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JujubeLand


Behold! I bring you the written word! ...That is all.

Comments ( 31 )

My mind races. “You mean that after that first day, you...you weren't in heat any more?”

My first thought was "Oooohhh shit! She's pregnant!".

Nice quick story! I like it. Thumbs up! :moustache:

It was really good, just like the first one.
Plus I haven't seen many ships with Cherry Jubilee etheir.

1204021 Heh, nice. Interesting idea, though.

1204029 Thanks again!

1204996 It's true, you don't see too many. I find that surprising and a little disappointing, so I guess that this and Sweet and Sticky are my way of trying to compensate for that deficit. Thanks for the read!

I've actually wrote something very similar to your original only with Applejack. I really like this and that one, both are wonderfully written.. you have a real good skill with building up the characters and emotions. You Rock!:yay:

1205237 no problem:twilightsmile:
Thank you for the story

You need to stop what you're doing and write more Cherry/Caramel damnit!

1205647 Thank you so much for all the positive feedback!

1207526 Yeah...I'll get right on that. In actuality, I'm probably going to be spending more time working on the story on my other account, as I've put it off for far too long. But fear not! I'll still be doing the Sexty Minute Ponies prompts, and if they're any good, I'll post 'em up here.

Cherry and Caramel? Sounds like a delicious pie to me.
Damn. Now I'm Hot 'n Bothered and Hungry too. I hope your happy.

XD my OC is Caramel and Cherry's daughter. You haz inspired me! :pinkiehappy:

1209750 You're welcome. Glad you enjoyed it!

1209949 That is awesome! Nice to hear that my little story's inspiring creativity in others. Thanks for the read!

Ooh, read BOTH stories tonight featuring this... couple. Been meaning to for a while, at least with the first one. First one was interesting, capturing the emotions and feelings of Caramel that you gave him over the course of the story from his actions and moments in the show, as well as his feelings for Cherry Jubilee as his boss and such, compared to his girlfriend in the Hearts and Hooves Day one.

This one, while shorter and somewhat less dirty (for obvious reasons), was just as good, if not better! Since really followed up that other one with Caramel's feelings after their little tryst quite well IMO, and was quite cute and naughty at the same time. Not sure if could ask about this other story on other account, even if it's not quite as naughty as all of your works have been to date (can note me, if it's supposed to be a secret for most part). As I've sorta liked a majority of your works (the ones read so far anyways or meant to), in execution and idea, not just for the clop. :pinkiehappy:

Look forward to future works, regardless of whatever pairing it may be!

1210803 Thank you very much!

1212306 This is the part where I would post a picture of some mustachioed man holding a cigarette with a deranged look in his eyes. Thanks!

1204021 Damn, I thought I was the only one who thought that!

1290526 Dang straight. Poor guy deserved it.

Going from losing the grass seed every year and being used by Rarity as free labor to being in a relationship with the owner of a large and successful plantation, you the man Caramel!

Nice stories.:twilightsmile:

2374606 Don't you mean, "you the stallion?" :trollestia:

Anyway, thanks for the read and positive comments! Have you read the follow-up story yet? If not, here's the link: Heating Up.

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I think I mentioned storiesss (note the plural) and they were both great. Nice to see clop fics that go along with my "plot" philosophy; you need both kinds to be good.

2375254 The plural was duly noted; I just wasn't sure if it was in reference to the sequel or to the rest of my works. And thank you again! Any sort of erotic fiction should have a strong, supporting story; otherwise, the sex itself feels incredibly hollow and pointless, and that's never good.

2375262

True, it does seem less without some kind of developed emotion behind it all. Simply put, you need gratuitous amounts of both kinds of well rounded plots.:moustache:

2375285 I see what you did there. :trollestia::moustache:

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Yeah, you know, plots could mean both the story kind and a ponies..flank...and stuff......yeah I'm hilarious.

Just saying that, even after reading both this and the fic that inspired it, that I am surprised that this has yet to get a sequel of sorts. You are already quite proficient in portraying preggers sex, and that does seem like a reasonable start-off point.

Anyway, enjoyed the fic. Have a +1.

2851766 Thanks! Glad you liked the story. As to the lack of follow-up, it's honestly been a while since I've thought about where Caramel and Cherry's story is going. Maybe at some point I'll pick it back up, maybe I won't. I know you hate to hear it, but you'll just have to wait and see. :raritywink: Anyway, thanks again for the kind words, and enjoy the rest of my stories if you like!

You are aware her character tag is available. . . .right? :unsuresweetie:

4230749 It wasn't at the time I posted the story, but now that's been rectified.

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