ReaperofSouls42
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Kinda ish you used the name Ditzy Doo, and not derpy, but oh well.
1951462 I personally like Derpy Hooves over Ditzy Doo. But its personal preference I suppose.
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That is true. Though both names could be used. Ditzy "Derpy" Doo Hooves. Derpy makes a better nickname then a real name.
1951578 I do like that idea. But I just stuck with Derpy. Its cute and shows her silly goofy side. I don't view the name as some others seeing it as the writer depicts her as stupid ect. I tried to just make her goofy and clumsy while giving her her own unique intelligence. But I am sure most won't see it like that.
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That is if some want to over analyze her name, and why you chose it.
Me, I just don't like that name for her. Since the start. I just like Ditzy Doo better.
Awesome my brother, not one for HIE or second person but it's Derpy so I'm 100 percent down. Don't mind that they wear clothes but do they have hands or hooves?
1951609 That's why I like your critiques. you can analyze well and not read to deep into anything. makes conversing with you fun when you want a debate and or just to do so.
1951620 Hands. and Hooves for feet.
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Thank you. I found the few debates I got in with you fun as well.
Though it is funny. Sometimes i do think that I over analyze some things.
I am going to read the rest of the chapter tomorrow, so I will leave some reviews then.
Good night.
I like where this is going. Seems like one of those cute, fun reads.
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1951731That was the plan.
Thank you!
Ah, I see it's been posted!
Splendid! Well, time to get to reading, looks like I'm going to be here a while. 
1951799 Haha Don't be afraid to give critique's, my friend.
dawwwwww its so cute
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your avatar...Lol Thanks, I was going for cute.
i....i think im tearing up
1951886...good tears or bad tears?
Ok, I'm still confused. Do they have hooves or hands? Great story, very cute.
1951920 Anthrop = Hands and then hooves for feet. In my personal opinion. Thanks!
Good start, never thought an anthro pony story could work so well but this is decently executed.
1952009 Thanks for the complement my friend.
1951920 Hooves for feet, hands for hands.
Oh dear Reaper, you do have a talent for erotica.
1952100
Well I am glad you enjoyed it.
1952103 And if for nothing but to not seem shallow, the rest of the story was very good as well. Had you gone from the admission scene to a PG, 'happily ever after' ending I'd have not been the least bit disappointed.
I guess I'm saying the clop, was just the cherry on top.
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That is exactly how I wanted it to seem since It could end at chapter 4 if you didn't want to read the clop scene.
Anthro ponies???
But I like pony ponies! 
Excellent work once again! You've crafted quite the story here! Now, I'm not going to say it's a masterpiece but you've done pretty well regardless. The story had its quirks but nothing too major. Definitely a more sensual fic than last time around, I like that we got to see the relationship develop in this story. Not much else I can say. I'm a bit out of it at the moment but if you'd like I can read back through the chapters and identify any spelling/grammatical/punctuation mistakes. After I'm done resting, of course.
Not particularly necessary but the offer remains. 
God damn! Great story, definitely reading this again!
That...was...best....story....EVER.
That picture.... has KNEEEEEEES!!!
Death to anthros, burn in righteous fire!
1952273 Sorry you disapprove.
1952387 Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the read. you can do whatever you want if you wish it. I don't mind either way.
1952424 I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!
1952536 Thanks for the complement! I appreciate it.
1952811 Anthropomorphics will be around forever! You could never burn them to nothing!
1952974 INFIDEL DIE!
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You are a funny person.
This.......Is.........Very nice actually! Good work man!
Moar please....
Very lovley, and beautiful. Plus he kicked a*s.
A very lovley story.
Though, there were a few parts where quatation marks was missing from dialog, and actions had quatation marks. Still a good read.
another outstanding story by an outstanding author, keep up the great work
ALL OF MY YES.
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Very cute, loving it so far. Just curious though, do you have an editor or pre-reader? There are several sentences that start or end with quotations, minor things but cleaning them up would help with the flow of the reading. One other thing I caught
I'm thinking you mean 'bridal' style like how a groom would carry his bride correct? A 'bridle' is what goes over a horse's head that the reins attach to.
1955498 Yes and no. unstable proofer to be accurate. However, I released this one without help on purpose because I needed to see if I really am getting an better at writing from my first fic and I am. And yes, yes I did mean bridal....
cannot believe I did that..Lol!
I am glad you enjoyed it despite its obvious flaws though. Thank you for taking the time to catch all that.
Should be 'hostile'.
Still looking very good though, now onward to confessions!
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Looking forward to more from you, should you need any editing assistance in the future feel free to drop me a tell.
So much yes to be found with this story as a whole. Adorable and comical in the right places. Small grammatical mistakes did not detract from a great read. You have earned yourself a new stalker good author so prepare yourself.
1957098 I know, I'm horrible.
I couldn't stop laughing for a good five minutes for some reason... I believe you meant "Tsk, I won't forget this and you will pay for it!"
1957296 Lol wow, thanks you for catching that.
That might be funnier then the actual comedy scenes I wrote.
I love it but sadly. I'm still unable to add anything to favorites and I don't know why.
1957331 If your using Msn, that's why.
.... Awesome. The clop was just the icing on the cake by this point. Props man.
Awesome chapter. I read more tomorrow.