. Keep up the great writing!
2583679 Thanks for the comment and fave! Have you checked out my other two stories featuring these two? You may enjoy those as well. Feel free to browse my library of earlier fics as well!
This was quite cute!
2688776 Thanks for the fave and comment! If you haven't already, feel free to check out my other two SoarinJack stories. In my opinion, they're equally as cute!
Why is this pairing so popular?
And why do I like it so much?
This story is awesome and adorable. Perfect amounts of sexy, romantic and cuteness.
Also, 'curled-up pile of Wonderbolt'. I had a little giggle at that.
'Curled up pile of wonderbolt'
Best! Line! Ever!!!!
>It had started as a fairly standard night- and no amount of begging or pleading was going to stop her.
exposition that could have been described in detail, or "present time" so we become more immersed with the story
>made out
layman's terms. It's better describe physical actions rather than general terms in hopes that the reader will "get the idea"
I really like the ear biting stuff. Gentle nurturing (but nonetheless erotic) foreplay is one of my kinks.
>aj came first
disappointing. The sex scene lasted all of two paragraphs (one describing soarin's erection, and the other describing thrusting and climax).
This is cute as heck. :D